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| Enigmatic Soldier | So this is my first post in the Arts section. This is a random character I created. I would like it to be coloured, but I lack the skills and knowledge to colour it on a computer. Criticism is welcome, in fact the more the better :). Last edited by destinykh; October 13th, 2009 at 03:42 PM. |
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| Beauty Blooms in all Forms Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: somewhere getting distracted =P Age: 17 Posts: 1,769
Rep Power: 3 ![]() ![]() Currently playing: Tic-Tac-Toe XD Level: 31 EXP: | wow thats really good, but his shoulders seem a lil too wide or his head is a lil too small. Idk something looks funky i like it though reminds me of terra ;) |
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| Keyblade Wielder Join Date: Oct 2009 Location: YOUR GIRLFRIEND'S HOUSE. Posts: 413
Rep Power: 1 ![]() Level: EXP: | he looks like a younger version of this character from a show ... cant remember the name...but thats an awesome picture ! lol one question? whys he gotta 6 pack ?? lol |
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| Keyblade Wielder Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: In a magical place where nobody has to make sense so everybody does Age: 13 Posts: 403
Rep Power: 1 ![]() Level: EXP: | He looks like a really buff Jett(or Jet I cant remember). |
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| buried beneath the waves. | i'm guessing you're not good at hands? the arm guard looks worse than the hand would have looked by itself. |
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| last in line | Quote:
EDIT: By the way, the left side of the sword handle looks a little out of place. :P | |
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| Whoop-de-doo Join Date: Sep 2008 Location: The World of Emoticons Posts: 1,876
Rep Power: 4 ![]() ![]() Currently playing: Uncharted 2 Level: 19 EXP: | That poor t-shirt, look how much it has been stretched. xD Yeah, the hands do look intensionally hidden. Look at some tutorials for hands, if you would like to improve. I have seen some good ones on deviant art. I like your style, to be honest. Its cartoon-y. |
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| Enigmatic Soldier | Thanks for the comments guys!! Quote:
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| Ghost to Glory Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: death coins Posts: 8,927
Rep Power: 14 ![]() ![]() Level: 25 EXP: | keep your line weight in mind when drawing the drawing would very much benefit from some kind of shading to give it more depth |
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| Sidekick Join Date: Jun 2009 Age: 14 Posts: 309
Rep Power: 1 ![]() Level: EXP: | it seems like you are not good at hands since they look like they are hidden, that arm on the left looks weird but other than that its fine |
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| Enigmatic Soldier | Quote:
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