you're making me

♥ · 06/23/08, 01:47 PM

so, let's start off with saying that I'm in a rut. I can't finish anything. i just start pieces then give up after about an hour or so. That aside, a couple sketches and WIPs that probably won't be finished.

-Really wanted to do a lot with this one, but then I just stopped.

http://xs128.xs.to/xs128/08261/hug234.png

http://xs128.xs.to/xs128/08261/lolcampfire435.png

http://xs228.xs.to/xs228/08261/prooooofile666.png

Cameron · 06/23/08, 04:51 PM

Oh man, this really makes me wish that at LEAST one of the copies of OC I got worked :\

Ray, as always, I love your style, but, uh, what do you want to hear here? Because, if you're not going to finish these, there's not really any point in giving critique :\/

**Ken** · 06/23/08, 05:57 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Kid A

Oh man, this really makes me wish that at LEAST one of the copies of OC I got worked :\

Give me your MSN :C I'll help you, hurf.

Also, I remember that first one Ray. Too bad you didn't finish it ;-;

♥ · 06/23/08, 09:48 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Kid A

Oh man, this really makes me wish that at LEAST one of the copies of OC I got worked :\

Ray, as always, I love your style, but, uh, what do you want to hear here? Because, if you're not going to finish these, there's not really any point in giving critique :\/

well, these are the finished pieces for now, so go ahead and rip away at any anatomical or proportionate issues you might see.

Xidon · 06/23/08, 10:12 PM

The foot of the female character in the first picture is a bit small and I think it would be better if you could either shorten or extend her pants, because they end directly on the knee which makes the part of the leg bellow the knee looks too small in comparison with the rest of the body.

Other then that I don't see any problems.

And might I add that I love your facial expressions and the nice work you have done with the hands.
I would really like to see you finish these.

Ashley · 06/23/08, 10:39 PM

These look awesome. I particularly like the last one. Very nice. You should really finish them all :]

Veritas · 06/25/08, 01:53 AM

I'd really like to see the campfire one finished.

Beautiful Chaos · 06/25/08, 08:57 AM

FINISHTHEM.13242352453463656

Flashback Humor · 06/25/08, 03:17 PM

If you want to finish everything, don't work on them or even think about them for like, a week or two, then go back.
You'll be fresh to everything again, and then you'll also be able to see if there's anything wrong with them.

Fatal_Blade · 06/25/08, 06:25 PM

Yeah these look great, you should definitely finish them.

Snow Candy · 06/29/08, 09:06 PM

I like although you didn't get to finish or didn't finish them. Hopefully you will. :D
Good job, I like the colors and the way you did the background in the first picture.

obbsessed fan · 06/30/08, 12:24 AM

The fighter guys legs are out of porportion to the rest of his body.

Other than that, Its a shame to not see these finished

06/23/08, 01:47 PM	#1
♥ Subtly Inspiring Join Date: Aug 2005 Posts: 3,516 Rep Power: 8	you're making me so, let's start off with saying that I'm in a rut. I can't finish anything. i just start pieces then give up after about an hour or so. That aside, a couple sketches and WIPs that probably won't be finished. -Really wanted to do a lot with this one, but then I just stopped. http://xs128.xs.to/xs128/08261/hug234.png http://xs128.xs.to/xs128/08261/lolcampfire435.png http://xs228.xs.to/xs228/08261/prooooofile666.png Last edited by ♥; 06/23/08 at 01:57 PM.

06/23/08, 04:51 PM	#2
Cameron name faggin' it up Join Date: Feb 2006 Age: 14 Posts: 3,186 Rep Power: 7	Re: you're making me Oh man, this really makes me wish that at LEAST one of the copies of OC I got worked :\ Ray, as always, I love your style, but, uh, what do you want to hear here? Because, if you're not going to finish these, there's not really any point in giving critique :\/

06/23/08, 10:12 PM	#5
Xidon Memento Mori Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Why do you want that? Age: 16 Posts: 2,242 Rep Power: 5	Re: you're making me The foot of the female character in the first picture is a bit small and I think it would be better if you could either shorten or extend her pants, because they end directly on the knee which makes the part of the leg bellow the knee looks too small in comparison with the rest of the body. Other then that I don't see any problems. And might I add that I love your facial expressions and the nice work you have done with the hands. I would really like to see you finish these.

06/23/08, 10:39 PM	#6
Ashley \| P \| Join Date: May 2006 Age: 18 Posts: 301 Rep Power: 3	Re: you're making me These look awesome. I particularly like the last one. Very nice. You should really finish them all :]

06/25/08, 01:53 AM	#7
Veritas Dangerously Delicious Join Date: May 2006 Location: Flo Rida Age: 17 Posts: 2,596 Rep Power: 6	Re: you're making me I'd really like to see the campfire one finished.

06/25/08, 08:57 AM	#8
Beautiful Chaos The Vaccine. Join Date: Jul 2004 Location: England. Age: 19 Posts: 1,457 Rep Power: 6	Re: you're making me FINISHTHEM.13242352453463656

06/25/08, 03:17 PM	#9
Flashback Humor relative power Join Date: Aug 2005 Age: 15 Posts: 2,140 Rep Power: 8	Re: you're making me If you want to finish everything, don't work on them or even think about them for like, a week or two, then go back. You'll be fresh to everything again, and then you'll also be able to see if there's anything wrong with them.

06/25/08, 06:25 PM	#10
Fatal_Blade アリエン Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: That place Age: 16 Posts: 2,043 Rep Power: 6	Re: you're making me Yeah these look great, you should definitely finish them.

06/29/08, 09:06 PM	#11
Snow Candy Gone until October Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: Walking into a place called reality, leaving behind the memories of it all. Posts: 2,425 Rep Power: 8	Re: you're making me I like although you didn't get to finish or didn't finish them. Hopefully you will. :D Good job, I like the colors and the way you did the background in the first picture.

06/30/08, 12:24 AM	#12
obbsessed fan Ruler of Light Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: D: Age: 18 Posts: 679 Rep Power: 4	Re: you're making me The fighter guys legs are out of porportion to the rest of his body. Other than that, Its a shame to not see these finished

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