Perspective Experiment

Ojike · 10/21/06, 04:24 AM

http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/41729790/

Inspired by the art by some stuff I saw while browsing around deviantart, I decided to experiment with perspective in action. It was extremely hard to get the guy getting punched to look right. I don't know if I should ink and color(color pencil) this picture or not...

**Proline** · 10/21/06, 04:38 AM

The hand on the guy who's getting hit needs to be larger. It's smaller than the head which gives off a wierd look. I'll edit this later on IF I remember. Gotta do some guitar practice and homework now ;_; sorry.

Ojike · 10/21/06, 07:14 AM

I couldn't resist coloring it. :l

http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e3...rimentcopy.jpg

**Kain** · 10/21/06, 11:13 PM

i like the colored version better but ya his hand is small -the guy getting hit- but other than that good like always 9/10

**Thelonepickle** · 10/22/06, 02:37 AM

^If there are flaws, how can it be a perfect score?

The guy being punched looks like he has pants. The colouring helped a little, but now it looks like he's furry. Guys usually have baggier pants - or did. Nowadays...

Also, the mouth on him looks very strange, though I do love the eyes and eyebrows and such. The expression on the other guy is very strange indeed.

Plus, the whole... I mean, look, he swings his fist to the side, and yet the guy falls forward. It doesn't really look like he punched him. Motion doesn't really look correct.

It's alright, though.

Circular Circles · 10/23/06, 10:30 PM

dont really like the big head but its real good. we have sum dam good artists on this site.

Ojike · 10/24/06, 12:33 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Thelonepickle

The guy being punched looks like he has pants. The colouring helped a little, but now it looks like he's furry. Guys usually have baggier pants - or did. Nowadays...

Let's just say he's metrosexual.

Quote:

Plus, the whole... I mean, look, he swings his fist to the side, and yet the guy falls forward. It doesn't really look like he punched him. Motion doesn't really look correct.

He's not really punching him...he's backhanding him. You know...b*tch slaping him, but with a fist. :D

Hip-Hop · 10/24/06, 02:21 AM

I always wished I could draw. A-

Enigmacy · 10/24/06, 02:53 AM

Whoa, you guys gotta tell me how you got so good at drawin': 9/10

I think everything looks great.xD

Did you take drawing classes or something?

Ojike · 10/26/06, 01:21 AM

I just read alot of manga.

I'm self taught for the most part. Though I am taking AP Art right now...

10/21/06, 04:24 AM	#1
Ojike The Truth Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: In your head. Age: 20 Posts: 1,719 Rep Power: 4	Perspective Experiment http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/41729790/ Inspired by the art by some stuff I saw while browsing around deviantart, I decided to experiment with perspective in action. It was extremely hard to get the guy getting punched to look right. I don't know if I should ink and color(color pencil) this picture or not...

10/21/06, 04:38 AM	#2
Proline Amino acids yeah Join Date: Mar 2005 Posts: 5,068 Rep Power: 13	Re: Perspective Experiment The hand on the guy who's getting hit needs to be larger. It's smaller than the head which gives off a wierd look. I'll edit this later on IF I remember. Gotta do some guitar practice and homework now ;_; sorry.

10/21/06, 07:14 AM	#3
Ojike The Truth Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: In your head. Age: 20 Posts: 1,719 Rep Power: 4	Re: Perspective Experiment I couldn't resist coloring it. :l http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e3...rimentcopy.jpg

10/21/06, 11:13 PM	#4
Kain ~Former Caboose~ Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: Protecting my new puppy from seph Age: 15 Posts: 3,258 Rep Power: 10	Re: Perspective Experiment i like the colored version better but ya his hand is small -the guy getting hit- but other than that good like always 9/10 Last edited by Kain; 10/24/06 at 12:51 AM.

10/22/06, 02:37 AM	#5
Thelonepickle I don't like bugs! Join Date: Jun 2005 Posts: 3,762 Rep Power: 7	Re: Perspective Experiment ^If there are flaws, how can it be a perfect score? The guy being punched looks like he has pants. The colouring helped a little, but now it looks like he's furry. Guys usually have baggier pants - or did. Nowadays... Also, the mouth on him looks very strange, though I do love the eyes and eyebrows and such. The expression on the other guy is very strange indeed. Plus, the whole... I mean, look, he swings his fist to the side, and yet the guy falls forward. It doesn't really look like he punched him. Motion doesn't really look correct. It's alright, though.

10/23/06, 10:30 PM	#6
Circular Circles Keyblade Wielder Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: in a box at the tippy top of a hill! Age: 16 Posts: 256 Rep Power: 3	Re: Perspective Experiment dont really like the big head but its real good. we have sum dam good artists on this site.

10/24/06, 02:21 AM	#8
Hip-Hop Obama for Mankind Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: Tryna beat life cuz I can't cheat death Age: 16 Posts: 2,638 Rep Power: 6	Re: Perspective Experiment I always wished I could draw. A-

10/24/06, 02:53 AM	#9
Enigmacy [Following my Path] Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: Square Enix Age: 15 Posts: 1,146 Rep Power: 4	Re: Perspective Experiment Whoa, you guys gotta tell me how you got so good at drawin': 9/10 I think everything looks great.xD Did you take drawing classes or something?

10/26/06, 01:21 AM	#10
Ojike The Truth Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: In your head. Age: 20 Posts: 1,719 Rep Power: 4	Re: Perspective Experiment I just read alot of manga. I'm self taught for the most part. Though I am taking AP Art right now...

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