Organization Omega

[Allister Rose]

well the story wills tart off without explanation, so i'll do most of the explaining before the story starts.

the story lies between BBS-Kh1.

it mainly revolves around Marluxia's new organization.

marluxia finds and hides new possible organization members and makes them as one of his own. He then starts to use them, for one day when they are strong enough, go against xemnas (he originally planned to give them as a present to xemnas for his rank could improve)

he uses axel and vexen and tricks them by saying the new organization members are on a different branch and that vexen and axel are assigned by xemnas to keep watch on them AND to not reveal this other members, including xemnas (since he told them that marluxia will be the only one to report to xemnas about the new organization)

The members are

Marluxia: I

Larxene: II

Rudimix: III

Vexen: IV

Xenka: V

Axel: VI

Lestraxil: VII

Rudimix:

original name is Ridium, a character created from Iridium from KHI, his attribute is sound. He is a smart and has a normal personality. He has Black hair green eyes and tan skin. When enraged his hair and eyes change to dark red. He is most respected in the organization next Marluxia and Larxene. His weapon is a green bow and is able to summon as many arrows as he wants. when enraged he is able to split the bow in half and become two red dueling swords.

Xenka:

original name is Kane. a character created by Saix from KHI, His attribute is Stars. He has orange hair and has a mix of axel's mullet with Roxas' bangs. He is terribly rude and likes to pick on the newest members of the organization: He remains neither disrespected or respected in the organization. His weapon is a staff with a Star charm on top.

Lestraxil:

Original name is Allister, created by the author of organization omega, her attribute is darkness. She was once a complete emotion-less person who was never phased by Xenka's taunts, suddenly she becomes a person with full of emotion for reasons unknown. She has green short hair with red eyes, blushes most of the time and tries to hide her emotions. Her weapon is a Black and purple Whip. She is able to summon more whips as long as the main whip is in her hand.

Spoilers

Xindro:

Original name is Ordin, Created by Way To Twilight (now known as Chaos) from KHI, his attribute is crystal. A fairly new recruit who very lazy and doesn't care about anyone at first glance. He is actually a person who cares very much but does not want his fellow members to know that certain trait about him. He sits very casually (almost too casually) and sigh a lot. He has black hair and gold eyes. His weapon is a two katana blades to form a double edge sword.

Nallidex:

Original name is Danielle, created by Phoenix of KHI, her attribute is thought itself. A farely new recruit right after Xindro. She is very mysterious and loves to torture people with her ability to read thought and get inside. She is the least respected member out of all other members. Her weapon is a double-sided poison thistleflower which can extend. ( a weapon similar to Renji's from Bleach but cannot curve. It looks similar to a normal double edge word)

[HeartOfTheHero]

I like this idea, it's got some good potential.
Where's the first chapter?? I want to start reading it!

[Allister Rose]

PROLOGUE


Destroy heartless, again and again, that's all I do, well, ever since I joined master Marluxia anyways......its strange all he ever does is give me and the other members orders like to destroy heartless and to find more members... And for some reason....I don’t care what he tells me, I just follow them.....its strange, I don’t know what I am, I don’t remember what exactly happened to me to become like this. All I know is that I need to follow Marluxia’s orders. But why am I doing this?

I have memories of myself living in a small town and living happily. The next day the sky becomes dark and I fall in this completely different town. That was also the day Marluxia found me and made me join his organization and changed my name. I don’t even remember my name. All I know is the name I was given to, Lestraxil.

Of course I’m not the only one in this organization.....there is Xenka who seems to be very rude and offensive and Rudimix who hardly talks to any of us. There's also Larxene a girl who thinks everything is a game and Vexen who wants to experiment on everyone and everything around him. These members, like me, don’t really care if we are Marluxia’s pawn. We just live on and try to satisfy Marluxia’s wishes. But lately for some reason, I want to know why Marluxia needs us so much. I want to know what he is trying to do something. What makes me and the other members so special? This leads me to ask bigger questions. In the end those bigger questions always lead me to my last question, “What am I?”




sorry...i know these few paragraphs sound horrible, so i'll try to edit them and also, i know this isnt long, but i will make it a bit longer

[HeartOfTheHero]

not bad, it's a good start, and it doesn't sound horrible. and the length is fine, since it's just the prologue

[Cinollex]

Decent, so far.
Just remember to capitalize. It's a nitpick, but still.

[Allister Rose]

oh ok! that's good, i'll definitely work on it more.

[Azrael]

Did you get inspiration from my RP?

[Allister Rose]

Originally Posted by Sa'id

Did you get inspiration from my RP?

is organizatoin XV you rp? actually i had the idea, it was small, but when i read the first too paragraphs of the fanfic of organization XV i really inspired me to work on it. so i change the plot to be a bit more reasonable.

if Orgniazation Xv is your Rp, than yes, you deserve the credit for inspiring me to work on my fanfic.

i'm working on the fanfic right now on microsoft work and then i'll just paste it here so the forums wont log me out so quick. hope you become a regular!

[Allister Rose]

CHAPTER I
World: The world that never was
Home: Memory Skyscraper


Today is any other day; I just completed recon on a new world Marluxia sent me to. It wasn’t anything new. If you’ve seen one world, you’ve seen them all. But enough about that, I just got back to memory skyscraper where me and the other members reside. Either way I finally obtained a new gear for my weapon, the Valor gear really strengthens my Whip but now with the prestigious gear, I am able to defeat heartless faster. I was gong to test out the new gear when Xenka appears out of nowhere and yanks my arm.
Xenka: Hey! Lestraxil! Master Marluxia wants to speak with you! You probably did something stupid to get him mad.

Lestraxil: Be quiet Xenka your words don’t work on me, I don’t feel anything remember? So it’s useless for you to make an act over something as trivial as this.

Xenka: Can you be quiet and go? Honestly you talk too much. And I can act however I want, remember that I’m number 5 and your number 7, that means I have authority over you. So get going!

Lestraxil: Honestly Xenka, you’re the one who is talks the most…

Xenka: Don’t force me use my Staff on you!!!

Rudimix: Hey! Lestraxil master Marluxia ordered you to go see him, and you Xenka, stop shouting please…Cant you two ever get along? If you two don’t keep your voices down, Marluxia will give you the capital punishment.

Lestraxil: Fine, I’ll go see master Marluxia. Next time Xenka, Rudimix won’t be here to stop me….

Xenka: What was that!?

Lestraxil: Oh nothing, nothing, I really need to see master right now; I’ll end this when I get back.

Finally I can stop arguing with Xenka and see what master Marluxia wants to see me about. AS much as i hate to admit it, Xenka is right, usually master Marluxia punishes us with a dual when we do something bad. Not only that but he also tries to tell us that is coming by meeting with him alone. But what did I do? I followed Master Marluxia’s orders exactly the way he told me. Did I mess up? I must have forgotten some important detail and now I’m going to be punished by his really painful scythe. I never once felt that scythe before, and the way Xenka describes it, I really don’t want to feel it any time soon. This is strange….I’m feeling scared….and only for a little punishment……Usually I don’t feel anything, but lately I have been feeling all sorts of things that I’m not use to….wait…is master Marluxia going to punish me because I’ve been feeling these emotions lately? There must be a connection. Though how can I control what I feel? Am ireally going to get punished over something so trivial?

Marluxia: Lestraxil, what’s wrong, aren’t you coming into my room?

I was too distracted that i just passed Marluxia’s room. Why am i like this? i need to focus.

Lestraxil: Uh, yes Master Marluxia I’ll be there right away.

As I enter in his room, I noticed that he just sat down and started to smell the rose sitting on his table. He didn’t look angry at all. If I’m not here to be punished….than what am I here for?

Marluxia: Lestraxil, lately you and you other members have been acting a little different than usual. Is everything alright with you and the other member? I hope Xenka isn’t getting to you too often now.

Lestraxil: Uh- No! No, it’s not like that at all, master Marluxia.

Marluxia: Then what is going on Lestraxil, out of all the members you seem to be distracted the most. Yoe used completing you missions well and you seem to look the other way when others are talking to you. Now you cant stop dazing off, you are especially slowed down with recon. Please tell me what the problem is.


Should I just confess to him that I have been feeling emotions? So far he hasn’t punished me yet….and well, there’s a first time for everything. I’m not perfect, so I guess it wouldn’t hurt to confess right now…still fear is governing my body, for some reason. I try to tell Marluxia about it but my body won’t let me. My body is shivering and it’s making my eyes really moist. Why can’t I tell him? These emotions are affecting me


Marluxia: Are you acting scared of me Lestraxil? You don’t have to act scared around me, though I must say this act looks genuine.
Lestraxil: …No, it’s not an act…I’m actually feeling scared…
I tried making a step closer to him but I only made a step back and fell on my knees. Since Marluxia’s face is covered, I can’t tell what his reaction must be, but everytime I see that hood creating an incredibly dark shadow over his face, it almost makes me believe that Marluxia is as cold as Xenka whines about. Only this time, I can’t argue with Xenka about Marluxia, he really does this strange feeling towards me. I don’t know what it is though…if only I knew more about emotions.
Lestraxil: the t-truth is…
Marluxia: Yes?
Lestraxil: The truth is…I’ve been feeling these emotions lately…..Today I felt scared of coming here And the other day I felt happy that the Mission you gave me ended with time to spare….I Don’t know what’s going on And for some reason, I’ve been thinking these thoughts on who I am, what I am, and why I even exist. I know you gave us a purpose here but lately I have forgotten why I do this for you, Master Marluxia. Can you please, give me the answer to these questions, Master Marluxia?

Marluxia: Hmm….Of course…I should’ve known this was going to happen sooner or later.
He’s getting up from his seat and walking towards me. I should have seen this, so why did I say all that? Why couldn’t I just keep my mouth shut!? I should have kept it to myself. I can see him now, opening his arms, waiting to summon his Scythe. I’m too scared of what’s going to happen that I can’t keep my eyes open….please Master Marluxia….please make it quick.

Marluxia: Why are you so afraid Lestraxil? I only came up to you to give you a hug.

Lestraxil: Uh…a-a hug?

He then puts his arms around me and grips onto me. This feeling….it feels familiar. But for some reason I can’t remember when I felt this….he being gentle...for some reason I’m getting this warm feeling from him. This warmth that I’m getting from him is making me cry. I couldn’t say anything, this warmth is too overwhelming but at the same time I don’t want it to go away. I feel so wrong for judging Master Marluxia. He wasn’t going to hurt me at all.... he was just worried.

Marluxia: They call ‘this’ a hug, when you wrap your arms around another person. It gives you a warm feeling doesn’t it, Lestraxil? Please forgive me; sending you to my room alone that is. I should have known you would react like this. Seeing your reaction today made me understand the situation....So tomorrow I will reveal something important to all of you.

And that was it; He came up to me to give me comfort. He wasn’t going to punish me or destroy me; He wanted to help me. I’m glad..That Master Marluxia is leading me….

Marluxia: Lestraxil, I want to give you this. It's a very special collar. This collar can suppress the emotions so it wont interfere with you work in the organization and it wont affect your thinking. It was made not to long ago for other reasons but it appears this would benefit you the most.

These new feelings I’m having for Marluxia...it feels similar to what I was feeling before....but now it's stronger...Master Marluxia right now wants to help me with these emotions, so I should just accept it. I can’t let these emotions affect my thinking. I accepted the collar and placed it on my neck. The moment I put it on, the emotions slowly left from my mind. I can still feel them, but not as much as before.

Marluxia: You look good, Lestraxil. Accept it more as a gift to you from me, more than a tool to help you with your emotions, ok?

Lestraxil: Ok, Master Marluxia. Thanks, I can breathe much better. The emotions aren't swallowing me up.

Master Marluxia then goes up to my ear and whispers, “tell the others that we will be meeting in the big white castle over the horizon. Remember, do not use a corridor of darkness, you must walk there. That is where I will show you my face…and answer all questions, especially the one about what you really are...."

Lestraxil: what do you mean Master Marluxia?"

Marluxia: You’ll see, for now get some rest, but please do tell the other members about what I just told you.

Lestraxil: OK master Marluxia, I’ll do it right away

I slowly walked away to Marluxia’s room and tried to figure out what Marluxia meant.... I thought that we are just beings who hardly have emotions. I mean originally everyone believed that we were recruited for our lack of emotion, though it seems odd or Marluxia to know if we had them or not at the very moment of meeting us and the way Marluxia said it, hinted that we aren’t humans...then if we aren’t humans....then what are we? I got distracted again that I didn’t see Larxene walking towards me.

Larxene:"hey watch it! I’m one of the founding members of this organization! Oh....it’s just you Lestraxil, be careful I almost confused you with those other guys."

Lestraxil:"Oh, Larxene, I have an important message from Master Marluxia, he said that we need to visit that white castle over the horizon and that he will finally reveal why we exist and what we really are"

Larxene: ohh...So its about time Master Marluxia revealed the truth. Oh and that Castle is called "Nobody Castle"

Does Larxene already know what Marluxia is going to say to us tomorrow? Or maybe she had known all along...but why would she know before any of us? Well she is a founding member, of course she would know more than the others. But who else is a founding member other than Larxene and Marluxia?

Larxene: stop thinking about it. I hate it when people just stare and say nothing. I knew since you guys joined the organization. In fact, other than you, Xenka and Rudimix are the only ones who have yet to know about it. So why don't you go and tell them, you three DO share the same bedrooms don’t you?

Lestraxil: uh yes, I will tell them right away.

Larxene: Alright then.

Wondering how much Master Marluxia and Larxene and going to reveal to us and walking is such a hard task. I can’t help but to stop and think of all this. Wait, not just Larxene and Master Marluxia that have been hiding this, but Vexen and Axel as well? It’s very possible, in fact the only ones who don't know about this piece of information is me, Xenka and Rudimix, so of course those two had to know....I hope this doesn't Change our way of thinking. It was better off when we were just doing things mindlessly. Now these emotions are getting in our way and I'm starting to see Master Marluxia in a different way....i can’t stand it. Thank goodness for this collar Marluxia gave me, its probably trying to withhold all the emotions I'm feeling right now.

Rudimix: Hey Lestraxil, it seems you left Master Marluxia's room without a single scratch. Oh? and what’s this? What a strange looking collar?

Lestraxil: oh yes...nevermind that. Master Marluxia told me to tell you and Xenka that we will be meeting at the white castle...err...Nobody Castle tomorrow. He said he will reveal all the answers to our questions.

Rudimix: Is that so? Lestraxil, you should get some rest, I will tell Xenka for you. You know how he is when he's around you.

Lestraxil: oh thanks Rudimix, I'll just go to sleep now.


Rudimix: also…I don’t know what it is, but you look different than before…
Lestraxil: you sure it’s not the collar?
Rudimix: no, something about it just gives a different aura.

Seeing as how this day ended I'm not so sure if I can sleep....tomorrow they are going to reveal us what we are...and of course....his face...maybe if I think about Marluxia, I would be rest even for a little bit...still too much happened to fast. Too many unanswered questions and too much mystery…I guess I’ll have to wait….


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Sorry, it’s a bit semi-romantic huh....well couldn’t help myself, I’m absolutely in love with Marluxia.

Anyways, feedback would be nice, sorry if there are some typos or some misspelling, when it comes to fanfics, you have to be exact right? Well...hoped you like the first chapter.

Characters already introduced are Xenka (saix character) Rudimix (iridium) and yours truly "Lestraxil"

OH and of course Master Marluxia. Not very long chapter I know, so I will probably edit it to make it a bit longer

[Cinollex]

Originally Posted by Allister Nine

is organizatoin XV you rp? actually i had the idea, it was small, but when i read the first too paragraphs of the fanfic of organization XV i really inspired me to work on it. so i change the plot to be a bit more reasonable.

if Orgniazation Xv is your Rp, than yes, you deserve the credit for inspiring me to work on my fanfic.

i'm working on the fanfic right now on microsoft work and then i'll just paste it here so the forums wont log me out so quick. hope you become a regular!

No, Organization XV is not, in any way, shape, or form, Sa'id's RP. He was referring to The Commission Saga.
But we're glad that we inspired you, so.

Oh, and, your grammar's already getting better. So yey~

[HeartOfTheHero]

very good, i'm really liking this so far. there were a few little grammatical errors, but nothing too serious, better than the prologue though. Nice job!

[Allister Rose]

Originally Posted by Cinollex

No, Organization XV is not, in any way, shape, or form, Sa'id's RP. He was referring to The Commission Saga.
But we're glad that we inspired you, so.

Oh, and, your grammar's already getting better. So yey~

heh i tend to type organization in a rush and everything in between is probably me not paying attention. but i'm glad you like.

[Allister Rose]

CHAPTER II

I tried thinking of Master Marluxia to help me sleep, but foolish of me, it only made me stay up through the whole night. All I could think about was the answer Master Marluxia was going to give me and the rest of the organization. Maybe his answer might inspire me to work harder for master Marluxia and maybe even become stronger. Still for some reason, i have this horrible feeling that the answer won’t be as I expected it would be....I really hate this....these past few days I've been feeling these feelings and emotions. I don't know what some of these feelings are trying to tell me. Luckily the collar that the Master gave me is working and I can calm my emotions down. Hmm…. the watch says 8:30 which is the usual time we get up. I really can’t wait for Master Marluxia's answer.

Rudimix: Lestraxil? Have you been awake this whole?

Lestraxil: oh yes, I guess I couldn't sleep.

Rudimix: well it’s not healthy to do it so often. Get some sleep tonight, ok?

Lestraxil: enough, we really should get going. Master Marluxia is going to reveal to us something important.

Rudimix: very well, lets just wait up for Xenka. He usually takes a little longer than the rest of us.

Larxene: you guys are still aren't ready?? Hurry, today your fate will be revealed! Don’t you want to know what it is!?

Lestraxil: we’re ready. we're ready, just give us a moment.

Larxene: if you guys don't hurry up in five minutes, all three of you will become target practice for my knives.

Xenka: This is coming from a girl who takes too long making those weird bangs go to the back of her head. Seriously, your big eyes and that hairstyle makes you look like an ugly bug.

Larxene: Shut up! Look at you scrawny, tall and skinny isn’t going to get you anywhere.
Xenka: hey! Axel’s far skinnier than me and I don’t see you whining about it!

As I see Larxene and Xenka fight like usual, I can’t help but to laugh. They fight every day so why is today so special? I guess it was an important day and the emotions in me are just trying to get out. But before you know it everyone starts to stare at me in a really strange way.

Xenka: Lestraxil....what’s with you? You usually seem dazed off and not care what happens around you.

Rudimix: yeah, you never once smiled at us, let alone laugh. What has gotten into you?

Larxene just gives a disgusted look at me, which probably means she agrees with Xenka and Rudimix. I guess it does seem strange, I never once showed any true emotion to them at all, so of course I’m scaring them. Sigh....why is this topic being brought up….I’ll just brush it aside.

Lestraxil: Heh heh it was act, I thought it would fool you guys, apparently it did. Pretty convincing, huh? Well let’s just go to the white castle.
Xenka: Right…

But as we walked Xenka kept bothering me like usual, but this time he didn’t use the usual remarks. Xenka...this is exactly why you are the most annoying person in the organization. We finally followed Larxene into the castle that Marluxia was talking about, inside everything was bigger than I imagined. It was also surprisingly whiter than the exterior of the castle. The place looked really high-tech, not like any of those classy castles I usually saw in other worlds. After a long walk, Larxene then stops us at this one round room with 13 chairs with a big symbol on the middle that I repeatedly saw in the castle. We all then wait for Master Marluxia. As we waited, Xenka doesn’t esitate to annoy me again.


Xenka: So Lestraxil? What did our Master do to you?

Lestraxil: what do you mean? He didn’t do anything to me.

Xenka: you’re lying. you must have a secret relationship with Master Marluxia. You've been acting strange all yesterday and today you even laughed. What did he do? Did he kiss you? Come on he must have did 'something' to you. Tell us!

Lestraxil: Nothing Happened! He didn’t do anything to me.


Xenka: that’s an answer I expect from Master Marluxia's Lover....

Lestraxil: I’m not his Lover! That was the first time he ever called me to see him personally. Don’t make anything of it.

Larxene: oh Lestraxil just admit it, it’s written all over your face. You’re glowing bright red.

Lestraxil: Sigh…not you too Larxene.

Rudimix: Can you all just stop talking? I like to wait for our Master in peace. Besides it’s none of our business even if she really was Master Marluxia's Lover, so just drop it. Oh and Lestraxil, you don't have to react that way, just ignored them like you always have.

Rudimix is always the one to stop our arguments. But still...I feel like all these emotions and feelings are coming from him...Damn it, I really hate these feelings. I want Master Marluxia to give me the answers so I can leave and g on about my business….

Marluxia: Sorry to keep you waiting. I see you Larxene led you to this room.

Everyone: Yes, master Marluxia.

Marluxia: As you can clearly see, there are 13 thrones, please sit on whichever one you like.

Everyone then sat on random thrones as Marluxia suggested. After we sat down, all of a sudden the thrones start to elevate with Marluxia having the highest one. Larxene was the second highest next to him and Xenka fifth highest and Rudimix fourth highest. Leaving me to the third lowest one, then after the thrones elevated, Marluxia finally took of his hood. He had hair similar to mine only longer and with and pink instead of Lavender. His eyes though were bright blue, it’s almost like I’ve seen them before. His face was his best feature. he had this certain feel to it that made me somehow be attracted to it. Still I was too embarrassed to fall for the face of my master, so I looked away. As I was amazed by his beauty, it appeared that nobody else was impressed. In fact I think Xenka was a bit disgusted.

Marluxia: now that we are assembled here in this room, I will reveal to you all the answers you need to know. First, the organization I recruited you in is actually a fake organization. The real organization lives in this castle, Nobody Castle. I am actually the 11th member of the organization, the second newest member in the organization with Larxene being the most recent member to join.

Xenka: what are you talking about master Marluxia!? You’re saying that we aren’t really in the organization? That we are only in a false one that you created!?

Marluxia: yes, that is correct.

Xenka: How can you say al that without any hesitation!? You act as if we will stay your servants after what you just said.
Rudimix: Calm down, I need to speak with master Marluxia.
Marluxia: You may speak…
Rudimix: Why aren't we in the real organization, why did you recruit us in this ‘fake’ one?
Marluxia: You see…the leader of the organization I’m in is a man named Xemnas. He wishes to create Kingdom Hearts, the ultimate force that will be able to make us “whole”. Or so I thought…
Lestraxil: What do you mean by Kingdom hearts will make us “whole”. Are we incomplete? And what exactly is kingdom hearts?

Marluxia: I will answer those questions. But it will also answer the questions of why we exist, and what are we really are. Because you see, we are Nobodies, beings with no heart and because we have no heart we cant feel emotions like normal people. We technically aren't supposed to exist, yet we do. Where are our hearts? Our hearts are beings are actually the creatures you already know, the heartless. it is these heartless that in fact that allowed us to exist. A heart that uses darkness as a substitute for a body that searches for more hearts, but of course once they take hearts from other people the heart becomes a heartless and sometimes the body and soul become something like us…a Nobody. Xemnas has his own heartless working for the real organization, his name is Ansem. Ansem has agreed with Xemnas to make kingdom hearts by taking Hearts of the worlds. For now it seems to be working.

Lestraxil: But you said "or so you thought" earlier. Does this mean that they aren’t really going to create kingdom hearts?

Marluxia: not exactly. They will continue to make Kingdom Hearts, but it won’t be to returning our former selves. I overheard Xemnas talking to Ansem that they will use it for there own personal needs and that they are just using me and the other original members. That's why I formed this organization, the fake one. To do a coup d’état * to the real organization and find a way to return our former selves and not be used as mere puppets. But besides that they did leave off something important. The truth Xemnas tried to hide from every organization member is that Nobodies can feel emotions as well, of course not truly feel them the way we are suppose to but we still feel them. That is because Nobodies like ourselves are still somehow connected to our hearts and are constantly trying to reach them by feeling these emotions.

Rudimix: So you’re saying that this Xemnas person is using you guys? And you want us to help you take over the real organization? Where is this organization and how come we haven’t seen them up until now?

Marluxia: they are currently doing there missions, even Xemnas has left to do an important errand. The reason why you haven't seen the other members is because I gave you missions to worlds that they have never been in. The only members that you do know that are in the real organization is Larxene, Vexen, Axel and I. I fooled Vexen and Axel believing that Xemnas has sent them to look after you while I was away. The still believe this is a branch of organization and that I’m the only one allowed to report to him about this branch.
Rudimix: I see now…now I understand….
Xenka: I suppose this is satisfying.

* Coup d’état: it’s pronounced ku-de-ta and sometimes even ku-re-ta, the word means to take out the head leader and become the new leader. Usually it’s used for government and politics.

[Allister Rose]

Dont forget to leave comments on how you liked, or something you wished to be changed. If something didnt make sense, then i'll explain

[Silent Avera]

So sorry! I've been away at A-kon with no internet, but I'm back, I'm back now!

*Reads*

EDIT: Hmmmm, I feel a bit suspicious towards Marluxia since he put a collar on Lestraxil; collars to me signify submission, ownership, blind loyalty, stuff like that. I like the first person point of view :3 I haven't read from that angle in a while so I'm intrigued by it very much so =^.^= I also like the weapon choices for the "new" members, the weapon Lestraxil has is a nice contrast to her somewhat shy personality as whips to me are like, sharp snaps of anger :P

Anywho, just ah, work on your grammer, and I will be-a keepin' up with this story. =^.^=