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August 10th, 2008, 03:06 AM
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#1 | | Subtly Inspiring
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Registered: Aug 2005 Posts: 1,573 | Oh well, i guess. This song's called... by ~chray on deviantART
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Comment & critique.
I think I'll be sticking to this style for a bit.
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August 10th, 2008, 10:56 AM
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#2 | | Story of the Year
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Registered: Dec 2005 Location: Wait What? Age: 20 Posts: 3,449 | Re: Oh well, i guess. This is an awesome piece.
I'm sure you get this a lot but you are truly a master at photoshop.
That being said the only problems I have is the level of detail.
You designed her face and the top of her hair to be detailed but as you go down to her shirt and the bottom half of her hair the blurry effect sets in. I personally don't like it seeing as for me it takes away from the overall unity of it.
I get that you were going for that effect to a degree but i think if you but a little more detail on the part of her shirt that's closer to you and then let parts of that fade into the background it would be a little better.
That's really my only criticism
8.5/10
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August 10th, 2008, 11:33 AM
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#3 | | Subtly Inspiring
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Registered: Aug 2005 Posts: 1,573 | Re: Oh well, i guess. Muchos thanks, no sure if I can say that enough to one person, haha.
& yeah, I get what you mean about the level of detail, and how it deteriorates towards the bottom, but I mostly did that to keep anything from interfering with the main focal point.
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August 10th, 2008, 11:45 AM
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#4 | | Story of the Year
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Registered: Dec 2005 Location: Wait What? Age: 20 Posts: 3,449 | Re: Oh well, i guess. Oh i understand completely. In all honestly i think it would have put a bigger "pop" if you will on the focal point because it wouldn't just be on the face but part of the shirt so your eye drifts from there back to the logo.
It's still an extremely badass picture haha. I couldn't do that well in photoshop if i tried.
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August 10th, 2008, 11:46 AM
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#5 | | Subtly Inspiring
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Registered: Aug 2005 Posts: 1,573 | Re: Oh well, i guess. I'll nearly always do my lineart in opencanvas. I only color and do post-work in Photoshop | |
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August 10th, 2008, 01:29 PM
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#6 | | Would love to come back
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Registered: Jul 2004 Location: Sixth State Posts: 624 | Re: Oh well, i guess. Aye, I love love love this picture. The expression of her face really caught my eye, as well as the detail you put into it. I actually really like how you made it blurry towards the bottom--it really brought my attention to the face and more specifically, the eyes.
And yes, you should certainly stick to this style, you did an excellent job. I'd love to see more pictures like this :D | |
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August 10th, 2008, 10:12 PM
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#7 | | がんばってね
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Registered: Aug 2006 Location: ノースカロライナ Age: 17 Posts: 1,702 | Re: Oh well, i guess. I think you would do good sticking with this style, nice job with the detail of the face.
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August 11th, 2008, 01:52 AM
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#8 | | MAY IS THE DAY!♥
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Currently playing: Kingdom Hearts: RE:COM (finishing Sora's Story), FFVII: Crisis Core, and Final Fantasy X | Re: Oh well, i guess. Aside from the great detailing of the face, that is awesome. The coloring is nice and I like the eyes...
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August 14th, 2008, 01:48 AM
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#9 | | Banned
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Currently playing: sf4 i guess | Re: Oh well, i guess. Shit's pretty awesome. Only thing I'd recommend changing is the colour of the lineart. Make it more subtle instead of JETBLACK or a colour that's pretty damn close to black. | |
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August 14th, 2008, 02:46 AM
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#10 | | lol sup
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Registered: Dec 2005 Location: a ghetto little place in minnesota Age: 17 Posts: 2,734 | Re: Oh well, i guess. goddamnyoustopbeingso****inggood
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August 14th, 2008, 03:24 AM
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#11 | | That's a lot of crunch
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Currently playing: Okami, Chrono Trigger | Re: Oh well, i guess. Very nice work.
Love the detail and the expression.
Like the bird too.
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