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    Default Aqua: Heart of Darkness

    I decided to copy over a story I wrote to this site to get more feedback and exposure.

    The concept of the story was a request I got to make a Dark!Aqua story. I contemplated the idea for a time, the Aqua we know in KH is a light-aligned, good-hearted, dutiful, and disciplined keybearer. An 'evil' version of her just didn't fit in my mind, but... as we know, Darkness isn't necessarily evil, Riku uses the darkness after all, and he's a good guy. As does Terra, he used the darkness, and while he was manipulated to hell and back by Xehanort, Terra WASN'T evil.

    So the thought struck me...

    Why not try taking Aqua down that path? Using darkness for the sake of the light, for her friends (at first...?).

    The question then becomes... how?

    The answer is easy enough: Master Xehanort.

    But, the thing is, I did not want this to simply become a KH Birth By Sleep retelling with only Aqua and Terra's roles reversed, there's probably already one or two of those out there. I wanted something, more.

    How/why you ask?

    Aqua isn't Terra. She's not as gullible, and while Terra isn't stupid, Aqua IMO is smarter. Not to mention, magic is her focus over raw strength, her talents are different. The story begins when Master Xehanort brings Ventus to Eraqus, and while it may cross paths with the actual KH lore at times, it will eventually break off and become it's own complete monster, stretching far past KH: BBS. The story will probably follow Birth By Sleep up until only a certain point before things start spiraling out of control...

    As a note: I reserve the right to alter and create lore to fit or further the Fanfiction (all rights/characters/ect of course belong to Square Enix to begin with). You will already notice a few changes in chapter one alone, as an example, Xehanort was already aware of Terra/Aqua before his visit to drop off Ventus in this story.

    For this story's sake: Kingdom Hearts Chi and everything relating to it (unions, lux, book of prophecies, ect...) is not taken into account. If I need information for the Keyblade War for this story, I'll come up with my own. KH: Chi is... just a bit to weird for me to handle, sorry. I may or may not incorporate ideas and concepts from Kingdom Hearts III when it's eventually released.

    Anyway, without further adieu...

    Book One of the Road to Dusk Series
    Aqua: Heart of Darkness
    Spoiler Spoiler: Chapter One: Darkening Waters Show


    Spoiler Spoiler: Chapter Two: A Troubled Day Show


    Spoiler Spoiler: Chapter Three: Lessons Show


    Spoiler Spoiler: Chapter Four: The Last Night Show


    Spoiler Spoiler: Chapter Five: The Mark of Mastery Show


    Spoiler Spoiler: Chapter Six: Leaving Home Show


    Spoiler Spoiler: Chapter Seven: Negativity and the Witch Show


    Spoiler Spoiler: Chapter Eight: The Witch's Pact Show


    Spoiler Spoiler: Chapter 9: Welcome the Dark Show


    Spoiler Spoiler: Chapter Ten: Broken Trinity Show


    Spoiler Spoiler: Chapter Eleven: The Blue Lady Show


    Spoiler Spoiler: Chapter Twelve: The One She Chose Show


    Spoiler Spoiler: Chapter Thirteen: Broken Deception Show


    Spoiler Spoiler: Chapter Fourteen: Hardh Reality Show


    Spoiler Spoiler: Chapter Fifteen: Dark Knowledge Show


    Spoiler Spoiler: Chapter Sixteen: Musings of That Which Was Lost Show


    Spoiler Spoiler: Chapter Seventeen: A Step In the Realm of Darkness Show


    Spoiler Spoiler: Chapter Eighteen: New Bearers and Old Friends Show


    Spoiler Spoiler: Chapter Nineteen: Betrayal of the Light Show


    Spoiler Spoiler: Chapter Twenty: Recusant Show


    Spoiler Spoiler: Chapter Twenty-One: Hearts of Darkness Show


    Spoiler Spoiler: Chapter Twenty-Two: Driven Show


    Spoiler Spoiler: Chapter Twenty-Three: Before the Door Show


    Spoiler Spoiler: Chapter Twenty-Four: In Utter Darkness Show


    Spoiler Spoiler: Epilogue: Hope for the Future Show


    Spoiler Spoiler: Final Report Show


    Spoiler Spoiler: Secret Movie Show


    There you have it.

    Hope you all enjoy.

    Looking forward to any feedback ya'll so design to give.
    Last edited by Waves_Blade; July 17, 2017 at 02:47 AM.
       

 

 

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