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    Dogs Eating Dogs Smoofy's Avatar
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    Default Smoofy's various musical works of Musical-ness!

    So, I have found myself into a band, and we uh, well we play music! If anyone is interested, I'd really appreciate it you would take a listen to our covers, originals and what not and tell me what you think, maybe what we could improve on? Thanks!

    First is a cover of Blink 182's Dammit :D


    And this is an acoustic version of a song that we need to complete recording! :D


    An as of yet unfinished, untitled (sorta) song I am working on, please excuse mistakes, the song will be cleaned up soon!:


    Any constructive criticism is greatly appreciated!
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    Default Re: Smoofy's various musical works of Musical-ness!

    I like the music. I'm not such a fan of the singing. In the first video, he sounds like he's not really used to singing and it's pretty bad. The second video, the singing sounds a little better, but it could be a little louder. That way, if you add in all the other instruments, it doesn't get drowned out.

    Good luck with your band!

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    Default Re: Smoofy's various musical works of Musical-ness!

    Thanks for the input!
    Just to clarify, we have two singers in the first video. Are you talking about the "It's alright, to tell me..." singer or the "And it's happened once again..." singer? We recently had our singer leave the band, so the guitarists have had to step their game up... we're working on improving!

    And yea, the second video wasn't really mixed properly in retrospect, thanks for help!
    Last edited by Smoofy; June 27, 2012 at 11:39 PM.
    Kingdom Hearts: The Keyblade War Pt. 2

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    Default Re: Smoofy's various musical works of Musical-ness!

    The "It's alright to tell me" singer. I'm glad I can help.

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    Default Re: Smoofy's various musical works of Musical-ness!

    Ok cool, thanks!
    It's always good to find multiple opinions and areas we need to improve on!
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