A few Sketches

TheTerrorofDeath · 06/06/06, 03:02 AM

Alright so here are a few swords ive designed to pick from for a few characters in my game. Tell me what you think and im aware they are a little light.

AngelOfDestruction · 06/06/06, 03:38 AM

All You Have To Do Is Make Them In Real Paper

kh_and_ratm_hero · 06/06/06, 03:42 AM

i think its pretty cool

you just need to make it darker

i guess thats why they call it a sketch lol

TheTerrorofDeath · 06/06/06, 03:44 AM

Hah yeah, basically. Il'll try to make them darker later. I mean you guys can see them to criticize or anything like that right? Oh and angel nobody im kind of just brainstorming for my game so im not using real paper yet.

little chiyo · 06/06/06, 05:11 PM

They're pretty good! i think they're wonderful compared to what i can draw:D

Ojike · 06/06/06, 05:19 PM

certain ones look like they'd be hard to hold, but overall, i like them ^^

Vendetta · 06/06/06, 08:19 PM

I like the basic idea's. They're good.

But on the second one, where is the handle? Maybe I just don't see it. But it looks as if there is none.
And, the first four or so look like swords. I believe they're all supposed to be idea's for keyblades, correct? If not, they're okay. Good idea's, and I understand they are skecthes.

The one with the two wrappings swirling up to the top, I've seen. At least an extremely similar idea. So, maybe you should try adding something a bit different. Maybe a more detailed design for your final project. Something to set it apart from the rest. IMO, the third is what you have best going for you. Try making it a bit more keyblade like, on your final. Or your next sketch. I'm going to rate this on idea, not detail or form. So don't worry <3

Idea - 7/10
Structure - 6/10

Overall - 6.5/10

They aren't bad, just spice them up a bit. If you know what I mean. Add their own unique feeling, and look. Good luck with your final.

TheTerrorofDeath · 06/07/06, 03:42 AM

Thanks for your rating everyone.

Umm to clear things up, they aren't keyblades at all, just swords I thought up in a short time

I have never seen a sword similar to my second one, but if its not unique I might as well change it. I forgot to put handles on fourth one indeed. Sorry about that ;) I liked my third one the best as you did blood alchemist.

Come one I need more critiques so I can fix them up for my game.

(Oh blood alchemist could you maybe give me a rating for my swords on graphics?)

slinky · 06/07/06, 06:02 AM

looks cool but u could have made it a little darker

TheTerrorofDeath · 06/07/06, 11:46 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by slinky

looks cool but u could have made it a little darker

Thanks, but one word, Sketches.

TheTerrorofDeath · 06/09/06, 02:15 AM

^BUMP

Any other critiques?

Ojike · 06/09/06, 02:20 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Riku's Nobody

^BUMP

Any other critiques?

No, but I do have a question. Do these have anything to do with the characters I'm drawing?

TheTerrorofDeath · 06/09/06, 02:23 AM

Yes it does. I was going to ask you to incorperate them onto my character drawings but I drew them like 2 days after I asked you to draw them so it was a little late.

XxXHeartlessXxX · 06/09/06, 03:58 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by little chiyo

They're pretty good! i think they're wonderful compared to what i can draw:D

lol thats how i feel!
i can't draw for my life...
but im a different type of artist...
IM A PHOTOGRAPHER!
:D

06/06/06, 03:02 AM	#1
TheTerrorofDeath Returned Join Date: Sep 2005 Location: USA Posts: 3,252 Rep Power: 8	A few Sketches Alright so here are a few swords ive designed to pick from for a few characters in my game. Tell me what you think and im aware they are a little light.

06/06/06, 03:38 AM	#2
AngelOfDestruction Waldo lover Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: Give me rep then I'll tell gets Rep Haha!sucker!!!gets deleted RepDamn Posts: 1,272 Rep Power: 4	Re: A few Sketches All You Have To Do Is Make Them In Real Paper

06/06/06, 03:42 AM	#3
kh_and_ratm_hero Disney Soldier Join Date: Jun 2006 Posts: 9 Rep Power: 0	Re: A few Sketches i think its pretty cool you just need to make it darker i guess thats why they call it a sketch lol

06/06/06, 03:44 AM	#4
TheTerrorofDeath Returned Join Date: Sep 2005 Location: USA Posts: 3,252 Rep Power: 8	Re: A few Sketches Hah yeah, basically. Il'll try to make them darker later. I mean you guys can see them to criticize or anything like that right? Oh and angel nobody im kind of just brainstorming for my game so im not using real paper yet.

06/06/06, 05:11 PM	#5
little chiyo Keyblade Novice Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: um........great question!! Posts: 92 Rep Power: 0	Re: A few Sketches They're pretty good! i think they're wonderful compared to what i can draw:D

06/06/06, 05:19 PM	#6
Ojike The Truth Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: In your head. Age: 20 Posts: 1,719 Rep Power: 4	Re: A few Sketches certain ones look like they'd be hard to hold, but overall, i like them ^^

06/06/06, 08:19 PM	#7
Vendetta Personal [^^^] Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: In the artless world. Age: 17 Posts: 1,644 Rep Power: 5	Re: A few Sketches I like the basic idea's. They're good. But on the second one, where is the handle? Maybe I just don't see it. But it looks as if there is none. And, the first four or so look like swords. I believe they're all supposed to be idea's for keyblades, correct? If not, they're okay. Good idea's, and I understand they are skecthes. The one with the two wrappings swirling up to the top, I've seen. At least an extremely similar idea. So, maybe you should try adding something a bit different. Maybe a more detailed design for your final project. Something to set it apart from the rest. IMO, the third is what you have best going for you. Try making it a bit more keyblade like, on your final. Or your next sketch. I'm going to rate this on idea, not detail or form. So don't worry <3 Idea - 7/10 Structure - 6/10 Overall - 6.5/10 They aren't bad, just spice them up a bit. If you know what I mean. Add their own unique feeling, and look. Good luck with your final.

06/07/06, 03:42 AM	#8
TheTerrorofDeath Returned Join Date: Sep 2005 Location: USA Posts: 3,252 Rep Power: 8	Re: A few Sketches Thanks for your rating everyone. Umm to clear things up, they aren't keyblades at all, just swords I thought up in a short time I have never seen a sword similar to my second one, but if its not unique I might as well change it. I forgot to put handles on fourth one indeed. Sorry about that ;) I liked my third one the best as you did blood alchemist. Come one I need more critiques so I can fix them up for my game. (Oh blood alchemist could you maybe give me a rating for my swords on graphics?)

06/07/06, 06:02 AM	#9
slinky are we having FUN yet?!? Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: somewhere falling down stairs what else? Age: 17 Posts: 1,080 Rep Power: 5	Re: A few Sketches looks cool but u could have made it a little darker

06/09/06, 02:15 AM	#11
TheTerrorofDeath Returned Join Date: Sep 2005 Location: USA Posts: 3,252 Rep Power: 8	Re: A few Sketches ^BUMP Any other critiques?

06/09/06, 02:23 AM	#13
TheTerrorofDeath Returned Join Date: Sep 2005 Location: USA Posts: 3,252 Rep Power: 8	Re: A few Sketches Yes it does. I was going to ask you to incorperate them onto my character drawings but I drew them like 2 days after I asked you to draw them so it was a little late.

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