Hey im new

zezion · 10/10/06, 06:57 AM

hey check out my drawing its based of of orginization 13 but the opposite it is called organization 31 his name is cirez,he is number 2 of organization 31 and his emblem is the heartless symbol

so waddya think it took me forever to draw especially with the shading and the weapon but it came out all right and you think so to

his name zack and he is number 5 of Oganization 31

http://www.123mycodes.com/image-edit...d8de809067.jpg

.:kaizer21:. · 10/10/06, 07:22 AM

Welcome to the forums, but there's no need to double-post. Just be patient until someone takes the time to look at your artwork.

Hmm. The Organization 31? So there are 31 members? Wow.
He looks kinda short. I think his torso needs to be slightly smaller, cause right now, it seems as if he's a short guy with a buff torso.
The hairstyle needs work IMO. It kinda looks like a wonky version of Yugi's hairstyle.
I think the coat needs some more detail.

As for the weapon, I think it looks fine, and I like the Heartless emblem you drew. I would just like to comment that it just looks a lot like Saix's claymore, and that I love Saix's claymore. o.o. Yes. XD

The shading? All I see is light dark spots around the figure. You need to think where the light is coming from. There are places on the cloak where there shadows shouldn't be. There's shadow on the top of his sleeve, but also on the bottom? I'm sure others will come up with good tips on where to place shadows, but I can't right now because i'm soo sleepy =.=

Overall, i'll give it an 6.5/10.
It's a good drawing, but it needs a lot of work.

PS you planning on drawing the entire Org? Lol, then you'd better get to work. There's 31 of them.

zezion · 10/10/06, 07:33 AM

uh il keep the hair it is the only kind i could think of and to me its awesome

Flashback Humor · 10/12/06, 12:31 AM

Your anatomy is off. His one foot is too big, hair DOES need work. So do your hands. Your shading too does need work, but Im not one to help on that, I need work myself somewhat.

Hip-Hop · 10/12/06, 03:10 AM

If he is Org. he need a "X" in his name.And he's a bit of a fat ass. I give it a C

zezion · 10/12/06, 03:27 AM

meant to say organization 31 and the opposite of x is z and hes supposed to be fat

Hip-Hop · 10/12/06, 03:36 AM

Regardless, C maybe C+ at best.

kairigirl · 10/13/06, 04:30 AM

^How come?

Zezion, I'm putting your two threads together, they're pretty much the same idea.

z and x are opposites? Letters are opposite? I'm curious as to your reasoning.

Anyways, I personally think this is better than the other one. It still seems really cartoonish, which is okay, but it also seems anime. :/ His coat doesn't really connect and the zipper looks...like squares, not zipper stuff. o-o You have good ideas but you need to work on the proportions and detail and shading.

First pic:
I think the main problem with his hair (and...Yugi's hair, for that matter) is that hair can't grow like that. What happens in the back? Hair will come to a curve? It looks too cartoonish. There's a difference between cartoon, anime, and realism.

Cartoon (oversized limbs, hair, made to look funny most often. Garfield is a good example, as are the Peanuts kids).
Anime (proportionate but simplified eyes and hair and such. The hair is considered part of fantasy almost in that it defies gravity and different colors. Any anime is a good example, but Rurouni Kenshin is a good example of anime).
Realism (looks like a photorgraph. Doesn't exaggerate and gets the point across. Looks like something you'd find in our world).

Yours is almost half-cartoon half-anime. It's proportionate somewhat but his hair doesn't seem to grow but instead seems like a hat of sorts. There's depth perception in most everything. Maybe try fixing it so it doesn't look like the warp star in Kirby?

Don't really have much to say. You have potential, but you may want to look at depth perception, shading, and how the human body works. When you're drawing a person, be it cartoon, anime, or realistic, it's essential that you know at least the basics of a person, if not the details.

^How come?

Zezion, I'm putting your two threads together, they're pretty much the same idea.

z and x are opposites? Letters are opposite? I'm curious as to your reasoning.

Anyways, I personally think this is better than the other one. It still seems really cartoonish, which is okay, but it also seems anime. :/ His coat doesn't really connect and the zipper looks...like squares, not zipper stuff. o-o You have good ideas but you need to work on the proportions and detail and shading.

zezion · 10/13/06, 05:43 AM

what happened to my second pic

kairigirl · 10/13/06, 05:59 AM

It's in the first thread. <-< I didn't make them both images though, it's a link. PM me if you have problems.

10/10/06, 06:57 AM	#1
zezion Court Mage Join Date: Oct 2006 Age: 18 Posts: 32 Rep Power: 0	hey check out my drawing its based of of orginization 13 but the opposite it is called organization 31 his name is cirez,he is number 2 of organization 31 and his emblem is the heartless symbol so waddya think it took me forever to draw especially with the shading and the weapon but it came out all right and you think so to his name zack and he is number 5 of Oganization 31 http://www.123mycodes.com/image-edit...d8de809067.jpg Last edited by kairigirl; 10/13/06 at 04:37 AM.

10/10/06, 07:22 AM	#2
.:kaizer21:. Banned Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: Toronto, Canada Age: 17 Posts: 1,336 Rep Power: 5	Re: Hey im new Welcome to the forums, but there's no need to double-post. Just be patient until someone takes the time to look at your artwork. Hmm. The Organization 31? So there are 31 members? Wow. He looks kinda short. I think his torso needs to be slightly smaller, cause right now, it seems as if he's a short guy with a buff torso. The hairstyle needs work IMO. It kinda looks like a wonky version of Yugi's hairstyle. I think the coat needs some more detail. As for the weapon, I think it looks fine, and I like the Heartless emblem you drew. I would just like to comment that it just looks a lot like Saix's claymore, and that I love Saix's claymore. o.o. Yes. XD The shading? All I see is light dark spots around the figure. You need to think where the light is coming from. There are places on the cloak where there shadows shouldn't be. There's shadow on the top of his sleeve, but also on the bottom? I'm sure others will come up with good tips on where to place shadows, but I can't right now because i'm soo sleepy =.= Overall, i'll give it an 6.5/10. It's a good drawing, but it needs a lot of work. PS you planning on drawing the entire Org? Lol, then you'd better get to work. There's 31 of them.

10/10/06, 07:33 AM	#3
zezion Court Mage Join Date: Oct 2006 Age: 18 Posts: 32 Rep Power: 0	Re: Hey im new uh il keep the hair it is the only kind i could think of and to me its awesome

10/12/06, 12:31 AM	#4
Flashback Humor relative power Join Date: Aug 2005 Age: 16 Posts: 2,169 Rep Power: 8	Re: Hey im new Your anatomy is off. His one foot is too big, hair DOES need work. So do your hands. Your shading too does need work, but Im not one to help on that, I need work myself somewhat.

10/12/06, 03:10 AM	#5
Hip-Hop Obama for Mankind Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: Tryna beat life cuz I can't cheat death Age: 16 Posts: 2,636 Rep Power: 6	Re: Hey check this one out If he is Org. he need a "X" in his name.And he's a bit of a fat ass. I give it a C

10/12/06, 03:27 AM	#6
zezion Court Mage Join Date: Oct 2006 Age: 18 Posts: 32 Rep Power: 0	Re: Hey check this one out meant to say organization 31 and the opposite of x is z and hes supposed to be fat

10/12/06, 03:36 AM	#7
Hip-Hop Obama for Mankind Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: Tryna beat life cuz I can't cheat death Age: 16 Posts: 2,636 Rep Power: 6	Re: Hey check this one out Regardless, C maybe C+ at best.

10/13/06, 04:30 AM	#8
kairigirl Bang! Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: Lost in my own Daydreams; or a Box. :/ Age: 19 Posts: 4,315 Rep Power: 10	^How come? Zezion, I'm putting your two threads together, they're pretty much the same idea. z and x are opposites? Letters are opposite? I'm curious as to your reasoning. Anyways, I personally think this is better than the other one. It still seems really cartoonish, which is okay, but it also seems anime. :/ His coat doesn't really connect and the zipper looks...like squares, not zipper stuff. o-o You have good ideas but you need to work on the proportions and detail and shading. First pic: I think the main problem with his hair (and...Yugi's hair, for that matter) is that hair can't grow like that. What happens in the back? Hair will come to a curve? It looks too cartoonish. There's a difference between cartoon, anime, and realism. Cartoon (oversized limbs, hair, made to look funny most often. Garfield is a good example, as are the Peanuts kids). Anime (proportionate but simplified eyes and hair and such. The hair is considered part of fantasy almost in that it defies gravity and different colors. Any anime is a good example, but Rurouni Kenshin is a good example of anime). Realism (looks like a photorgraph. Doesn't exaggerate and gets the point across. Looks like something you'd find in our world). Yours is almost half-cartoon half-anime. It's proportionate somewhat but his hair doesn't seem to grow but instead seems like a hat of sorts. There's depth perception in most everything. Maybe try fixing it so it doesn't look like the warp star in Kirby? Don't really have much to say. You have potential, but you may want to look at depth perception, shading, and how the human body works. When you're drawing a person, be it cartoon, anime, or realistic, it's essential that you know at least the basics of a person, if not the details. ^How come? Zezion, I'm putting your two threads together, they're pretty much the same idea. z and x are opposites? Letters are opposite? I'm curious as to your reasoning. Anyways, I personally think this is better than the other one. It still seems really cartoonish, which is okay, but it also seems anime. :/ His coat doesn't really connect and the zipper looks...like squares, not zipper stuff. o-o You have good ideas but you need to work on the proportions and detail and shading. Last edited by kairigirl; 10/13/06 at 04:37 AM.

10/13/06, 05:43 AM	#9
zezion Court Mage Join Date: Oct 2006 Age: 18 Posts: 32 Rep Power: 0	Re: Hey im new what happened to my second pic

10/13/06, 05:59 AM	#10
kairigirl Bang! Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: Lost in my own Daydreams; or a Box. :/ Age: 19 Posts: 4,315 Rep Power: 10	Re: Hey im new It's in the first thread. <-< I didn't make them both images though, it's a link. PM me if you have problems.

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