yuck yuck I don't like skinny necks! ouch it looks like its hurting him. do more like the first one but make shoulders higher. most people draw good faces though. you've done enough with that work more on the hair and shirt/wrinkles you're neglecting that.
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Crazy Diamond thanks for the sig
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