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| Member Join Date: Sep 2009 Location: two feet away from you Posts: 172
Rep Power: 1 ![]() Level: EXP: | Preface Renji and Rukia grew up together and fell in love. This story is a bout what happened to them after they graduated from the academy. This may be related to what has happened to you or may happen to you but the story may surprise you. Chapter 1 I Know Pronounce You… “Renji, are you ready. We have to go,” shouted Rukia. “Yeah, I’m ready “ The music started and Rukia walked down the long path. She stopped at the alter and kissed her dad. She went to Renji and laid her head on his shoulder. “We gather here on this day…”said the priest. As the priest continued Rukia stared into Renji’s eyes and felt his aura. He was afraid, he knew that they were madly in love, but did she want what he wanted. “I know pronounce you husband and wife. You may kiss the bride.” Announced the priest. As Renji and Rukia kissed Rukia wondered what did he want. When they had gotten to their hotel room immediately they began to mate. When Rukia woke up the next morning she felt awful and icky in her stomach. Then she blew chunks. She had an idea. She went to her bag and ruffled through the thing and found it. She opened the box and tested. Last edited by 13courtgarud75; September 16th, 2009 at 02:22 AM. |
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| Beauty Blooms in all Forms Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: somewhere getting distracted =P Age: 17 Posts: 1,746
Rep Power: 3 ![]() ![]() Level: 30 EXP: | i was like awwwwww, then ewwwwww lol its good reggie cant wait for more :) |
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| Organization Member Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: Inside Kingdom Hearts Age: 16 Posts: 738
Rep Power: 1 ![]() Level: EXP: | BLEACH!!!! =D Third favorite Bleach pairing (IchiHime and IchiSenna beat this one out, sorry) Great job! =D |
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| Certified Brown Belt. Join Date: Dec 2008 Location: Does it matter?? Age: 14 Posts: 1,161
Rep Power: 2 ![]() Level: 13 EXP: | Bleach? Hm....you need to update me on that....Im not that familiar with bleach and its very good, although you should make chapters a bit longer. |
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| Member Join Date: Sep 2009 Location: two feet away from you Posts: 172
Rep Power: 1 ![]() Level: EXP: | Chapter 2 OMFG “Renji, Renji wake up!” exclaimed Rukia. Rukia took Renji to the restroom sink and he saw five pregnancy tests. Renji couldn’t believe it, he was a soon to be father. “Renji, hello, is anyone in there?” asked Rukia. Renji had a premonition of the future. “ Huh, Ummm Yeah.” “Renji I’m gonna go see Ichigo in down town Kurakara town.” “WHAT?!” shouted Ichigo. Rukia looked into his eyes and saw what question was coming next. “Ho…” Ichigo was cut off by Rukia. “Well we were so happy last night so…” Ichigo pieced the pieces together and figured it out.”EWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW. I didn’t need to know that.” “Well…” “I’m happy for you and Renji,” stated Ichigo. “You and Renji will be great parents.” “OH, UM, Ichigo can Renji and I stay here tonight. We got kicked out of our hotel for Shouting and breaking furniture.” “WHAT!? You and he were only there for a day…OHHH I get it. Last Night.” As soon as Rukia kissed Ichigo on the check, she heard a faint shouting grow louder and louder. “RUUUUKIAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!” As soon as that was over the door flew open and Ichigo’s father was standing there in his towel with his hair all soupy. “You,” he pointed to Ichigo,”Excuse me Rukia…” Rukia covered her ears and heard nothing but muffled voices shouting vial words. “… Thank you for telling me she was here. Rukia can I get you anything. Water, Sake, my di…” “Dad she’s married now!” “Oh…” Ichigo’s dad ran away flaying his arms and tears falling down his checks. “Well I’m going to go talk with Orehime.” “OH MY GOODNESS! You have a bun in the oven.” Orehime flew around Rukia’s body wondering when her belly will fill up and look like it’s gonna pop. “Does Ichigo know? I’m going to call him. Where’s my phone? Where is it.”Orehime sakes Rukia until she hears the phone ring. “Ohh there it is. HMMMMM oh its Ishida.” “Orehime have you had a chocolate bar today.” “Ummmmmm,” ,Orehime’s eye twitches,”Only 26, its not as much as yesterday. That was 72.” “Okay, well…” Rukia backs away, “I’ll see you tomorrow” Rukia runs out of the house in less than two seconds. Last edited by 13courtgarud75; September 23rd, 2009 at 12:48 AM. |
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| Beauty Blooms in all Forms Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: somewhere getting distracted =P Age: 17 Posts: 1,746
Rep Power: 3 ![]() ![]() Level: 30 EXP: | ha that was funny |
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| Member Join Date: Sep 2009 Location: two feet away from you Posts: 172
Rep Power: 1 ![]() Level: EXP: | lol. yea i know. hahahaha |
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| Beauty Blooms in all Forms Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: somewhere getting distracted =P Age: 17 Posts: 1,746
Rep Power: 3 ![]() ![]() Level: 30 EXP: | and O_o Too much information!!! |
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| Member Join Date: Sep 2009 Location: two feet away from you Posts: 172
Rep Power: 1 ![]() Level: EXP: | lol. its to make it seem more real. |
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| Member Join Date: Sep 2009 Location: two feet away from you Posts: 172
Rep Power: 1 ![]() Level: EXP: | New chapter up tommorow guys!!!! |
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| Member Join Date: Sep 2009 Location: two feet away from you Posts: 172
Rep Power: 1 ![]() Level: EXP: | Chapter Three Help…p..p.pp Rukia ran into the house failing to see that Renji’s motorcycle wasn’t there. “Renji, “Rukia shouted, ”Renji, are you here?” Faster than the speed of light Rukia whipped out here phone and dialed Toshiro’s number. “Captain Hitsugiya,” Rukia bowed out of respect, “Have you seen Renji? I can’t find him any where in the world of the living.” “NO… I’m sorry I haven’t seen him.” Replied Toshiro. Tears started to fall down Rukia’s cheeks. Toshiro heard her silent weeping and then, the line went dead. “What the hell is your problem!!” Toshiro shouted to Renji. Renji had run away and hide in the Soul society.”I…just…can’t be there now.”Renji tried not to cry and failed. “Your making her feel so much pain because you weren’t man enough to keep it in your pants a little longer.” Toshiro had started yelling at the top of his lungs. “Hey shut up in there.” Rongiku ,Toshiro’s vice-captain, shouted from the other room. Toshiro pulled Renji’s long red hair to where Renji and Toshiro, a small young boy, were eye to eye. With Renji being tall his neck started to hurt during Toshiro’s speech, which he had started a while ago. “Why the hell did you leave a young pregnant woman alone.” Toshiro smacked Renji across the face, ”Are you listening?!” Renji didn’t answer. A senci-mon, a spiritual gate between worlds, opened behind Renji and Toshiro pushed him in it. “I can’t find him anywhere.”Rukia, a short black haired girl, told Rongiku ,a tall brunet. “Well Renji’s being a typical man.”In the background Rongiku shouted for one of the members of the graud to strip down for “inspection”. “Okay…Well if you see Renji please tell him I’m looking for him. I need to ta…” Rukia grunted from a pain she felt in her stomach, and worried about the baby. Rukia disconnected the phone as she fell to the ground. |
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| Certified Brown Belt. Join Date: Dec 2008 Location: Does it matter?? Age: 14 Posts: 1,161
Rep Power: 2 ![]() Level: 13 EXP: | *long gasp* I have no idea whats going on but it sounds interesting. Write! PS: Put a bit more detail into it. |
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| Beauty Blooms in all Forms Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: somewhere getting distracted =P Age: 17 Posts: 1,746
Rep Power: 3 ![]() ![]() Level: 30 EXP: | *super long gasp* lol yeah what bell said....its getting interesting |
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| Rion is blindfolded kinkyness | Um, well the pregnancy thing was a bit rushed if you ask me :/ Work on detail and spacing of paragraphs like making a new paragraph whenever someone speaks like this: "Hi!" She said. "Hola!" He replied. Not hard to do plus it makes the text easier to read. |
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| Member Join Date: Sep 2009 Location: two feet away from you Posts: 172
Rep Power: 1 ![]() Level: EXP: | k i guess thanx for de coments. gasp your self lol. and yea the pregnancy was rushed cause somting special is gonna happen later. |
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