meh, just some old sketches

~~Desert Jesus~~ · 10/08/06, 05:35 AM

Yeah, I found some old sketches. =p I know I have like 50 of em somwhere... Anyways, heres a couple that I did to help concept a story I began. In fact, I plan on conitnuing it now that my schedule hasn't deprived me of it. W00.

Anyways, yeah, theyre kind of old, so no laughing...

Gah, laugh all you want. lol

http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n...Treeoflife.jpg

http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n...r_01/talan.jpg

http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n...er_01/Zale.jpg

http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n...r_01/Spite.jpg

http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n...r_01/spade.jpg

http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n..._01/Kratos.jpg

http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n..._01/Balkan.jpg

Yeah, I'm deffinetely going to make some more concept sketches. As you can see, these are pretty static and there isnt much movement. -sigh- Ill put an end to that.

TheTerrorofDeath · 10/08/06, 05:40 AM

Hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahah, nah j/k.

Anyways their pretty good for old sketches. I thought the third one was the best of them all. Wow, how much you've improved since then.......

Cameron · 10/09/06, 12:34 AM

Seeing as how I'm caught up in a sudden rush of neglected German homework, your critique will be presented intirely in German.

:D

Sie haben eine gute Berührung, wenn es zu Surrealismus kommt. Anatomie und das, wie eine Verbesserung benutzen könnte, als offensichtlich in den menschlichen Skizzen ist, aber wenn ich die ersten und fünften Bildnisse anschaue, gut sind sie viel besser.

Ich weiß, dass Sie verbessert haben, da Sie diese gemacht haben, aber die meisten Klagen gilt hier für Ihren jetzigen Stoff ebenso. Kurze Arme und Beine, häuft sich missgebildeter Muskel, und nur allgemeine Merkwürdigkeiten vom Körper. Behalten Sie, um es zu bearbeiten, und Anfang, den referances benutzt, statt was auch immer nur in Ihren Kopf aufplatzt.

Seiben uber zehn.

~Dorian Gray

Fatal_Blade · 10/09/06, 12:44 AM

hey your really good....keep it up

~~Desert Jesus~~ · 10/09/06, 12:46 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Dorian Gray

Seeing as how I'm caught up in a sudden rush of neglected German homework, your critique will be presented intirely in German.

:D

Sie haben eine gute Berührung, wenn es zu Surrealismus kommt. Anatomie und das, wie eine Verbesserung benutzen könnte, als offensichtlich in den menschlichen Skizzen ist, aber wenn ich die ersten und fünften Bildnisse anschaue, gut sind sie viel besser.

Ich weiß, dass Sie verbessert haben, da Sie diese gemacht haben, aber die meisten Klagen gilt hier für Ihren jetzigen Stoff ebenso. Kurze Arme und Beine, häuft sich missgebildeter Muskel, und nur allgemeine Merkwürdigkeiten vom Körper. Behalten Sie, um es zu bearbeiten, und Anfang, den referances benutzt, statt was auch immer nur in Ihren Kopf aufplatzt.

Seiben uber zehn.

~Dorian Gray

D=

Oh. Em. Gee .

Cameron · 10/09/06, 12:56 AM

Quote:

Oh. Em. Gee .

I'm like a tall Hitler :D

If you want, I'll throw up a translation...

~Dorian Gray

~~Desert Jesus~~ · 10/09/06, 01:06 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Dorian Gray

I'm like a tall Hitler :D

If you want, I'll throw up a translation...

~Dorian Gray

No, it's ok, FL gave me one. :D I appreciate the comments. ;) I will deffinetely try to improve.

kairigirl · 10/09/06, 03:42 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Dorian Gray

I'm like a tall Hitler :D

If you want, I'll throw up a translation...

~Dorian Gray

Yes please. @-@ My second language is broken spanish, not fluent german. >-o

Anyways, for being old sketches, nice. How old is "old" though? I like the first one, that hand one. o-o They're pretty good actually, and since you said they were/are old, I won't really give much of a critique. =P You've improved though.

Cameron · 10/09/06, 04:15 AM

I'm too lazy to do it word for word, so here's a really crappy internet translation :D

They have a good contact if it comes to Surrealism. Anatomy and that how an improvement could use, when obvious in the human sketches is, but if I regard the first and fifth likenesses, are good it much better.

I know that you improved, because you this made have, but apply most complaints here to your present material just as. Brevity of arms and legs, heaps itself cluster muscle, and only general noted worthiness of the body. You retain bursts in order to process it, and beginning that referances uses, instead of what also always only into your head open.

It's probably easier to understand in German :O

~Dorian Gray

kairigirl · 10/09/06, 05:15 AM

Ah, I see, gracias. o-o Good comment. x-x

**.:Raz:.** · 10/09/06, 05:20 AM

xP Better than anything I can do.

Divine Shadow · 10/09/06, 05:31 AM

first of all...all that german...deep man...reall deep. second...your pictures are pretty great for being "old". If you can draw that good then, now...you should be even better than before! i think that your style is interesting...following a more realistic view than using anime or manga, and that what you have drawn had beenmore personalized into your own style, thus making it your own work. Where as if it was manga, some people might say you traced or someone else drew it for you, but yours is completely oroginal and follows a certain style!. Good work.

Fatal_Blade · 10/09/06, 05:43 AM

did you free hand these???

LadyKairi_19 · 10/09/06, 01:00 PM

Hey wow, those are good. If those are old, then you must be even better now. Are those characters from some place or did you make them up? Its pretty good.

Overall I give it a 9/10. ^_^

Good Job!

~~Desert Jesus~~ · 10/09/06, 09:14 PM

Thanks ^^ Yeah, I free handed them. And yesh, they're all original.

10/08/06, 05:35 AM	#1
~~Desert Jesus~~ Banned Join Date: May 2006 Location: Florida Age: 19 Posts: 632 Rep Power: 0	meh, just some old sketches Yeah, I found some old sketches. =p I know I have like 50 of em somwhere... Anyways, heres a couple that I did to help concept a story I began. In fact, I plan on conitnuing it now that my schedule hasn't deprived me of it. W00. Anyways, yeah, theyre kind of old, so no laughing... Gah, laugh all you want. lol http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n...Treeoflife.jpg http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n...r_01/talan.jpg http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n...er_01/Zale.jpg http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n...r_01/Spite.jpg http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n...r_01/spade.jpg http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n..._01/Kratos.jpg http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n..._01/Balkan.jpg Yeah, I'm deffinetely going to make some more concept sketches. As you can see, these are pretty static and there isnt much movement. -sigh- Ill put an end to that.

10/08/06, 05:40 AM	#2
TheTerrorofDeath Returned Join Date: Sep 2005 Location: USA Posts: 3,250 Rep Power: 8	Re: meh, just some old sketches Hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahah, nah j/k. Anyways their pretty good for old sketches. I thought the third one was the best of them all. Wow, how much you've improved since then.......

10/09/06, 12:34 AM	#3
Cameron sup england, you want a death ray? Join Date: Feb 2006 Age: 14 Posts: 3,387 Rep Power: 8	Re: meh, just some old sketches Seeing as how I'm caught up in a sudden rush of neglected German homework, your critique will be presented intirely in German. :D Sie haben eine gute Berührung, wenn es zu Surrealismus kommt. Anatomie und das, wie eine Verbesserung benutzen könnte, als offensichtlich in den menschlichen Skizzen ist, aber wenn ich die ersten und fünften Bildnisse anschaue, gut sind sie viel besser. Ich weiß, dass Sie verbessert haben, da Sie diese gemacht haben, aber die meisten Klagen gilt hier für Ihren jetzigen Stoff ebenso. Kurze Arme und Beine, häuft sich missgebildeter Muskel, und nur allgemeine Merkwürdigkeiten vom Körper. Behalten Sie, um es zu bearbeiten, und Anfang, den referances benutzt, statt was auch immer nur in Ihren Kopf aufplatzt. Seiben uber zehn. ~Dorian Gray

10/09/06, 12:44 AM	#4
Fatal_Blade アリエン Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: That place Age: 16 Posts: 2,050 Rep Power: 7	Re: meh, just some old sketches hey your really good....keep it up

10/09/06, 04:15 AM	#9
Cameron sup england, you want a death ray? Join Date: Feb 2006 Age: 14 Posts: 3,387 Rep Power: 8	Re: meh, just some old sketches I'm too lazy to do it word for word, so here's a really crappy internet translation :D They have a good contact if it comes to Surrealism. Anatomy and that how an improvement could use, when obvious in the human sketches is, but if I regard the first and fifth likenesses, are good it much better. I know that you improved, because you this made have, but apply most complaints here to your present material just as. Brevity of arms and legs, heaps itself cluster muscle, and only general noted worthiness of the body. You retain bursts in order to process it, and beginning that referances uses, instead of what also always only into your head open. It's probably easier to understand in German :O ~Dorian Gray

10/09/06, 05:15 AM	#10
kairigirl Bang! Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: Lost in my own Daydreams; or a Box. :/ Age: 19 Posts: 4,318 Rep Power: 10	Re: meh, just some old sketches Ah, I see, gracias. o-o Good comment. x-x

10/09/06, 05:20 AM	#11
.:Raz:. <3 Kenley Collins <3 Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: A very boring, small hole of a town. Age: 15 Posts: 4,343 Rep Power: 13	Re: meh, just some old sketches xP Better than anything I can do.

10/09/06, 05:31 AM	#12
Divine Shadow Ruler of Light Join Date: May 2006 Location: in the recesses of my shattered mind, hoping to find a bit of sanity Posts: 620 Rep Power: 3	Re: meh, just some old sketches first of all...all that german...deep man...reall deep. second...your pictures are pretty great for being "old". If you can draw that good then, now...you should be even better than before! i think that your style is interesting...following a more realistic view than using anime or manga, and that what you have drawn had beenmore personalized into your own style, thus making it your own work. Where as if it was manga, some people might say you traced or someone else drew it for you, but yours is completely oroginal and follows a certain style!. Good work.

10/09/06, 05:43 AM	#13
Fatal_Blade アリエン Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: That place Age: 16 Posts: 2,050 Rep Power: 7	Re: meh, just some old sketches did you free hand these???

10/09/06, 01:00 PM	#14
LadyKairi_19 Ruler of Light Join Date: Mar 2004 Location: In the islands... Age: 18 Posts: 570 Rep Power: 5	Re: meh, just some old sketches Hey wow, those are good. If those are old, then you must be even better now. Are those characters from some place or did you make them up? Its pretty good. Overall I give it a 9/10. ^_^ Good Job!

10/09/06, 09:14 PM	#15
~~Desert Jesus~~ Banned Join Date: May 2006 Location: Florida Age: 19 Posts: 632 Rep Power: 0	Re: meh, just some old sketches Thanks ^^ Yeah, I free handed them. And yesh, they're all original.

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