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Old October 17th, 2009, 05:15 AM   #1
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Old October 17th, 2009, 05:28 AM   #2
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from the middle up, she looks like a guy :v specifically the head. I think it might be because of the fact it looks majorly disproportioned in the way that her head is practically as wide as her shoulders. i don't know. just something about her looks too... masculine, imo
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Old October 17th, 2009, 05:31 AM   #3
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I don't draw women well at all. There are too many sharp angles in the upper torso which is why she probably looks so masculine. She was much more girly in the sketch, so I'll have to change that later/tomorrow/never.
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Old October 17th, 2009, 05:39 AM   #4
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specifically the collarbone, I think. take that out and it would be a lot better
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Old October 17th, 2009, 06:30 AM   #5
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She has an adam's apple lmfao :l I just realized that. It's definitely the lineart that's giving the masculinity look.
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Old October 17th, 2009, 07:30 PM   #6
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her stomach looks like a guys where the penis lines start to show.
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Old October 17th, 2009, 08:23 PM   #7
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Looks very masculine. Has she been working out?

Anyway...Its pretty good except for the masculine bit and i just realised that she has no boobs. unless she's young.
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Old October 17th, 2009, 09:07 PM   #8
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She's 16 and not developed.

Anyway, touched it up. Should be loads better.
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Old October 17th, 2009, 09:09 PM   #9
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Ah okay.


i don't see the difference...Well i can't see it very well but I noticed that the neck is kinda more lady-like.
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Old October 17th, 2009, 09:22 PM   #10
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That's because you have a horrible memory.

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Old October 17th, 2009, 09:34 PM   #11
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if that little blue shirt is suppose to be like too small for her, maybe you should make the straps shorter. just saying. cuz they look like, sorta long a little, for it to be regular size, and if it's smaller, well yeah...idk. maybe try rounding the knees a bit more. tiny bitt.. well her right knee...the knee on the left side of the thingy yeah.
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Old October 17th, 2009, 09:37 PM   #12
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I totally understand each and every problem that this picture has.

I'm not working on it though because it's a hassle.
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Old October 17th, 2009, 09:49 PM   #13
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That's because you have a horrible memory.
Thats what i thought.

anyway. It's definately more feminine. Good job.

I won't go on with more CnC since you just said:
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Old October 17th, 2009, 10:13 PM   #14
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I totally understand each and every problem that this picture has.

I'm not working on it though because it's a hassle.
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Old October 18th, 2009, 02:27 AM   #15
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