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Old March 25th, 2008, 11:41 AM   #1516
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Well, okay...
I started typing "Unforgiving Sin" not too long ago, and I think I have the plot down completely.
Basically it breaks down like this:
About a year has passed since Kazuki's and Takumi's mother's death and they seem to have moved on from the subject. But the rebirth of Organization XIII is complete and the new members are even more ridiculous, and selfish than they were before. The new superior of the Organization wishes Kazuki to find his mother so he sends him on a long and painful journey with the Keyblade to perform such a search, but what he doesn't know is the Organization's master plan, and after the capture of young Takumi it is coming together even faster than before. Not only that, but there is a heartless who's dedicated himself to taking over the worlds with his rising Heartless Army.
So now Kazuki is on his journey for his mother who is seemingly alive and loves him, Kazuma is on a search for power and will do anything even backstab his former friend to do so, Kazuki is on a quest for revenge to destroy his brother who seemingly turned him over to the Organization, but will he be doing this by will... or force? Only time will tell as this epic unfolds into something bigger than all of us.
Kingdom Hearts: Unforgiving Sin

Well, that's the basic of it...
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Old March 25th, 2008, 05:58 PM   #1517
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I'm up to chapter 3 on The Legend of the Lost Warrior: Diamond of Kemo.
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Old March 27th, 2008, 07:22 AM   #1518
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Instead of going through this whole section, clicking topic after topic, anyone got a recommendation of a fanfic to read? Not KH-related PLEASE. I see one more of those and Im gonna explode.
Well mine aren't kh related for starters(Virus and Warped), look for fanfics done by the peeps who commented in mine cause im pretty sure they made some, sorry but I forget their names...


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hey there. new fanfic writer here ^^ actually the one im gonna do is the first one ive ever done heh. :o

greetings there ^_^ hope your fic gets the views and comments it deserves :p
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Old March 28th, 2008, 04:17 AM   #1519
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Yeah hi guys! I posted a new story, titled "a new sumthin sumthin" mostly because a title couldn't come to mind.

Its good, read it, NAO!
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Old March 28th, 2008, 05:23 AM   #1520
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OMG after 3 months of writer's block disease, chapter 15 of Absolution's Reign is ready for posting, just need someone to comment so I don't end up triple posting and Frozen, I modified chapter 14 so Xonic can now pwn Mega in detail
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Old March 28th, 2008, 05:25 AM   #1521
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That's cool Cal. I'll post. I'm halfway done the final chapter of the original fanfic. I'll finish it tomorrow. It should be up before the weekend ends.
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Old March 29th, 2008, 07:14 AM   #1522
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Im thinking of a way to start my first fan fic without making it crappy. all i can tell u about it right now is that towards the end I will become the number 1 enemy of possibly many fan girl armies
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Old March 29th, 2008, 07:19 AM   #1523
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Its good, read it, NAO!
I have been scared half to death (one more time and I will die!)

I guess I gotta read it =p
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Old March 30th, 2008, 02:37 AM   #1524
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I have a question about conceiving a story, world and characters. Are any methods I can use to brainstorm ideas?
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Old March 30th, 2008, 07:25 AM   #1525
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Draw from what you know, and turn it on it's head. I've had alot of fun filling in the things never mentioned in American Anime dubs. (Parents who never appear, etc)
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Old April 1st, 2008, 11:07 PM   #1526
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Well, I have a good idea for my first fan-fic (in my opinion at least), but I need help choosing the title so which one sounds better: "Eve of Everlasting Darkness" or "Eve of Darkness Everlasting"? Tough choice, isnt it? PM me or post here if u decide.

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Old April 5th, 2008, 05:47 AM   #1527
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Some of you might remember my Hearts of Twilight fanfic. Well, that's FINALLY done after a long time of me leaving and coming back a multitude of times. So go read it if you want. 24 chapters. Some long, some short.
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Old April 5th, 2008, 09:00 AM   #1528
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I have a question about conceiving a story, world and characters. Are any methods I can use to brainstorm ideas?
some good reading in reverence to our good friend Wiki (Hi Wiki :) !)

Fictional character - Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia
Critical Concepts:  "Static" and "Dynamic" Characterization
Critical Concepts:  Flat and Round Characterization

Fictional universe - Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia

and also, in regards to me, I've been working on a fiction for quite sometime, and ask if anyone would be interested in giving CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM on it in MULTIPLE ASPECTS. It may not be like other fics, but that doesn't mean that it should be disregarded.

*fic is in sig*
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Old April 6th, 2008, 10:29 PM   #1529
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some good reading in reverence to our good friend Wiki (Hi Wiki :) !)

Fictional character - Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia
Critical Concepts: "Static" and "Dynamic" Characterization
Critical Concepts: Flat and Round Characterization

Fictional universe - Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia

and also, in regards to me, I've been working on a fiction for quite sometime, and ask if anyone would be interested in giving CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM on it in MULTIPLE ASPECTS. It may not be like other fics, but that doesn't mean that it should be disregarded.

*fic is in sig*
Thanks for the help but can you also send me a page that can help me with imagery? I have trouble describing things,creatures,robots, weapons, people, surroundings, places and moods. I also have trouble looking for the "right" words to use for imagery and whenever I try to describe something I usually get stuck on trying to find the "right" words so can you send me a page like that as well? I I am in a creative Writing internet course and I plan to do well in that class.
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Old April 6th, 2008, 10:32 PM   #1530
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I posted my first individual fanfic (still working on STARWARS with Xziled and Anti) and I would like some comments and constructive critisim. It's called Timefixer. I'll get updates in when I can. I have to rewrite teh first draft because it's horrible

edit: Just put up Chapter 1

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