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Old August 10th, 2008, 03:06 AM   #1
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Old August 10th, 2008, 10:56 AM   #2
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This is an awesome piece.
I'm sure you get this a lot but you are truly a master at photoshop.
That being said the only problems I have is the level of detail.
You designed her face and the top of her hair to be detailed but as you go down to her shirt and the bottom half of her hair the blurry effect sets in. I personally don't like it seeing as for me it takes away from the overall unity of it.

I get that you were going for that effect to a degree but i think if you but a little more detail on the part of her shirt that's closer to you and then let parts of that fade into the background it would be a little better.

That's really my only criticism

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Old August 10th, 2008, 11:33 AM   #3
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Muchos thanks, no sure if I can say that enough to one person, haha.
& yeah, I get what you mean about the level of detail, and how it deteriorates towards the bottom, but I mostly did that to keep anything from interfering with the main focal point.
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Next time, I'll try to keep the details constant
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Oh i understand completely. In all honestly i think it would have put a bigger "pop" if you will on the focal point because it wouldn't just be on the face but part of the shirt so your eye drifts from there back to the logo.
It's still an extremely badass picture haha. I couldn't do that well in photoshop if i tried.
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Old August 10th, 2008, 11:46 AM   #5
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I'll nearly always do my lineart in opencanvas. I only color and do post-work in Photoshop
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Old August 10th, 2008, 01:29 PM   #6
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Aye, I love love love this picture. The expression of her face really caught my eye, as well as the detail you put into it. I actually really like how you made it blurry towards the bottom--it really brought my attention to the face and more specifically, the eyes.

And yes, you should certainly stick to this style, you did an excellent job. I'd love to see more pictures like this :D
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Old August 10th, 2008, 10:12 PM   #7
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I think you would do good sticking with this style, nice job with the detail of the face.
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Aside from the great detailing of the face, that is awesome. The coloring is nice and I like the eyes...
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Old August 14th, 2008, 01:48 AM   #9
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Shit's pretty awesome. Only thing I'd recommend changing is the colour of the lineart. Make it more subtle instead of JETBLACK or a colour that's pretty damn close to black.
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Old August 14th, 2008, 02:46 AM   #10
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Old August 14th, 2008, 03:24 AM   #11
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Very nice work.
Love the detail and the expression.
Like the bird too.
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