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Old October 3rd, 2009, 03:07 PM   #1
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Okay, so last time I posted in Traditional Media I drew an extreamly bad drawing, but I like to think I have improved since then.

Here is some of my more recent art, and yes, I know I have a very strange and ugly way of colouring. I also think I use the lighting tool way to much. @__@:

http://lil-ibeatsephy.deviantart.com...airi-138073513

..::- What Now?-::.. by ~Lil-IBeatSephy on deviantART

Neku in a Tux by ~Lil-IBeatSephy on deviantART

My Puppet Broke Loose V2 by ~Lil-IBeatSephy on deviantART

Please look and enjoy, and I guess I could use some CnC.
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Old October 3rd, 2009, 07:12 PM   #2
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From what I've seen, you really need to work on hands to start off.

You have potential, but you need to work a bit harder.
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Old October 3rd, 2009, 07:24 PM   #3
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the what now one was a bit... awkward

be happy you're not as bad as me

and like annoyance said you have potential, just keep practising you'll get better
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Old October 3rd, 2009, 11:18 PM   #4
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Well from what I can see you do have potential and, as Annoyance said, try working more on hands. Another thing that might be good to work on is adding "movement" to their clothes. Because when wearing clothes, the fabric doesn't fall perfectly flat, there are wrinkles and gathers according to how the person wearing the clothes is positioned. Now, I'm not the greatest at explaining things so I hope that made sense...
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Old October 4th, 2009, 06:10 AM   #5
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From what I've seen, you really need to work on hands to start off.

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Well from what I can see you do have potential and, as Annoyance said, try working more on hands. Another thing that might be good to work on is adding "movement" to their clothes. Because when wearing clothes, the fabric doesn't fall perfectly flat, there are wrinkles and gathers according to how the person wearing the clothes is positioned. Now, I'm not the greatest at explaining things so I hope that made sense...
Okay. I will be sure to practise on hands and clothing folds alot more.

Thanks for the cnc, everyone.
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Old October 4th, 2009, 03:45 PM   #6
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You need to practice for maybe 3 months or so before coming back here. Those drawings are horrible. My Puppet Broke Loose wasn't all that bad, for your level.
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Old October 5th, 2009, 06:06 AM   #7
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What abominations have you unleashed upon the world?

Take a drawing class or something.
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Old October 5th, 2009, 12:06 PM   #8
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You need to practice for maybe 3 months or so before coming back here. Those drawings are horrible. My Puppet Broke Loose wasn't all that bad, for your level.
Well, I didn't plan on coming back tommorow with another drawing to show, so I will be spending a while away for TM on KHI. I may look at alot of tutorials on DA, if it will help. I have already been spending time looking at anatomy tuts.

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Old October 6th, 2009, 12:55 AM   #9
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The puppet was the best imo. All you need is practice.
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Old October 6th, 2009, 01:37 AM   #10
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Agreed with everyone that posted above. Practice is needed ;P But you'll get there, trust me. xD
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