I drew something new. *Critics are welcome**No flaming*

Artistry of Schedius · 06/19/08, 05:05 PM

hey guys , i just got back to drawing last night and i drew an original character(i think...)here it is anyway
http://i294.photobucket.com/albums/m...haracter-1.jpg*nervous laugh*sorry if the picture is a bit hard to see.i forgot to use HB2 pencil.

Critics are still welcome but no flaming.Thanks(hopefully i can improve it coz its in pencil but now i cant coz it is either coloured in or in pen D: .)

Ok here is the edit.It has to be coloured in coz ppl asked me to. and i have a second version of it.
http://i294.photobucket.com/albums/m...character2.jpg

http://i294.photobucket.com/albums/m...character3.jpg

**Nelo Angelo** · 06/19/08, 05:55 PM

I really like it, I thinks its a good character design and I love the weapon, good job

Artistry of Schedius · 06/19/08, 05:57 PM

ohhh.thanks!it was hard to think up of the name and the weapon.

**Nelo Angelo** · 06/19/08, 06:03 PM

I know how it is to think of names, its hard for me. You picked a very cool name

Artistry of Schedius · 06/19/08, 06:07 PM

i've only tought up of its title..im thinking of the name.i think of Dexianla(i used Daniela )sound good?

Fatal_Blade · 06/19/08, 06:09 PM

Its a good design, be sure to keep working on it if you want to improve her any further. Also I love the weapon.

Artistry of Schedius · 06/19/08, 06:10 PM

thanks!^^ does anything look awkward or out of place?i think that she is about 7 heads high.

**Nelo Angelo** · 06/19/08, 06:11 PM

That sounds good to me.

Go with it. Im not good with anagrams ^^;

Artistry of Schedius · 06/19/08, 06:16 PM

so am i..it took me about 30 mins to think of it.yay no school tomorow!inset day!anything to improve it?

JakeH · 06/19/08, 06:44 PM

Everything is good except the hair and the face. Try making the hair more...hairlike, instead of it looking like a wig (I'm not saying Sora's is any more realistic).

For the face, try taking a look at some of the faces from Nomura's art. Then draw from that.

Sora788 · 06/19/08, 06:45 PM

Not bad

I like the weapon. Are you going to color it in?

Artistry of Schedius · 06/19/08, 06:48 PM

not really sure if im gonna colour it.thats the thing that im afraid of,colouring it.im thinkin:"i might ruin it".i'll just shade it in with different types of Hard black pencils.

how can i make the hair look realistic?

Axel Owns · 06/19/08, 06:55 PM

very good drawing.

it's a girl, right?

i would say add more curves, accentuate the breasts a little more, and soften up the face some. just to make her seem more feminine.

but i really like it alot :D

Artistry of Schedius · 06/19/08, 06:57 PM

yeah it is a female..i'll change it tonight and put up the edit tomorow.for now i'll take the critics until i got what i need.

Fatal_Blade · 06/19/08, 07:05 PM

If your afraid to color it couldn't you just print off a copy?

06/19/08, 05:05 PM	#1
Artistry of Schedius The Chaotic Crimsona arrives.. Join Date: May 2008 Location: Lost within the Ruins of Midgar Posts: 1,396 Rep Power: 2	I drew something new. Critics are welcomeNo flaming hey guys , i just got back to drawing last night and i drew an original character(i think...)here it is anyway http://i294.photobucket.com/albums/m...haracter-1.jpgnervous laughsorry if the picture is a bit hard to see.i forgot to use HB2 pencil. Critics are still welcome but no flaming.Thanks(hopefully i can improve it coz its in pencil but now i cant coz it is either coloured in or in pen D: .) Ok here is the edit.It has to be coloured in coz ppl asked me to. and i have a second version of it. http://i294.photobucket.com/albums/m...character2.jpg http://i294.photobucket.com/albums/m...character3.jpg Last edited by Artistry of Schedius; 06/20/08 at 06:06 AM.

06/19/08, 05:55 PM	#2
Nelo Angelo He shall rise once more.. Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: City Of The Ancients A.K.A The Forgotten City Posts: 3,288 Rep Power: 7	Re: I drew something new. Critics are welcomeNo flaming I really like it, I thinks its a good character design and I love the weapon, good job

06/19/08, 05:57 PM	#3
Artistry of Schedius The Chaotic Crimsona arrives.. Join Date: May 2008 Location: Lost within the Ruins of Midgar Posts: 1,396 Rep Power: 2	Re: I drew something new. Critics are welcomeNo flaming ohhh.thanks!it was hard to think up of the name and the weapon.

06/19/08, 06:03 PM	#4
Nelo Angelo He shall rise once more.. Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: City Of The Ancients A.K.A The Forgotten City Posts: 3,288 Rep Power: 7	Re: I drew something new. Critics are welcomeNo flaming I know how it is to think of names, its hard for me. You picked a very cool name

06/19/08, 06:07 PM	#5
Artistry of Schedius The Chaotic Crimsona arrives.. Join Date: May 2008 Location: Lost within the Ruins of Midgar Posts: 1,396 Rep Power: 2	Re: I drew something new. Critics are welcomeNo flaming i've only tought up of its title..im thinking of the name.i think of Dexianla(i used Daniela )sound good?

06/19/08, 06:09 PM	#6
Fatal_Blade アリエン Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: That place Age: 15 Posts: 2,042 Rep Power: 6	Re: I drew something new. Critics are welcomeNo flaming Its a good design, be sure to keep working on it if you want to improve her any further. Also I love the weapon.

06/19/08, 06:10 PM	#7
Artistry of Schedius The Chaotic Crimsona arrives.. Join Date: May 2008 Location: Lost within the Ruins of Midgar Posts: 1,396 Rep Power: 2	Re: I drew something new. Critics are welcomeNo flaming thanks!^^ does anything look awkward or out of place?i think that she is about 7 heads high.

06/19/08, 06:11 PM	#8
Nelo Angelo He shall rise once more.. Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: City Of The Ancients A.K.A The Forgotten City Posts: 3,288 Rep Power: 7	Re: I drew something new. Critics are welcomeNo flaming That sounds good to me. Go with it. Im not good with anagrams ^^;

06/19/08, 06:16 PM	#9
Artistry of Schedius The Chaotic Crimsona arrives.. Join Date: May 2008 Location: Lost within the Ruins of Midgar Posts: 1,396 Rep Power: 2	Re: I drew something new. Critics are welcomeNo flaming so am i..it took me about 30 mins to think of it.yay no school tomorow!inset day!anything to improve it?

06/19/08, 06:44 PM	#10
JakeH Je te présente... Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: In the womb. Age: 15 Posts: 1,354 Rep Power: 3	Re: I drew something new. Critics are welcomeNo flaming Everything is good except the hair and the face. Try making the hair more...hairlike, instead of it looking like a wig (I'm not saying Sora's is any more realistic). For the face, try taking a look at some of the faces from Nomura's art. Then draw from that.

06/19/08, 06:45 PM	#11
Sora788 Ruler of Light Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: Chaos Empire. Posts: 612 Rep Power: 2	Re: I drew something new. Critics are welcomeNo flaming Not bad I like the weapon. Are you going to color it in?

06/19/08, 06:48 PM	#12
Artistry of Schedius The Chaotic Crimsona arrives.. Join Date: May 2008 Location: Lost within the Ruins of Midgar Posts: 1,396 Rep Power: 2	Re: I drew something new. Critics are welcomeNo flaming not really sure if im gonna colour it.thats the thing that im afraid of,colouring it.im thinkin:"i might ruin it".i'll just shade it in with different types of Hard black pencils. how can i make the hair look realistic? Last edited by Artistry of Schedius; 06/19/08 at 06:55 PM.

06/19/08, 06:55 PM	#13
Axel Owns Cycle of Recycled Revenge Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: Well I guess I'm on the forums. Posts: 1,039 Rep Power: 3	Re: I drew something new. Critics are welcomeNo flaming very good drawing. it's a girl, right? i would say add more curves, accentuate the breasts a little more, and soften up the face some. just to make her seem more feminine. but i really like it alot :D

06/19/08, 06:57 PM	#14
Artistry of Schedius The Chaotic Crimsona arrives.. Join Date: May 2008 Location: Lost within the Ruins of Midgar Posts: 1,396 Rep Power: 2	Re: I drew something new. Critics are welcomeNo flaming yeah it is a female..i'll change it tonight and put up the edit tomorow.for now i'll take the critics until i got what i need.

06/19/08, 07:05 PM	#15
Fatal_Blade アリエン Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: That place Age: 15 Posts: 2,042 Rep Power: 6	Re: I drew something new. Critics are welcomeNo flaming If your afraid to color it couldn't you just print off a copy?

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