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Old 08/30/08, 01:11 AM   #1
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standing on edge by ~xXDragon-BloodXx on deviantART

blind person is blind by ~xXDragon-BloodXx on deviantART

Eh. Sketches.
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Old 08/31/08, 02:59 AM   #2
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Oy, nothing? Come on guys.
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Old 08/31/08, 03:47 AM   #3
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It's been one day, and if people don't feel like posting, they won't.

Since I'm posting anyway...

Fix the dude's arm in the first sketch. Actually fill it out, so we actually have something to critique, and stop 'forgetting' things in your art.
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Old 08/31/08, 05:41 AM   #4
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Great crit. You've told me nothing to fix. I've no idea what's wrong with his arm.
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Old 08/31/08, 06:39 AM   #5
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you know blind people still have a pupil.
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Old 08/31/08, 06:54 AM   #6
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He was born with out pupils and irises. That's why it's in the description.
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Old 08/31/08, 07:18 AM   #7
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Kay, I have a few critics. :D
In the first sketch (Standing on edge), something's a little awkward about the arm that's holding onto his neck. I think the way you folded his arm is wrong.

In the second sketch (Blind person is blind), his jawline is a little off. It shouldn't connect to the back of his neck like that.

Other than that, great sketches. :]
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Old 09/03/08, 04:47 AM   #8
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Great crit. You've told me nothing to fix. I've no idea what's wrong with his arm.
I think he's talking about his right arm, which, compared to the rest of his body, could be a bit darker and probably use a bit more detail to make it look like it's part of him.

Also, I think your blind dude's right eye needs a little work so that it's size is closer to his left and leveled with it and doesn't look like it's popping out quite so much.
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Old 09/03/08, 06:18 AM   #9
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Anatomy, work on it.

There's my critic and it's probably the best critique you'll get.
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Old 09/03/08, 09:10 PM   #10
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I think he's talking about his right arm, which, compared to the rest of his body, could be a bit darker and probably use a bit more detail to make it look like it's part of him.

Also, I think your blind dude's right eye needs a little work so that it's size is closer to his left and leveled with it and doesn't look like it's popping out quite so much.
Mm, you're right, but I was going more for a kind of turning his head to look behind him, which your head tilts a bit when doing so. None the less, thanks.


@Ken. Still shitty crit. You didn't point out anything wrong, exactly, so I don't know what to fix. By just saying "anatomy" you're not telling what to fix, as everything is anatomy in of itself. What's anatomically wrong? The face? The arms? The legs? What? No, you're "critique" was not good - it was sub par, and definately not the best I'll ever recieve. Maybe if you point out what's wrong, then, and maybe only then, I'll consider what you've said and take you more seriously.

Thanks @ everyone else though, tis' appreciated.
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Old 09/03/08, 10:17 PM   #11
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Theyre pretty good. Better than i could ever draw.
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Old 09/04/08, 07:43 AM   #12
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@Ken. Still shitty crit. You didn't point out anything wrong, exactly, so I don't know what to fix. By just saying "anatomy" you're not telling what to fix, as everything is anatomy in of itself. What's anatomically wrong? The face? The arms? The legs? What? No, you're "critique" was not good - it was sub par, and definately not the best I'll ever recieve. Maybe if you point out what's wrong, then, and maybe only then, I'll consider what you've said and take you more seriously.
When I say anatomy, I mean everything needs to be fixed.
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Old 09/04/08, 11:17 PM   #13
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And yet you're the only person to ever say that my anatomy as a whole is off.
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Old 09/04/08, 11:29 PM   #14
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Because it is. Most people are going to say things to simply improve the picture slightly whereas learning full and correct anatomy improves your skill and future pictures.

If you can't accept the fact your anatomy sucks then stop drawing.
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Old 09/05/08, 04:00 AM   #15
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And it doesn't completely suck. If people with the college education say that my anatomy is generally fine, then you must be the one who's wrong.

What ever happened to just drawing because it's fun and entertaining to? Y'people act like if nothing is 100% correct than I should stop drawing altogether.

Attitudes are just absolutely shit, especially because you act like you know every single bit and tiny of anatomy there is to know.

What causes people to stop at an early time in their...we'll say "career" as an artist, is because people like you can't differentiate between how to change how they critique to accomadate certain parties of people.
No, I'm not saying it's a horrible thing to give someone harsh critique, because I agree that that is the best kind, but what you've said in the past posts isn't harsh or anything, it's just downright ignorant and rude.

So seriously, unless you're going to provide helpful crit, don't post on any of my stuff anymore, thanks.
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