Organization Omega

[Allister Rose]

well the story wills tart off without explanation, so i'll do most of the explaining before the story starts.

the story lies between BBS-Kh1.

it mainly revolves around Marluxia's new organization.

marluxia finds and hides new possible organization members and makes them as one of his own. He then starts to use them, for one day when they are strong enough, go against xemnas (he originally planned to give them as a present to xemnas for his rank could improve)

he uses axel and vexen and tricks them by saying the new organization members are on a different branch and that vexen and axel are assigned by xemnas to keep watch on them AND to not reveal this other members, including xemnas (since he told them that marluxia will be the only one to report to xemnas about the new organization)

The members are

Marluxia: I

Larxene: II

Rudimix: III

Vexen: IV

Xenka: V

Axel: VI

Lestraxil: VII

Rudimix:

original name is Ridium, a character created from Iridium from KHI, his attribute is sound. He is a smart and has a normal personality. He has Black hair green eyes and tan skin. When enraged his hair and eyes change to dark red. He is most respected in the organization next Marluxia and Larxene. His weapon is a green bow and is able to summon as many arrows as he wants. when enraged he is able to split the bow in half and become two red dueling swords.

Xenka:

original name is Kane. a character created by Saix from KHI, His attribute is Stars. He has orange hair and has a mix of axel's mullet with Roxas' bangs. He is terribly rude and likes to pick on the newest members of the organization: He remains neither disrespected or respected in the organization. His weapon is a staff with a Star charm on top.

Lestraxil:

Original name is Allister, created by the author of organization omega, her attribute is darkness. She was once a complete emotion-less person who was never phased by Xenka's taunts, suddenly she becomes a person with full of emotion for reasons unknown. She has green short hair with red eyes, blushes most of the time and tries to hide her emotions. Her weapon is a Black and purple Whip. She is able to summon more whips as long as the main whip is in her hand.

Spoilers

Xindro:

Original name is Ordin, Created by Way To Twilight (now known as Chaos) from KHI, his attribute is crystal. A fairly new recruit who very lazy and doesn't care about anyone at first glance. He is actually a person who cares very much but does not want his fellow members to know that certain trait about him. He sits very casually (almost too casually) and sigh a lot. He has black hair and gold eyes. His weapon is a two katana blades to form a double edge sword.

Nallidex:

Original name is Danielle, created by Phoenix of KHI, her attribute is thought itself. A farely new recruit right after Xindro. She is very mysterious and loves to torture people with her ability to read thought and get inside. She is the least respected member out of all other members. Her weapon is a double-sided poison thistleflower which can extend. ( a weapon similar to Renji's from Bleach but cannot curve. It looks similar to a normal double edge word)

[HeartOfTheHero]

I like this idea, it's got some good potential.
Where's the first chapter?? I want to start reading it!

[Allister Rose]

PROLOGUE

destroy heartless, again and again, that's all i do, well, ever since i joined master marluxia anyways......its strange all he ever does is give me and the other members orders like to destroy heartless and to find more members... And for some reason....i dont care what he tells me, i just follow them.....its strange, i dont know what i am, i dont remember what exactly happened to me to become like this. All i know is that i need to follow marluxia's orders. but why am i doing this?

I have memories of myself living in a small town and living happily. The next day the sky becomes dark and i fall in this completely different town. That was also the day marluxia found me and made me join his organization and changed my name. I dont even remember my name, all i know is my new name, lestraxil.

of course i'm not the only one in is organization.....there is xenka who seems to be very rude and offensive and Rumidix who hardly talks to any of us. There's also larxene a girl who thinks everything is a game and Vexen who wants to experiment on everyone and everything around him. These members, like me, dont really care if we are marluxia's pawn. We just live on and try to satisfy marluxia's wishes. But lately for some reason, i want to know why marluxia needs us so much. I want to know what he is trying to do and why we exist. this question also leads me to ask the real important question.....Who and what are we?

sorry...i know these few paragraphs sound horrible, so i'll try to edit them and also, i know this isnt long, but i will make it a bit longer

[HeartOfTheHero]

not bad, it's a good start, and it doesn't sound horrible. and the length is fine, since it's just the prologue

[Cinollex]

Decent, so far.
Just remember to capitalize. It's a nitpick, but still.

[Allister Rose]

oh ok! that's good, i'll definitely work on it more.

[Azrael]

Did you get inspiration from my RP?

[Allister Rose]

Originally Posted by Sa'id

Did you get inspiration from my RP?

is organizatoin XV you rp? actually i had the idea, it was small, but when i read the first too paragraphs of the fanfic of organization XV i really inspired me to work on it. so i change the plot to be a bit more reasonable.

if Orgniazation Xv is your Rp, than yes, you deserve the credit for inspiring me to work on my fanfic.

i'm working on the fanfic right now on microsoft work and then i'll just paste it here so the forums wont log me out so quick. hope you become a regular!

[Allister Rose]

CHAPTER I
World: The world that never was
Home: Memory Skyscraper
Xenka: Hey! Lestraxil! Master Marluxia wants to speak with you! You probably did something stupid to get him mad.

Lestraxil:Be quiet Xenka your words don’t work on me, I don’t feel anything remember? So its useless for you to do try to shows feelings toward me. “

Xenka:“Can you be quiet and go? Honestly you talk too much. And I can act however I want, remember that I’m number 5 and your number 7, that means I have authority over you. So get going!”

Lestraxil:“Honestly Xenka, you’re the one who is talks the most…”

Xenka“Don’t force me use my Staff on you!!!”

Rudimix:“Hey! Lestraxil master marluxia ordered you to go see him, and you Xenka, stop shouting please…Cant you two ever get along? At least stop arguing, you two always make such heavy noise around here. Marluxia has ordered us to keep our voices or else he will give us the capital punishment.”

Lestraxil:“Fine, I’ll go see master Marluxia. Next time Xenka, Rudimix won’t be here to stop me….”

Xenka:“What was that!?”

Lestraxil:“Oh nothing, nothing, I really need to see master right now; I’ll end this when I get back. “

Finally I can stop arguing with Xenka and see what master Marluxia wants to see me about. AS much as i hate to admit it, but Xenka is right. Usually master Marluxia punishes us with a dual when we do something bad. Not only that but he also tries to tell us that is coming by meeting with him alone. But what did I do? I followed Master Marluxia’s orders exactly the way he told me. Did I mess up? I must have forgotten some important detail and now I’m going to be punished by his really painful scythe. I never once felt that scythe before, and the way Xenka describes it, I really don’t want to feel it any time soon. This is strange….I’m feeling scared….and only for a little punishment……Usually I don’t feel anything, but lately I have been feeling all sorts of things that I’m not use to….wait…is master Marluxia going to punish me because I’ve been feeling these emotions lately? That must be it….Maybe he can fix me….Of course punishment first….but it might just be worth it.

Marluxia:“Lestraxil, what’s wrong, aren’t you coming into my room?”

I was too distracted that i just passed marluxia's room. Why am i like this? i need to focus.

Lestraxil:“Uh, yes Master Marluxia I’ll be there right away.”

As I enter in his room, I noticed that he just sat down and started to smell the rose sitting on his table. He didn’t look angry at all. If I’m not here to be punished….than what am I here for?

Marluxia:“Lestraxil, lately you and you other members have been acting a little different than usual. Is everything alright with you and the other member? I hope Xenka isn’t getting to you too often now.”

Lestraxil:“Uh! No! No, it’s not like that at all, master Marluxia.”

Marluxia:“Then what is going on Lestraxil, out of all the members you seem to be distracted the most. Your completing you misions well and you seem to look the other way when others are talking to you.

Great, He’s asking me what the problem with me is. Should I just confess to him that I have been feeling emotions? So far he hasn’t punished me yet….and well, there’s a first time for everything. I guess it wouldn’t hurt to confess right now….

Lestraxil:“The truth is…I’ve been feeling these emotions lately…..Today I felt scared of coming here And the other day I felt happy that the Mission you gave me ended with time to spare….I Don’t know what’s going on And for some reason, I’ve been thinking these thoughts on who I am, what I am, and why I even exist. I know you gave us a purpose here but lately I have forgotten why I Do this for you, Master Marluxia. Can you please, give me the answer to these questions, Master Marluxia?”

Marluxia:“I was afraid of this Lestraxil…I’m sorry for everything….”

Oh no, is he going to get rid of me? I should’ve expected. I said too much and the top of that I disrespected Master Marluxia. He’s getting up from his seat and walking towards me. I should have seen this, so why did I say all that? Why couldn’t I just keep my mouth shut!? I should have kept it to myself. I can see him now, opening his arms, waiting to summon his Scythe. I’m too scared of what’s going to happen that I can’t keep my eyes open….please Master Marluxia….please make it quick.

Marluxia:“Why are you so afraid Lestraxil? I only came up to you to give you a hug.”

Lestraxil:“Uh…a-a hug?”

He then puts his arms around me and grips onto me. This feeling….it feels familiar. But for some reason I can’t remember when I felt this….he being gentle...for some reason i'm getting this warm feeling from him. this warmth that i'm getting from him is making me cry. I couldn’t say anything, this warmth is too voerwhelming but at the same time i dont want it to go away. I feel so wrong for judging Master Marluxia. He wasn’t going to hurt me at all.... he was just worried.

Marluxia:“They call ‘this’ a hug, when you wrap your arms around another person. It gives you a warm feeling doesn’t it, Lestraxil? Please forgive me; sending you to my room alone that is. I should have known you would react like this. Seeing your reaction today made me understand the situation....So tomorrow I will reveal something important to all of you, It will help you cope with these emotions that you have been feeling recently.”

And that was it, He came up to me to give me comfort. He wasn’t going to punish me or destroy me; He wanted to help me. I’m glad..That Master Marluxia is leading me….

Marluxia:Lestraxil, i want to give you this. It's a very special collar. This collar can surpress the emotions so it wont interfere with you work in the organization and it wont affect youe thinking.

These new feelings i'm having for marluxia...it feels similar to what i was feeling before....but now it's stronger...Master marluxia right now wants to help me with these emotions, so i should just acccept it. I cant let these emotions affect my thinking. I accepted the collar and placed it on my neck. The moment i put it on, the meotions slowly left from my mind. I can still feel them, but not as much as before.

Marluxia:“You look good, Lestraxil. Accept it more as a gift to you from me, more than a tool to help you with your emotions, ok?
“
Lestraxil:Ok, Master Marluxia.”

Master Marluxia then goes up to my ear and whispers “tell the others that we will have be meeting in the big white castle over the horizon. That is where I will finally reveal my face…and why you exist, and of course….what you guys really are. Remember...do not use a corridor of darkness, you must walk there."

Lestraxil:what do you mean Master Marluxia?"

Marluxia:You'll see, for now get some rest, but please do tell the other members about what i just told you.

Lestraxil:OK master Marluxia, i'll do it right away

I slowly walked away to marluxia's room and tried to figure out what marluxia meant.... I thought that we are human beings, normal human beings....The way marluxia said it, hinted that we arernt humans...then if we arent humans....then what are we? I got a little too distracted again that i didnt see Larxene walking towards me.

Larxene:"hey watch it! i may be new but I'm not rude either! Oh....its just you Lestraxil, be careful i almost confused you with those other guys."

Lestraxil:"Oh, Larxene, i have an important message from Master Marluxia, he said that we need to visit that white castle over the horizon and that he will finally reveal why we exist and what we really are"

Larxene:ohh...So its about time Master Marluxia revealed the truth. Oh and that Castle is called "Nobody Castle"

wait....Does Larxene already know what Marluxia is going to say to us tomorrow? Or maybe she known all along...

Larxene:"stop thinking about it. I knew since you guys joined the organization. In fact, other than you, Xenka and Rudimix are the only ones who have yet to know about it. So why don't you go and tell them, you three DO share a room don't you?"

Lestraxil:"uh yes, i will tell them right away."


wondering how much Master Marluxia and Larxene and going to reveal to us and walking is such a hard task. I cant help but to stop and think of all this. Wait, not just Larxene and Master Marluxia that have been hiding this, but Vexen and Axel as well? Its very possible, in fact the only ones who don't know about this piece of information is me, Xenka and Rudimix, so of course those two had to know....I hope this doesn't Change our way of thinking. It was better off when we were just doing things mindlessly. Now these emotions are getting in our way and I'm starting to see Master Marluxia in a different way....i cant stand it. thank goodness for this collar Marluxia gave me, its probably trying to withheld all the emotions I'm feeling right now.

Rudimix:Hey Lestraxil, it seems you left Master Marluxia's room without a single scratch. Oh? and whats this? is this a necklace or a collar?

Lestraxil:oh yes...nevermind that. Master Marluxia told me to tell you and xenka that we will be meeting at the white castle...err..Nobody Castle tomorrow. He said he will reveal who he is and why we exist, and what we are?


Rudimix:IS that so? Lestraxil get some rest, i will tell Xenka for you. You know how he is when he's around you.

Lestraxil:oh thanks Rudimix, I'll just go to sleep now.

Seeing as how this day ended I'm not so sure if i can sleep....tomorrow they are going to reveal us what wea re...and of course....his face...maybe if i think about Marluxia, i would be rest even for a little bit...

Sorry, its a bit semi-romantic huh....well couldnt help myself, i'm absolutely in love with marluxia.

Sorry, its a bit semi-romantic huh....well couldnt help myself, i'm absolutely in love with marluxia.

anyways, feedback would be nice, sorry if there are some typos or some mis spelling, when it comes to fanfics, you have to be exact right? well....hoped you like the first chapter.

characters already introduced are Xenka (saix character) rudimix (iridium) and yours trully "lestraxil"

OH and of course Master Marluxia. not very long chapter i know, so i will probably edit it to make it a bit more longer

[Cinollex]

Originally Posted by Allister Nine

is organizatoin XV you rp? actually i had the idea, it was small, but when i read the first too paragraphs of the fanfic of organization XV i really inspired me to work on it. so i change the plot to be a bit more reasonable.

if Orgniazation Xv is your Rp, than yes, you deserve the credit for inspiring me to work on my fanfic.

i'm working on the fanfic right now on microsoft work and then i'll just paste it here so the forums wont log me out so quick. hope you become a regular!

No, Organization XV is not, in any way, shape, or form, Sa'id's RP. He was referring to The Commission Saga.
But we're glad that we inspired you, so.

Oh, and, your grammar's already getting better. So yey~

[HeartOfTheHero]

very good, i'm really liking this so far. there were a few little grammatical errors, but nothing too serious, better than the prologue though. Nice job!

[Allister Rose]

Originally Posted by Cinollex

No, Organization XV is not, in any way, shape, or form, Sa'id's RP. He was referring to The Commission Saga.
But we're glad that we inspired you, so.

Oh, and, your grammar's already getting better. So yey~

heh i tend to type organization in a rush and everything in between is probably me not paying attention. but i'm glad you like.

[Allister Rose]

CHAPTER II

I tried thinking of Master Marluxia to help me sleep, but foolish of me, it only made me stay up through the whole night. All i could think about was the answer Master Marluxia was going to give me and the rest of the organization. Maybe his answer might inspire me to work harder for master Marluxia and maybe even become stronger. Still for some reason, i have this horrible feeling that the answer wont be as i expected it would be....I really hate this....these past few days I've been feeling these feelings and emotions. I don't know what some of these feelings are trying to tell me. Luckily the collar that the Master gave me is working and i can calm down more.still the watch says 8:30 which is the usual time we get up. I really cant wait for Master Marluxia's answer.

Rudimix:Lestraxil? Have you been awake this whole?

Lestraxil:oh yes, i guess i couldn't sleep much.

Rudimix:well its not healthy to do it so often.Tonight you get some sleep alright?

Lestraxil:enough, we really should get going, Master Marluxia is going to reveal to us something important.

Rudimix:very well, lets just wait up for Xenka. He usually takes a little longer.

Larxene:you guys are still dressing up? hurry, today your fate will be revealed! dont you want to know what it is!?

Lestraxil:we're ready, we're ready, just give us a moment.

Larxene:if you guys don't hurry up in five minutes, all three of you will become target practice in the afternoon.

Xenka:This is coming from a girl who takes to long making those weird bangs go to the back of her head.

Larxene:that's enough slander! get your butt down here right now.

As i see Larxene and Xenka fight like usual, i cant help but to laugh. they fight every day so why is today so special? I guess it was an important day and the emotions in me are just trying to get out. But before you know it everyone starts to stare at me as if i did something really strange.

Xenka:lestraxil....whats with you? You usually seem dazed off and not care what happens around you.

Rudimix:yeah, you never once smiled at us, let alone laugh. What has gotten into you.

Larxene nods in agreement to what the two have said. I guess it does seem strange, i never once showed any true emotion to them at all, so of course i'm scaring them. Sigh....Emotions are really being annoying right now...

Lestraxil:sorry guys i dont know what came over me. Lets just go to the white Castle now ok?

but as we walked xenka kept bothering me like usual, but this time he didnt use the usual remarks. Xenka...this is exactly why you are themost annoying person in the organization.
(inside Nobody Castle)

Xenka: So lestraxil? what did our Master do to you?

Lestraxil:what do you mean? he didnt do anything to me.

Xenka:your lying, you must have a secret relationship with Master Marluxia. You've been acting strange all yesterday and today you even laughed. What did he do? Did he kiss you? come on he must have did 'something' to you. tell us!

Lestraxil:Nothing Happened! He didnt do anything to me!

Xenka:thats an answer i expect from Master Marluxia's Lover....

Lestraxil:i'm not his Lover! that was the first time he ever called me to see him personally.

Larxene:oh lestraxil just admit it, its written all over your face.

Lestraxil:not you too larxene!!! Nothing is going on between me and Master Marluxia!!!

Rudimix:Cant you all just stop talking? i like to wait for our Master in peace. Besides Its none of our business even if she really was Master Marluxia's Lover. Oh and Lestraxil, you don't have to react that way, just ignored them like you always have.

Rudimix is always the one to stop our arguments. But still...i feel like all these emotions and feelings are coming from him...Damn it, i really hate these feelings. I want Master Marluxia to answer us right away....

Marluxia:Sorry to keep you waiting. I had some things to take care of. Follow me, There's a room i want to show you that is really important.

Leastraxil, Xenka, Rudimix, and Larxene:Yes, master Marluxia.

Master Marluxia then leads us to this big white room where these thrones all gathered together. The thrones were numbered, 1-13.

Marluxia: Please sit down on which ever throne you want to sit in.


Then all of a sudden the thrones start to elevate with Marluxia having the Highest one, Larxene to the second hihgest next to him and Xenka fifth highest and Rudimix fourth highest. leaving me to the third lowest one.


Marluxia:now that we are assembled here in this room, i will reveal to you all the answers you need to know. First, the organization i recruited you in is actually a fake organization. The real organization live in this castle, Nobody Castle. I am actually number 11, the second newest member in the organization with Larxene being the most recent member to join. The real organization is owned by a man named Xemnas. He wishes to create a tool with ultimate power called "kingdom hearts". He was going to use Kingdom hearts for we can restore our former selves....or so we thought.

Xenka: what are you talking about master marluxia!? Your saying that we arent really in the organization? that we are only in a false one that you created!?

Marluxia: yes, that's correct.

Rudimix: Right now, you said that Xemnas will use Kingdom hearts, the tool with ultimate power, to restore your former selves. What do you mean by that?

Marluxia: I will answer that question. But it will Also answer the questions of why we exist, and what are we really are. Because you see, we are Nobodies, beings with no heart and because we have no heart we cant feel emotions like normal people. Where are our hearts? Our hearts are beings now called heartless. a heart that uses darkness as a substitute for a body that searches for more hearts. You see xemnas has his own heartless working for the real organization, his name is Ansem. Ansem has agreed with Xemnas to make kingdom hearts by taking Hearts of the worlds. for now it seems to be working as planned.

Lestraxil: But you said "or so you thought". Does this mean that they arent really going to create kingdom hearts?

Marluxia: not exactly. They will continue to make Kingdom Hearts, but it wont be to returning our former selves. I overheard Xemnas talking to Ansem that they will use it for there own personal needs and that they are just using me and the other members. That's why i formed this organization, the fake one. To do a coup de'tat * to the real organization and find a way to return our former selves and not be used as mere puppets. But besides that they did leave off something important. The truth Xemnas tried to hide from every organization member is that Nobodies can feel emotiones aswell, of course not trully feel them the way we are suppose to but we still feel them. That is because Nobodies like ourselves are still somehow connected to our hearts and are constantly trying to reach them by feeling these emotions.

Rudimix: So your saying that this Xemnas person is using you guys? And you want us to help you take over the real organization? Where is this organization adn how come we havent seen them up until now?

Marluxia:they are currently doing there missions, even Xemnas has left to do an important aren. The reason why you haven't seen the other members is because i gave you missions to worlds that they have never been in. The only members that you do know that are in the real organization is Larxene, Vexen, Axel and I. I fooled Vexen and Axel believing that Xemnas has sent them to look after you while i was away. The still believe this is a branch of organization and that i'm the only one allowed to report to him about this branch. Still now that everything is cleared and all questions are answered, I will give you each a mission. It is to investigate Worlds that have yet to be discovered by the Real organization. Xenka, you will be working with Larxene in this world called "Olympus Colleseum." Lestraxil and Rudimix, you will work together into the world called "traverse Town." Is everything Clear?" Together we will over power Xemnas!!

everyone: yes sir!

* coup de'tat: its pronounced ku-de-ta and sometimes even ku-re-ta, the word means to take out the head leader and become the new leader. Usually its used for government and politics.

[Allister Rose]

Dont forget to leave comments on how you liked, or something you wished to be changed. If something didnt make sense, then i'll explain

[Silent Avera]

So sorry! I've been away at A-kon with no internet, but I'm back, I'm back now!

*Reads*

EDIT: Hmmmm, I feel a bit suspicious towards Marluxia since he put a collar on Lestraxil; collars to me signify submission, ownership, blind loyalty, stuff like that. I like the first person point of view :3 I haven't read from that angle in a while so I'm intrigued by it very much so =^.^= I also like the weapon choices for the "new" members, the weapon Lestraxil has is a nice contrast to her somewhat shy personality as whips to me are like, sharp snaps of anger :P

Anywho, just ah, work on your grammer, and I will be-a keepin' up with this story. =^.^=