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Old April 6th, 2008, 10:38 PM   #1531
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There are a few links to some fanfiction guides in the writing/pros sticky. check a few of them.

http://forums.khinsider.com/fan-fict...directory.html

Also, try to expand your vocabulary a little. Nothing drastic, like big ten sylable words or anything, just try words that you wouldn't normally use. A bigger vocabulary gives you some more room to work with. Try to concentrate are related to what you want to write about.
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Old April 9th, 2008, 04:59 PM   #1532
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Edit: Someone had already critiqued my work so I'll just edit this post.

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Old April 10th, 2008, 03:10 AM   #1533
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Hey names Nick aka Maverick aka Coribz lol

I need some critique on my story Virus which is posted in the fanfiction threads its either on the first, second or third page. The reason I need critique is because Im going to have the book published but need some advice n stuff, plz and thanks
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Old April 10th, 2008, 03:26 AM   #1534
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Hey names Nick aka Maverick aka Coribz lol

I need some critique on my story Virus which is posted in the fanfiction threads its either on the first, second or third page. The reason I need critique is because Im going to have the book published but need some advice n stuff, plz and thanks
Getting it published, eh? Hope it all goes well. I'll look it over for you.
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Old April 10th, 2008, 03:31 AM   #1535
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Getting it published, eh? Hope it all goes well. I'll look it over for you.
Yeah and Thanks ^_^ What ive posted is the first draft of the story though but hopefully its good, now I got to get the final form of it ready


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hey there. new fanfic writer here ^^ actually the one im gonna do is the first one ive ever done heh. :o
Cool I cant wait to see what you write ^_^
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Old April 11th, 2008, 01:22 AM   #1536
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So, in an effort to improve the quality of the fanfiction section, I've started a Beta Reader request thread where one can ask for someone to read some of their fics and then get advice and critique on how to improve. Link below.

http://forums.khinsider.com/fan-fict...our-story.html
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Old April 11th, 2008, 01:25 AM   #1537
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umm asg. you forgot the h in http:


edit: here it is
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Old April 11th, 2008, 02:28 AM   #1538
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So, in an effort to improve the quality of the fanfiction section, I've started a Beta Reader request thread where one can ask for someone to read some of their fics and then get advice and critique on how to improve. Link below.

http://forums.khinsider.com/fan-fict...our-story.html

thats a awesome idea good job man
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Old April 11th, 2008, 02:31 AM   #1539
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thats a awesome idea good job man
Well technically, it was Takuhashi Reina and -Arcana-X- Who thought it up. Me, I just did all the work.

I PM'd her about it, but she hasn't said anything about it yet.
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Old April 13th, 2008, 03:54 AM   #1540
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Anyone wanna create an orginal story or a fan fic with me? I would do it myself but I am not good at stories and I want to get experience with someone else before going on my own.
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Old April 13th, 2008, 06:47 AM   #1541
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EDIT: *READ NEXT POST THIS COMPUTER DOUBLE POSTED*
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Old April 13th, 2008, 06:49 AM   #1542
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Anyone wanna create an orginal story or a fan fic with me? I would do it myself but I am not good at stories and I want to get experience with someone else before going on my own.

Sure I would like to help ya, I always wanted to try a colaberation with someone
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Old April 13th, 2008, 01:39 PM   #1543
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I'm doing a collab with with Frozen fate, so look out for it in the near future!

We're still thinking up plot and chars, locations etc.

It's basically a fic that bridges the gap between my fic Absolution's Reign and his fic Hearts of Twilight: Shattered Regret and explains how Xonic became the King of Darkness, so yeah...
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Old April 13th, 2008, 10:11 PM   #1544
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Sure I would like to help ya, I always wanted to try a colaberation with someone
All right, so when do you want to start?
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Old April 14th, 2008, 04:25 AM   #1545
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All right, so when do you want to start?

Whenever, you want is cool ^_^
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