My Kairi

[SoraxRoxas]

Try to draw a picture I saw online, but I went wrong, then I made the picture a little different, but does not look like Kairi

[Organization_42]

No, it might make a good original character for you, but it's not exactly Kairi. The nose is too dark and almost looks piggish, and her hair's a little too wild. Even when it blows in the wind, it doesn't go all over the place. But you've got the shape of her head right!

As for the rest of the drawing, it's mostly good, like her shoulders and her mouth and her eye. But I would draw the other eye too, before you start working on the hair, and then as you start to draw her bangs, erase the part of the eye that gets covered. That way we can see that she's got two eyes and it looks more like a profile picture. At least, that's my advice; I hope it helped!

For what it's worth, your drawing is much better than any attempt by me.

[SoraxRoxas]

Thank you very much for the advice, I try to upload it and improve it later, thanks.

[ZanexChaos]

It doesn't look quite like her, but I think you should use it as an original character, like Organization_42 said. It looks cool and well drawn : D

[Annoyance]

Yeah, this isn't Kairi.

Maybe you had someone else in mind? D:


But decent drawing regardless.

[~*Luna*~]

Her jaw is far too big. For that amount of jaw exposed, it'd be a good idea to draw an ear. The nose is the wrong angle. There's too much nostril on show, and it points upwards too much (which makes it look a bit like Michael Jackson.) Also, does she only have one eye? They're just minor flaws though which can easily be fixed. Also, get some plain paper. :)