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Old June 20th, 2007, 03:16 AM   #751
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I was looking for someone to give me some feedback on my fanfic. The link is in my sig. Any feedback would be appreciated.
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Old June 20th, 2007, 03:31 AM   #752
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I'll see if I can help you.........The thread doesn't say. Nevermind...
There's a second page? x.X
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Old June 20th, 2007, 03:41 AM   #753
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Thats why I said nevermind.
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Old June 20th, 2007, 03:47 AM   #754
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...Oh.
Well, jskfhsdjhf. Sorry. xD
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Old June 20th, 2007, 05:20 AM   #755
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Hello! The Intro to my story is finally finished, so if anyone would like to read it all the way through, please do! And for those that kept with me (which I am forever grateful ^-^), thank-yall very much!

please rate and comment ^-^
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Old June 20th, 2007, 05:21 AM   #756
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The extra to the prologue of Bittersweet Symphony is now up.


http://forums.khinsider.com/fan-fict...-symphony.html

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Old June 20th, 2007, 05:34 AM   #757
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I just finished reading and commenting on both of your stories awesome job to the both of you xD.
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Old June 21st, 2007, 06:30 PM   #758
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uhm... can people post a few feedbacks on my fan fic before i post the next chappie? i've been doind double post in my fanfic thread... and i wanna stop it somehow... by the way.. acein12 wehns the next chappie and haku i'll see about the poem =3

can i add you bytheway in my buddylist?
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Old June 21st, 2007, 08:15 PM   #759
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Yeah sure GBG and my poems will be up sometime by the end of the day, I got a little side tracked.
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Old June 22nd, 2007, 05:53 PM   #760
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...Would making an outline help with my story, seeing on how I intend on making it so long? I just want people's opinions on the matter before I take the time to do so. (Planned length is posted in first post in my threa)

Also, I'll have more next week.
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Old June 22nd, 2007, 07:07 PM   #761
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current chapter of my fanfic is posted... please feel free to read n comment
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Old June 22nd, 2007, 07:12 PM   #762
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...Would making an outline help with my story, seeing on how I intend on making it so long? I just want people's opinions on the matter before I take the time to do so. (Planned length is posted in first post in my threa)

Also, I'll have more next week.
Most definately. It organizes your thoughts and keeps you on a steady pace. You won't find yourself thinking "Now what should I say next?", for you'll have a detailed outline of what will happen in your fic. Feel free to change it anytime, if you feel it be necessary.

And while I'm here, I strongly advise those of you who enjoy reading fics to read the one located in under my sig, and also, if you're interested, a one written by me, titled Kingdom Hearts: Revenge of Nobodies.
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Old June 23rd, 2007, 01:51 AM   #763
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The new chapter of Lost Hearts is out, please read and comment.
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Old June 23rd, 2007, 10:13 AM   #764
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^ read it and still awesome work man! XD
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Old June 23rd, 2007, 10:26 AM   #765
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Yeah I did too very awesome job on the chapter great job xD.
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