Sora&Roxas

[~*TrinityHeart*~]

This is a pic I drew of Roxas & Sora. I got bored so I found a couple of pictures and drew them.

http://i78.photobucket.com/albums/j9...Sora-Roxas.jpg

I need to put shading on them, especially Roxas' trousers ^_^;
And Sora's boot collided with Roxas' shoe! So, anyways, enjoy!

[Mr Despair]

I have to say, this is one of the bst drawings I've seen in the forums. The only thing I think needed some wasor was the eyes, but besides that the drawing is next to perfect. You have a special talent there, Trinity. ^_^

[~*TrinityHeart*~]

=) Thanks but I think it's one of the crappiest pieces I've drawn to be honest..

[Mr Despair]

In that case, I want to see the best you have.

[Hostil Spike]

Proportions need a lil work, both characters look a lil on the chubby side but that could be the scan...

[~*TrinityHeart*~]

Yup. My scanner's mean >_> It does that to most of my work.

And EH, I will try to draw something more magnificent than you could possibly imagine. =D

[Kairi6795]

Very good! 8/10! *252525*

[kairigirl]

The proportions are off. A lot. x-x Sora and Roxas are at least six heads (maybe even six and a half) tall. They're right now 5.5. Yes. That .5 makes a difference.

Sora's right leg is too small. When you draw, do you draw out where everything is first before you start really drawing it? Like, drawing lines and circles where joints and limbs are? That would fix Sora's foot running into Roxas' foot.

And..scanners don't make people look terribly fat. Both Sora and Roxas are a little skinnier. Like I said, draw lines and circles and ovals to get everything proportionate. Try drawing inside out (bones-->muscles-->skin-->clothing/features/hair/stuff). Helps a lot.

o-o Their eyes are huge, but that might just be your style.

Anyways, just work on proportions and try drawing your own poses next time, these are awfully dull and overdone. Nice try though, and thanks for showing it off! You should show more art (that's not sarcasm, please don't think it is).

[Proline]

Originally Posted by kairigirl

The proportions are off. A lot. x-x Sora and Roxas are at least six heads (maybe even six and a half) tall. They're right now 5.5. Yes. That .5 makes a difference.

Sora's right leg is too small. When you draw, do you draw out where everything is first before you start really drawing it? Like, drawing lines and circles where joints and limbs are? That would fix Sora's foot running into Roxas' foot.

And..scanners don't make people look terribly fat. Both Sora and Roxas are a little skinnier. Like I said, draw lines and circles and ovals to get everything proportionate. Try drawing inside out (bones-->muscles-->skin-->clothing/features/hair/stuff). Helps a lot.

o-o Their eyes are huge, but that might just be your style.

Anyways, just work on proportions and try drawing your own poses next time, these are awfully dull and overdone. Nice try though, and thanks for showing it off! You should show more art (that's not sarcasm, please don't think it is).

I totally second that. I ain't gonna rewrite everything she's said, so just reread what KG posted if you don't understand anything. Stickmen... are like total win. Use them. Now.

[Soraroxrikusux05]

well of course its a good drawing especially the sora hair, but lemme just mention the areas of improvement. i don't wanna sound too mean or critical, so i apologize if i do

the faces are too simple

sora's neck is too thick

so is their bodies

their bodies are also too short in proportion

fingers are too skinny

sora's crown necklace is messed up

sora's legs are uneven

and i'll leave it at that. keep drawing and you'll get better i know i do. man i wish i had a scanner then i would post my pics up and show you guys

[Fatal_Blade]

umm... its ok, i say it neads somemore work (but thats just me) 7/10

[Soraroxrikusux05]

yeah that's a good rating i'd give it a 7 or 8 out of ten. you could also apply some shading too that always makes things look nicer

[Fatal_Blade]

maybe you should re-draw it and take more time on it (including shading)
then post it again---------just a thought

[~*TrinityHeart*~]

Um...ya, I figured it needed a LOT of improvement. I'll post a better picture on another thread. I just have to finish it up a bit.

[namine's shadow]

1. I see your drawing all the time, rhi. This must be the 79th place for the worst. The worst is probally when you draw sqiggles when you were only 1 XD
2. Not a bad picture. afterall, Roxas is supposed to be your favourite character.
3. 8/10 Thought you could do better but, nice try!
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