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| relative power | Oy, nothing? Come on guys. |
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| It's been one day, and if people don't feel like posting, they won't. Since I'm posting anyway... Fix the dude's arm in the first sketch. Actually fill it out, so we actually have something to critique, and stop 'forgetting' things in your art. |
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| relative power | Great crit. You've told me nothing to fix. I've no idea what's wrong with his arm. |
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| lol sup | you know blind people still have a pupil. |
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| relative power | He was born with out pupils and irises. That's why it's in the description. |
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| Disney Soldier | Kay, I have a few critics. :D In the first sketch (Standing on edge), something's a little awkward about the arm that's holding onto his neck. I think the way you folded his arm is wrong. In the second sketch (Blind person is blind), his jawline is a little off. It shouldn't connect to the back of his neck like that. Other than that, great sketches. :] |
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| Man Who Killed The Sun Called Moon | Quote:
Also, I think your blind dude's right eye needs a little work so that it's size is closer to his left and leveled with it and doesn't look like it's popping out quite so much. | |
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| Amino acids yeah Join Date: Mar 2005
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Rep Power: 15 ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() | Anatomy, work on it. There's my critic and it's probably the best critique you'll get. |
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| relative power | Quote:
@Ken. Still shitty crit. You didn't point out anything wrong, exactly, so I don't know what to fix. By just saying "anatomy" you're not telling what to fix, as everything is anatomy in of itself. What's anatomically wrong? The face? The arms? The legs? What? No, you're "critique" was not good - it was sub par, and definately not the best I'll ever recieve. Maybe if you point out what's wrong, then, and maybe only then, I'll consider what you've said and take you more seriously. Thanks @ everyone else though, tis' appreciated. | |
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| A Beating Black Wing Join Date: Apr 2008 Age: 15
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Rep Power: 5 ![]() ![]() | Theyre pretty good. Better than i could ever draw. |
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| Amino acids yeah Join Date: Mar 2005
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Rep Power: 15 ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() | Quote:
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| relative power | And yet you're the only person to ever say that my anatomy as a whole is off. |
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| Amino acids yeah Join Date: Mar 2005
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Rep Power: 15 ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() | Because it is. Most people are going to say things to simply improve the picture slightly whereas learning full and correct anatomy improves your skill and future pictures. If you can't accept the fact your anatomy sucks then stop drawing. |
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| relative power | And it doesn't completely suck. If people with the college education say that my anatomy is generally fine, then you must be the one who's wrong. What ever happened to just drawing because it's fun and entertaining to? Y'people act like if nothing is 100% correct than I should stop drawing altogether. Attitudes are just absolutely shit, especially because you act like you know every single bit and tiny of anatomy there is to know. What causes people to stop at an early time in their...we'll say "career" as an artist, is because people like you can't differentiate between how to change how they critique to accomadate certain parties of people. No, I'm not saying it's a horrible thing to give someone harsh critique, because I agree that that is the best kind, but what you've said in the past posts isn't harsh or anything, it's just downright ignorant and rude. So seriously, unless you're going to provide helpful crit, don't post on any of my stuff anymore, thanks. |
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