An un-traced Sora by a ten-year-old:

[kingdomheartsjak]

http://allyoucanupload.webshots.com/...10235436049129

[MASTER-SEPHIROTH]

Okay unless Sora has an eating disorder then it is too skinny on the arms, legs and such.

6/10

[KH Vandread]

Well, it's alright. You need to work a bit more on your proportions. His head seems really wide and his arms and legs are too thin. Work on the coloring as well. That aside, it's still pretty good considering you are only 10 years old.

[Fatal_Blade]

need some more work but its still good if your only ten years old, keep working at
it

[Flashback Humor]

Age matters not.
Coloring is absolutely horrid. Head looks fked up. Way to skinny. Pants..shoes..everything is messed up.
It doesnt even look like Sora.
2/10

[~RexchalOrgXIII~]

^Lol's @ Spooky. Ha ha, that's so mean.

Anyways like Vandread said, you need to work on propotioning the limbs and such. Also, maybe you should draw a skeleton of the body first. If you look at Sora's hip bone and right leg, they never quite meet up, leaving his legs looking extremely strange on his body. His arms are different lengths too. Not to mention the random bumps in them, which I assume are supposed to be muscles.

You did do a fairly decent job with the details in Sora's outfit though. It looks like you got all of the zippers, belts, etc.

So, keep trying. You'll get it. ^_^

[Hallelujah]

Wow, at ten years old, i would have first surmised this would have been within the range of a more developed block based sora. The body is way too skinny via anorexic, i mistook him for Axel at first glance xD j/k. The coloring...you might want to leave it in black and white like i do with my drawings. Work on proportions reguarding half and half of the body. The arms are like sticks...not really seeing the physicallity thats supposed to be there =/. Overall, not bad for someone of your age, you draw just like me at that age. (I learned from a bud, who could draw like 8th grader at the time ._.).

5/10

Good, not great, but not that bad either.

[.:kaizer21:.]

Originally Posted by xXDragon-BloodXx

Age matters not.
Coloring is absolutely horrid. Head looks fked up. Way to skinny. Pants..shoes..everything is messed up.
It doesnt even look like Sora.
2/10

Dude. No, that's just wayy to mean. It's not even that bad. It's posts and comments like this that discourage people who want to put up their art for ratings.
Criticism like this helps no one.

Ignore the mean old person kingdomheartsjak, they just need a hug.

It's not as bad as DragonBlood said, so don't feel sad.

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He is way too skinny, especially his arms, but then again, Sora and even Kairi looks anorexic in the official artwork.
THis is a big improvement from what you did last time with Sora and Roxas, but there's still a lot of room for improvement.
Hands and arms need work. The hands need a total makeover. They're too small. They need to be bigger, and the elbows need to be in line with the waist, and with that, the sleeves need to have been brought down more.

I find the head alright, actually. The hair needs to be a bit more spikier, but I like the head jsut fine.

Shoes are fine, but proportionally, they need to be bigger, since his shoes are usually huge.

The colouring job needs work. It needs to be more smoother, and it looks like you rushed it, with all the white spots in between the strokes. Take your time.

Overall, i'll give it a 6/10.
It's good, but there's a lot of room to improve in. Don't let negative posts discourage you. Keep drawing.


Btw, please, don't use your age as an excuse. Your age has nothing to do with how well you draw, so don't use it so that other members feel sorry for you.

[Enigmacy]

It's not bad, but it's not the best either. Make the outline a bit thicker and darker, color inside the lines, and yadyadaydad. It was good anyways.

[kingdomheartsjak]

Originally Posted by kaizer21

Dude. No, that's just wayy to mean. It's not even that bad. It's posts and comments like this that discourage people who want to put up their art for ratings.
Criticism like this helps no one.

Ignore the mean old person kingdomheartsjak, they just need a hug.

It's not as bad as DragonBlood said, so don't feel sad.

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He is way too skinny, especially his arms, but then again, Sora and even Kairi looks anorexic in the official artwork.
THis is a big improvement from what you did last time with Sora and Roxas, but there's still a lot of room for improvement.
Hands and arms need work. The hands need a total makeover. They're too small. They need to be bigger, and the elbows need to be in line with the waist, and with that, the sleeves need to have been brought down more.

I find the head alright, actually. The hair needs to be a bit more spikier, but I like the head jsut fine.

Shoes are fine, but proportionally, they need to be bigger, since his shoes are usually huge.

The colouring job needs work. It needs to be more smoother, and it looks like you rushed it, with all the white spots in between the strokes. Take your time.

Overall, i'll give it a 6/10.
It's good, but there's a lot of room to improve in. Don't let negative posts discourage you. Keep drawing.


Btw, please, don't use your age as an excuse. Your age has nothing to do with how well you draw, so don't use it so that other members feel sorry for you.

Thanks for sticking up for me.....6/10 is the best I've had yet....[sarcasm]I wonder why[/sarcasm]

[Proline]

Originally Posted by xXDragon-BloodXx

Age matters not.

I'm with Dragon on this. Age doesn't matter at all, so don't give me or any of us this I'm only 10 years old shit, you ain't getting pity and you're not getting rated any easier. There are 13 year olds that are just as good if not better than a lot of good anime artists that are 18 or older. Don't try and pull that ----, some people might be amazed, but a lot of us just don't give a ----.

Oh, also don't be happy that it's not traced. Most artists don't trace so what makes you so special that you don't?

- Arms are way too skinny and the elbows start way too high.
- Feet are too small in comparison too the real Sora. If you're making fanart, TRY and keep it true to the original but in your own style.
- Face is too angular, even for anime
- Colouring needs some HUGE improvement
- learn how to press lighter on the pencil
- Hair needs some work too. Despite being spiked, Sora's hair spikes have some sligth curves to them, which really makes them look nice. You drew them too stiff. Even if it's anime, hair flows, so learn how it works.
- Hands are puny. Same with the fingers.
- Learn how the human body is like, learn some basic anatomy.

4/10

[kingdomheartsjak]

I Am 10 Years Old!!!! Do I Have To Spell It Out For You??????

[khchick]

Originally Posted by kingdomheartsjak

I Am 10 Years Old!!!! Do I Have To Spell It Out For You??????

i-a-m-t-e-n-y-e-a-r-s-o-l-d-g-o-d-u-f-r-i-g-g-i-n-r-e-t-a-r-d


lol

[Proline]

Originally Posted by kingdomheartsjak

I Am 10 Years Old!!!! Do I Have To Spell It Out For You??????

What I'm trying to say is I don't give a ---- if you're 10 years old. You can be a newborn baby, and if you draw that well, I don't care how old you are. This I'm only 10 years old --- is total crap to get us to crit you easier. Well know what? I ain't going any easier because you're only 10. Now stfu and learn how to read.

[Flashback Humor]

Originally Posted by Pedobear

What I'm trying to say is I don't give a --- if you're 10 years old. You can be a newborn baby, and if you draw that well, I don't care how old you are. This I'm only 10 years old ---- is total crap to get us to crit you easier. Well know what? I ain't going any easier because you're only 10. Now stfu and learn how to read.

Lawl. Pwned. XDDD
Nice, Pedobear. Haha.