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| Heartless | Well, okay... I started typing "Unforgiving Sin" not too long ago, and I think I have the plot down completely. Basically it breaks down like this: About a year has passed since Kazuki's and Takumi's mother's death and they seem to have moved on from the subject. But the rebirth of Organization XIII is complete and the new members are even more ridiculous, and selfish than they were before. The new superior of the Organization wishes Kazuki to find his mother so he sends him on a long and painful journey with the Keyblade to perform such a search, but what he doesn't know is the Organization's master plan, and after the capture of young Takumi it is coming together even faster than before. Not only that, but there is a heartless who's dedicated himself to taking over the worlds with his rising Heartless Army. So now Kazuki is on his journey for his mother who is seemingly alive and loves him, Kazuma is on a search for power and will do anything even backstab his former friend to do so, Kazuki is on a quest for revenge to destroy his brother who seemingly turned him over to the Organization, but will he be doing this by will... or force? Only time will tell as this epic unfolds into something bigger than all of us. Kingdom Hearts: Unforgiving Sin Well, that's the basic of it... |
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| Cozza Frenzy | I'm up to chapter 3 on The Legend of the Lost Warrior: Diamond of Kemo. |
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greetings there ^_^ hope your fic gets the views and comments it deserves :p | ||
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| Your Mom's Mom's Daughter Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: Orlando Florida Age: 17 Posts: 1,284
Rep Power: 4 ![]() Level: 30 EXP: | Yeah hi guys! I posted a new story, titled "a new sumthin sumthin" mostly because a title couldn't come to mind. Its good, read it, NAO! |
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| Enigmatic Soldier | OMG after 3 months of writer's block disease, chapter 15 of Absolution's Reign is ready for posting, just need someone to comment so I don't end up triple posting and Frozen, I modified chapter 14 so Xonic can now pwn Mega in detail |
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| Cozza Frenzy | That's cool Cal. I'll post. I'm halfway done the final chapter of the original fanfic. I'll finish it tomorrow. It should be up before the weekend ends. |
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| Heretic Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: The Ministry of Lost Souls Age: 14 Posts: 1,130
Rep Power: 3 ![]() Level: 23 EXP: | Im thinking of a way to start my first fan fic without making it crappy. all i can tell u about it right now is that towards the end I will become the number 1 enemy of possibly many fan girl armies ![]() |
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| Sidekick | I have a question about conceiving a story, world and characters. Are any methods I can use to brainstorm ideas? |
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| Notorious White Mage Captainess Join Date: Feb 2008 Location: The Haunted Mansion Age: 20 Posts: 7,347
Rep Power: 10 ![]() ![]() Level: 35 EXP: | Draw from what you know, and turn it on it's head. I've had alot of fun filling in the things never mentioned in American Anime dubs. (Parents who never appear, etc) |
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| Heretic Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: The Ministry of Lost Souls Age: 14 Posts: 1,130
Rep Power: 3 ![]() Level: 23 EXP: | Well, I have a good idea for my first fan-fic (in my opinion at least), but I need help choosing the title so which one sounds better: "Eve of Everlasting Darkness" or "Eve of Darkness Everlasting"? Tough choice, isnt it? PM me or post here if u decide. Last edited by Diomedes; April 1st, 2008 at 11:54 PM. |
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| Cozza Frenzy | Some of you might remember my Hearts of Twilight fanfic. Well, that's FINALLY done after a long time of me leaving and coming back a multitude of times. So go read it if you want. 24 chapters. Some long, some short. |
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| Sidekick Join Date: Feb 2008 Age: 23 Posts: 302
Rep Power: 2 ![]() Level: EXP: | Quote:
Fictional character - Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia Critical Concepts: "Static" and "Dynamic" Characterization Critical Concepts: Flat and Round Characterization Fictional universe - Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia and also, in regards to me, I've been working on a fiction for quite sometime, and ask if anyone would be interested in giving CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM on it in MULTIPLE ASPECTS. It may not be like other fics, but that doesn't mean that it should be disregarded. *fic is in sig* | |
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| Notorious White Mage Captainess Join Date: Feb 2008 Location: The Haunted Mansion Age: 20 Posts: 7,347
Rep Power: 10 ![]() ![]() Level: 35 EXP: | I posted my first individual fanfic (still working on STARWARS with Xziled and Anti) and I would like some comments and constructive critisim. It's called Timefixer. I'll get updates in when I can. I have to rewrite teh first draft because it's horrible edit: Just put up Chapter 1 Last edited by madammina; April 7th, 2008 at 12:21 AM. |
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