My Keyblades.

KH Legend · 09/30/06, 07:42 PM

Here are some keyblades I drew in 5 minuets at the end of science.
http://i114.photobucket.com/albums/n...erKeyblade.jpg

http://i114.photobucket.com/albums/n...eNumeroDos.jpg

tell me if I should try to get better or just give up?

Theory Master · 09/30/06, 08:22 PM

give up!
i mean come on!
at least try harder... not flaming you in any way though.
put some detail into it....n the second 1 was deleted so i could not check it out

KH Legend · 09/30/06, 08:28 PM

Let me try to fix that. hold on a sec.

Shadukai X · 09/30/06, 08:28 PM

They're too absract, you need to put more time into your drawings, that my friend, is considered a bad doodle

KH Legend · 09/30/06, 08:38 PM

I fixed the link. Try agian. It should work.

Shadukai X · 09/30/06, 08:48 PM

Again, you need to put more time into your drwing if you want it to be considered as one

Vandread · 09/30/06, 09:06 PM

As they said, put more time and effort into your drawings if you want anyone to take you seriously.

Flashback Humor · 09/30/06, 11:04 PM

Youre joking right? Even a sucky artist could do something better than that in 5 minutes.
Add more detail. Not just lines.
Give up or keep trying. Just dont post things like that.

2/10.

+Final Mix+ · 09/30/06, 11:36 PM

Like all the others say and I am going to say...you need to put in a heck load more detail then you are currently. If you want to become good, keep trying. If not, I don't know why I would be typing this.

call_me_canada · 10/01/06, 12:07 AM

xXDragon-BloodXx don't be so rude. They have the right to post any art that they have, given that it is apropriate, if they choose to. When people post their work don't just chew them out. Even if you think their art sucks you give constructive criticism no rude comments.

KH Legend, like a lot of people have been saying it would be best to add some more detail. If you put a theme to the keyblade like in the games it would be easier to add more detail.

Angel's Prayer · 10/01/06, 03:25 AM

I think its fair personally, considering its 5 minutes, In that time my keyblades pretty much look like that. Basically, it looks like a skeleton, maybe if you added some more details, which of course means more time, it'd turn out great. You should finish it before you post it.

kairigirl · 10/01/06, 04:29 AM

While the edges of papers are wonderful spots for doodles (my notes every year have all kinds of doodles), doodles usually aren't the stuff that turns out as a wonderful piece of artwork. You look like you have good potential if you spent time outside of class drawing. Just find a theme for a keyblade and go from there. And I personally don't think it has to be detailed like the Ultima one, just something that resemebles a keyblade, well-designed and easy to handle. The ones you showed seem to have good potential if you developed them more and put them on a different piece of paper, one with science notes.

**.Ultima.** · 10/01/06, 01:41 PM

Try to add a little detail.. and maybe it could turn out better.. and please try to finish your work before posting it..

09/30/06, 07:42 PM	#1
KH Legend Disney Soldier Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: The lost isle of Hod Age: 15 Posts: 16 Rep Power: 0	My Keyblades. Here are some keyblades I drew in 5 minuets at the end of science. http://i114.photobucket.com/albums/n...erKeyblade.jpg http://i114.photobucket.com/albums/n...eNumeroDos.jpg tell me if I should try to get better or just give up? Last edited by KH Legend; 09/30/06 at 08:33 PM.

09/30/06, 08:22 PM	#2
Theory Master Ruler of Light Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: Salinas, Califas Age: 17 Posts: 502 Rep Power: 3	Re: My Keyblades. give up! i mean come on! at least try harder... not flaming you in any way though. put some detail into it....n the second 1 was deleted so i could not check it out

09/30/06, 08:28 PM	#3
KH Legend Disney Soldier Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: The lost isle of Hod Age: 15 Posts: 16 Rep Power: 0	Re: My Keyblades. Let me try to fix that. hold on a sec.

09/30/06, 08:28 PM	#4
Shadukai X The Original Shad Join Date: Apr 2005 Age: 18 Posts: 2,217 Rep Power: 7	Re: My Keyblades. They're too absract, you need to put more time into your drawings, that my friend, is considered a bad doodle

09/30/06, 08:38 PM	#5
KH Legend Disney Soldier Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: The lost isle of Hod Age: 15 Posts: 16 Rep Power: 0	Re: My Keyblades. I fixed the link. Try agian. It should work.

09/30/06, 08:48 PM	#6
Shadukai X The Original Shad Join Date: Apr 2005 Age: 18 Posts: 2,217 Rep Power: 7	Re: My Keyblades. Again, you need to put more time into your drwing if you want it to be considered as one

09/30/06, 09:06 PM	#7
Vandread Hinamizawa Syndrome Join Date: Sep 2005 Age: 18 Posts: 7,656 Rep Power: 17	Re: My Keyblades. As they said, put more time and effort into your drawings if you want anyone to take you seriously.

09/30/06, 11:04 PM	#8
Flashback Humor relative power Join Date: Aug 2005 Age: 16 Posts: 2,170 Rep Power: 8	Re: My Keyblades. Youre joking right? Even a sucky artist could do something better than that in 5 minutes. Add more detail. Not just lines. Give up or keep trying. Just dont post things like that. 2/10.

09/30/06, 11:36 PM	#9
+Final Mix+ Disney Soldier Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: I can see some green, some blue...no, I am in Australia Posts: 18 Rep Power: 3	Re: My Keyblades. Like all the others say and I am going to say...you need to put in a heck load more detail then you are currently. If you want to become good, keep trying. If not, I don't know why I would be typing this.

10/01/06, 12:07 AM	#10
call_me_canada Ruler of Light Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: Halloween Town Posts: 576 Rep Power: 5	Re: My Keyblades. xXDragon-BloodXx don't be so rude. They have the right to post any art that they have, given that it is apropriate, if they choose to. When people post their work don't just chew them out. Even if you think their art sucks you give constructive criticism no rude comments. KH Legend, like a lot of people have been saying it would be best to add some more detail. If you put a theme to the keyblade like in the games it would be easier to add more detail.

10/01/06, 03:25 AM	#11
Angel's Prayer ...killed instantly... Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: In the Garden of Hopes and Dreams, being mauled by Hummingbirds... Age: 19 Posts: 2,081 Rep Power: 5	Re: My Keyblades. I think its fair personally, considering its 5 minutes, In that time my keyblades pretty much look like that. Basically, it looks like a skeleton, maybe if you added some more details, which of course means more time, it'd turn out great. You should finish it before you post it.

10/01/06, 04:29 AM	#12
kairigirl Bang! Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: Lost in my own Daydreams; or a Box. :/ Age: 19 Posts: 4,318 Rep Power: 10	Re: My Keyblades. While the edges of papers are wonderful spots for doodles (my notes every year have all kinds of doodles), doodles usually aren't the stuff that turns out as a wonderful piece of artwork. You look like you have good potential if you spent time outside of class drawing. Just find a theme for a keyblade and go from there. And I personally don't think it has to be detailed like the Ultima one, just something that resemebles a keyblade, well-designed and easy to handle. The ones you showed seem to have good potential if you developed them more and put them on a different piece of paper, one with science notes.

10/01/06, 01:41 PM	#13
.Ultima. No. 4 Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Urahara Store Age: 16 Posts: 3,085 Rep Power: 7	Re: My Keyblades. Try to add a little detail.. and maybe it could turn out better.. and please try to finish your work before posting it..

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