First attempt at a comic page

Ojike · 06/12/08, 04:02 AM

Shoot! I meant to put "first REAL attempt". I've done comic pages before, but they've always just been me pasting the panels on a black background in a boring and linear manner.

God I suck at paneling. Is it just me or are they all crooked? I am kinda laying down right now, so it could be just how I'm looking at it. Also the last panel really bugs me.
To be honest, I don't know if I'll finish this page. I might. But even if I do, I may not draw out the whole script. :l

Any suggestions for improvement would be appreciated.

Cameron · 06/12/08, 04:09 AM

What? You lie. I've seen like twenty comic pages on your deviantart :<

Holy shit, I'm really digging the angle on the third panel. The first two quasi headshots, not so much. And what's up with the green background?

Aside from that, though, it's looking good.

**Nelo Angelo** · 06/12/08, 03:51 PM

That is looking very good my friend. Impressive.

Ojike · 06/13/08, 03:05 AM

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Originally Posted by Kid A

What? You lie. I've seen like twenty comic pages on your deviantart :<

You exagerate. And those aren't really comics....more like tiny pictures assembled on a black backdrop. :l

Quote:

Holy shit, I'm really digging the angle on the third panel. The first two quasi headshots, not so much. And what's up with the green background?

I like the quasi headshots. D: Just not the panel they're in. And the green is just there because white is boring. And because I loved Grampy.

Angelsinflight · 06/13/08, 03:22 AM

i think its pretty neat ^^ can't wait to see it when its all colored

06/12/08, 04:02 AM	#1
Ojike The Truth Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: In your head. Age: 20 Posts: 1,719 Rep Power: 4	First attempt at a comic page Shoot! I meant to put "first REAL attempt". I've done comic pages before, but they've always just been me pasting the panels on a black background in a boring and linear manner. God I suck at paneling. Is it just me or are they all crooked? I am kinda laying down right now, so it could be just how I'm looking at it. Also the last panel really bugs me. To be honest, I don't know if I'll finish this page. I might. But even if I do, I may not draw out the whole script. :l Any suggestions for improvement would be appreciated. Last edited by Ojike; 06/12/08 at 04:09 AM.

06/12/08, 04:09 AM	#2
Cameron the past is a grotesque animal Join Date: Feb 2006 Age: 14 Posts: 3,228 Rep Power: 7	Re: First attempt at a comic page What? You lie. I've seen like twenty comic pages on your deviantart :< Holy shit, I'm really digging the angle on the third panel. The first two quasi headshots, not so much. And what's up with the green background? Aside from that, though, it's looking good.

06/12/08, 03:51 PM	#3
Nelo Angelo Fear the Wrath of the Extreme Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: The Forgotten City Posts: 3,315 Rep Power: 9	Re: First attempt at a comic page That is looking very good my friend. Impressive.

06/13/08, 03:22 AM	#5
Angelsinflight Forever Sacred Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: Running somewhere new... Age: 17 Posts: 2,614 Rep Power: 5	Re: First attempt at a comic page i think its pretty neat ^^ can't wait to see it when its all colored

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