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    The 5th Apocalyptic Rider Dark-Disciple's Avatar
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    Default My Poem thread...

    THis thread I will use to place a poem Daily and as I go, I would Ask of you to rate and coment on....


    Here's the First, right out of the oven:

    Fighting the lost.

    As I gaze upon a broken heart
    Great in diligence, It’s all so bright
    So I can make the pieces lost…
    And all that I had cared the most
    And as I start to near the never-ending story…
    I come upon an oceanic demise
    I start to see the light had died
    The tangible fallacy that now follows…
    I can’t escape… The lost is lost…
    And I remember what I held as lust
    To see you one last time…
    Was all I longed on this deep fight…
    And so shall I show them this might…
    But when this struggle came to end…
    Thus all I cared was now suppressed
    But as my feeling swayed not same…
    I can now seek for what I longed…
    And as I figured you were gone…
    The last of last… It is all lost.
       

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    Lazy Moron revengematron3's Avatar
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    Default Re: My Poem thread...

    It's good. Got me in the mood for a poem of my own. 8.7/10

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    Default Re: My Poem thread...

    haha.... I have some others.... I'll post the next tomorrow....

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    Ok, here's Todays:

    Likeness

    I ne'er was struck before that hour
    with love so sudden and so sweet.
    Her face it bloomed like a sweet flower
    And stole my heart away complete.

    My face turned pale, a deadly pale.
    My legs refused to walk away,
    And when she looked what could I ail
    My life and all seemed turned to clay.

    And then my blood rushed to my face
    And took my eyesight quite away.
    The trees and bushes round the place
    Seemed midnight at noonday.

    I could not see a single thing;
    Words from my eyes did start.
    They spoke as chords do from the string,
    And blood burnt round my heart.

    Are flowers the winter's choice
    Is love's bed always snow
    She seemed to hear my silent voice
    Not love appeals to know.

    I never saw so sweet a face
    As that I stood before.
    My heart had left its dwelling place
    And can return to me no more.

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    Peace through Violence Raiton Kensei's Avatar
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    Default Re: My Poem thread...

    I love it. 9.8/10

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    Default Re: My Poem thread...

    wow your a really great writer..im very impressed..wish i could write poems like that

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    Default Re: My Poem thread...

    haha... Thanks..... i'm just starting though.... I've done like 4 so far.....I made this thread so that I'll pressure myself to write more and more.....

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    Ok, today I'm in a friend's house, so I can't acces the poem I made for today, so I'll leave you with A motto I came up with not too long ago:

    Motto

    May the forgiven stay not Forgotten...
    And the bright be ot turned off.

    let the bright ones enlighten
    and the forgiven be loved.

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    Default Re: My Poem thread...

    Du er min øjesten...en bette dejlig en...er duuuu
    og nåååårrr....vi to følges ad....så er jeg altid glad....some nu.....du er et stykke....af himlens blå....alverdens lykke...den vil du få.....hvem kommer så.....på den grønne gren.....det gør min øjesten.....og mig...

    It's in Danish.....can't write poems in english very good...:D...

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    Default Re: My Poem thread...

    So how's it going so far? (remember, post a rate after each one of your posts.....)

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    Default Re: My Poem thread...

    here's today's

    Alone

    Only yesterday, they told me you were gone
    All these normal people will I ever find another one?
    Wounds on my back, are aching my bones
    I forgot you said, "one day you'll walk alone"
    I said, "I need you," does that make me wrong?
    Am I weak? Are you feeling strong?
    My heart was blacked; it's bloody red
    A hole in my heart, a hole in my head
    Who will help me up? Where's your helping hand?
    Will you turn on me? Is this my final stand?
    In a dream I can not see
    Tangled abstract fallacy, random turmoil builds in me
    Light shined on my path, turned bad into good

    My brain was labored; my head would spin
    Don't let me down, don't give up, and don't give in
    The rain comes down, the cold wind blows
    The plans we made upon the road
    Turn up my collar, welcome the 'Unknown'
    I remember you said that, "one day I'd walk alone

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    Default Re: My Poem thread...

    you really have da talent! So many people in dis site have talent of writin poetry.

    10/10 cos i love yur poems

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    Default Re: My Poem thread...

    haha, but do they have a poem thread promising a new poem everyday?

    *feels proud...*

    Ok, I'll post the one for today later on, but i do have another motto... So:

    Motto 2
    o In love we all fall…
    But fall in not too deep,
    ‘Cause then you’ll scream and Call:
    Why did I rushed And leaped.

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    Default Re: My Poem thread...

    they do but they don't promise a poem everyday

    N yur motto poem is really good but short also 9/10

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    Default Re: My Poem thread...

    (well..... *emphasis* it is a motto...... *emphasis*)

 

 
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