Some more junk

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it takes two by ~chray on deviantART



punk death by ~chray on deviantART



crits n etcetera

[dr.korytco]

The worse part is that you called it junk, unless you do not feel that way. I understand keep it a bit negative and you will get alot better though. Never love your own stuff too much type of attitude?? Just a thought. Im not sure if that is your case .


It is there, it is good, now the question is are you considering a profession in this? 9.95/10

[Cameron]

Your guy's heads are tiny.

Also, punk boy has girly jeans. lulz.

EDIT: Uh, the girl's eyes are also focused down on the kid's crotch. This could be intentional, but I figured I should point it out either way.

~Dorian Gray

[dr.korytco]

Originally Posted by Dorian Gray

Your guy's heads are tiny.

Also, punk boy has girly jeans. lulz.

~Dorian Gray

Not according to the rules of cannon, 8 heads down and 3 across ...

Just my 2 bits there.

As for the jeans I have seen men where girl jeans. My only complaint is that he has not pushed himself enough yet to learn backgrounds.

[Cameron]

oh lol

I'm counting at least 11 heads down. The dude's head is too small, trust me.

~Dorian Gray

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Originally Posted by dr.korytco

The worse part is that you called it junk, unless you do not feel that way. I understand keep it a bit negative and you will get alot better though. Never love your own stuff too much type of attitude?? Just a thought. Im not sure if that is your case .


It is there, it is good, now the question is are you considering a profession in this? 9.95/10

I didn't use the word junk literally, just figuratively.
And yes, I am pursuing a career in the art field.


And Dorian, men stand anywhere from 7-9 heads tall, while females stand anywhere from 6-7 1/2. The head sizes are fine, I'm just practicing realistic proportions.

Also, punk dudes love the skin tight.

[dr.korytco]

I love babes though, I love your expression on them too draw more babes ....Good luck in your career man. I think you are going to deserve one.

[Cameron]

Mmm, my bad. Maybe it's that it's too thin? Something seems off with the head, I'm just not sure what now.

And so I don't look like an idiot, the end of the guy's pant legs are jacked up.

Realism's going nice, though. Makes me wish I had more time to draw :\

~Dorian Gray

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Yes, feet will be the death of me. Regardless of how much I study and practice them, it always looks horrible, and I'm going to guess that it's the hood throwing you off.

[dr.korytco]

Well I like the chick's feet more than the dude's

LAter, Im off for now. Im starting to feel to kindly here , hehe when I post I have to be arrogant, my art that is...

Good job again , but of course you could be even better, always. No such thing as a bad drawing but every drawing can be better.

[kairigirl]

...The girl's anatomy still seems off though, Sparkle. Like, her torso and legs. I've heard people say that the the torso is about the same as the legs, but it isn't..the legs are little longer. Try moving the waist up. Hands don't fall at the crotch, they fall just below it. The wrists are actually right at the bottom of the crotch. *is a girl, just tried it, wins. =D* I've also got long legs though, but the waist is still too low, or at least it seems like it from where the crotch/hips are.

Her chest is so...saggy...that's gonna hurt if she has to run or something...*cough* I'm guessing they're down too low on the torso..which will pry be fixed once you move the waist up.

The guy looks good...though his left shoulder seems kind of short.

Oh, yeah. XD Feet are so small. XD Not length wise, height /width wise. While a bare foot is small, the shoe practically doubles it, triples it sometimes.

[dr.korytco]

I respect the rules but my last 2 bits here is that legs can vary...cant they? Well at any rate he has enough damn positive in this thread already so I hope I am wrong about that.
Ok seriously I am done, I guess I was once again just interested enough to post. After all I am learning, I like to hear what people say about model pieces. Figures...and figures...

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Yeah, I get what you mean, I just can't place my eye on it. It's most likely a problem with the waist/torso.

http://xs221.xs.to/xs221/07464/chick.png

If that helps you spot the problem, the original sketch for her.
Maybe her crotch is too long. Oh well, too late to fix it now but it'll be nice to find out what it is so I don't repeat the mistake

[dr.korytco]

Originally Posted by Sparkle Motion

Yeah, I get what you mean, I just can't place my eye on it. It's most likely a problem with the waist/torso.

http://xs221.xs.to/xs221/07464/chick.png

If that helps you spot the problem, the original sketch for her.
Maybe her crotch is too long. Oh well, too late to fix it now but it'll be nice to find out what it is so I don't repeat the mistake

I know what your problem with feets is there. The ankles , you need to consider the ankles.

[Proline]

I like the dude's hoodie. A lot of the things I was gonna say has already been said.

I still like that hoodie.