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Old September 16th, 2009, 06:06 AM   #1
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......i'm only 12 , so if you criticize, please don't criticize too hard on me

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Old September 16th, 2009, 07:25 AM   #2
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bloody hell you don't need to be critized, you need to be praised. ^^

seriously, you have good talent at this ( i suck now XD)
maybe more shading will shape it up more.
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Old September 16th, 2009, 07:26 AM   #3
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Whoa It looks amazing....
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Old September 16th, 2009, 07:36 AM   #4
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I'm twelve and what is this.

This is brilliant for a twelve year old is what.
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Old September 16th, 2009, 07:38 AM   #5
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I rather like the detailing of (I'm assuming it is) Kairi's eyes, but aside from that, a lot of detail is lost in the hair, seemingly from accidental smudging. Aside from that, there's very little shading detail, whether it be directional shading or anything to sho a light source, aside from that under her breats, it seems.

Ollette... Is looking rather Asian there. I think, specifically, you should bring the eyes closer together, and probably the tip of her nose up a bit, as well.

I'd recommend as a general to try to keep the black areas more constant, and in one direction, because it is really showing up at the moment
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Old September 16th, 2009, 07:41 AM   #6
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ok. u know i love praising you, akami, :D

hmmm... i think..maybe work on ..boobs? maybe... or at least like the neck maybe... but only if ya going to try to be more realistic.. but if ya go for the anime style..then nvm. unless it's like a guy drawing...i think. lol.
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Old September 16th, 2009, 05:43 PM   #7
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her head isn't going too well with the body
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Old September 16th, 2009, 05:47 PM   #8
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the eyes and the hair in the first one look amazing.
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Old September 16th, 2009, 05:49 PM   #9
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Twelve year olds dont draw like this where I'm from.

You're great at this, if anything, you make me feel embarassed about any of my attempts at people. As others have said, you only need to practice in a spot or two but other then that, you're excellent and I bow to your pre-teen prowess. ^.^
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Old September 16th, 2009, 06:16 PM   #10
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I think you just need to work a bit on the shoulders but holy hell the faces are amazing.
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Old September 16th, 2009, 06:53 PM   #11
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You're really good for 12 (or are you 13 now? hah.) I'd love to see what you can do when you get older and develop more.
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Old September 17th, 2009, 12:05 AM   #12
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I rather like the detailing of (I'm assuming it is) Kairi's eyes, but aside from that, a lot of detail is lost in the hair, seemingly from accidental smudging. Aside from that, there's very little shading detail, whether it be directional shading or anything to sho a light source, aside from that under her breats, it seems.

Ollette... Is looking rather Asian there. I think, specifically, you should bring the eyes closer together, and probably the tip of her nose up a bit, as well.

I'd recommend as a general to try to keep the black areas more constant, and in one direction, because it is really showing up at the moment

heheh, thanks for the advices! lol, (nope that person is not kairi)

and about olette...yes i'm sorry T_T it seems like whenever i draw something, it turns out to look a bit asian.
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Old September 17th, 2009, 12:05 AM   #13
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You're really good for 12 (or are you 13 now? hah.) I'd love to see what you can do when you get older and develop more.
Well yes, i'm 13 nao :O, i just turned 13 today....XD, and thank you!
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Old September 17th, 2009, 12:07 AM   #14
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I think you just need to work a bit on the shoulders but holy hell the faces are amazing.
yep....i always suck at the bodies, but thank you :)
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Old September 17th, 2009, 12:07 AM   #15
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Twelve year olds dont draw like this where I'm from.

You're great at this, if anything, you make me feel embarassed about any of my attempts at people. As others have said, you only need to practice in a spot or two but other then that, you're excellent and I bow to your pre-teen prowess. ^.^

ahh, okay ^_^ and thank you very much!
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