More artwork

Artistry of Schedius · 06/11/08, 06:45 PM

Hiya everyone.Sorry about my stubborness from my previous thread...Critiques and comments are welcome and this time i'll take this seriously. Okay back to topic..At school my friend asked my to Draw a simplified version of Darth Vader(coz he is obsessed with star wars)
So what do you think of this : http://i294.photobucket.com/albums/m...DarthVader.jpg the position might seem a bit awkward thats because of the reference picture he gave me. but i'll need the comments and critiques a bit quickly coz i have to give this to him on Thursday(which is tommorow)

**Nelo Angelo** · 06/11/08, 07:01 PM

Hm not bad Rox, but his head seems huge compared to his body. The legs and arms need to be a longer too. You can improve upon the hands a bit too. Its not your best work but its not too bad.

Artistry of Schedius · 06/11/08, 07:07 PM

i know but my friend asked this to be a chibi version of Vader lol,he looked through my sketch book ,saw the chibi version or org XIII then he said: can you draw vader like this?. but yeah the arms might need to be a bit longer and i made the head a bit big..(saying that to myself)i knew you were here!coz theres an invisible member when i viewed the traditonal thingy...

**Nelo Angelo** · 06/11/08, 07:20 PM

Oh a chibi version is it, ok then i guess i can see why the head is a bit big. just work on the arms and legs a little and it should be fine.
Doh you always know im here even though im invisible.

XxRemnantxX · 06/11/08, 08:07 PM

Aww~Chibi Vader! >w< It looks good! Practice on the hands tho! :D

Artistry of Schedius · 06/11/08, 08:12 PM

ahaaaa(to Nelo)i know how the invisibles work.i've been invisible for nearly a month now.i know that drawing is cute...but Vader is evil"Luke,i am your father!" O.o see?(ok wrong quote)kk then thanks for the help. i'll put the edit tomorrow morning. i have history homewrok....boriing!i think my friend's gonna like it.(he also likes me in a way.. ^^)

**Nelo Angelo** · 06/11/08, 11:50 PM

Im sure he will like it. Ooh he likes you too does he. Nice ^.~

XxRemnantxX · 06/12/08, 05:21 AM

YEAAAH YOU WORK THAT THANG. Do eeeet girl doo eeeeet! Sorry. XD I like to mess with my friends when either they like someone, or they like them. *laughs*

XxRemnantxX · 06/12/08, 05:22 AM

YEAAAH YOU WORK THAT THANG. Do eeeet girl doo eeeeet! Sorry. XD I like to mess with my friends when either they like someone, or they like them. *laughs*

XxRemnantxX · 06/12/08, 05:59 AM

I'm sorry you guys. I am really really sorry. I just got in huge trouble with my dad. He found out I failed my freshman year. I am putting my foot down, I am going to pass this summer school, and I am GOING to pass 9th grade. I am very sorry. Going to miss you all. I won't be able to get on for a LONG time. Bye~<3

~T~F

Artistry of Schedius · 06/12/08, 06:23 AM

Oh good luck T~F we'll miss you*hugs*.umm you kinda triple posted..i couldnt upload it right now coz i'll just have to edit it after school.i had homework last night and im still tired *yawn*

**Nelo Angelo** · 06/12/08, 03:55 PM

D: Sorry to hear that Kasumi. Take care see you soon.
No problem Rox, just work out the kinks like we mentioned, im sure its gonna be good.

06/11/08, 06:45 PM	#1
Artistry of Schedius Bwuahahaha! FEAR TEH HOMEWORK! Join Date: May 2008 Location: Getting chased around by Elmer Fudd in the Louvre Posts: 1,499 Rep Power: 3	More artwork Hiya everyone.Sorry about my stubborness from my previous thread...Critiques and comments are welcome and this time i'll take this seriously. Okay back to topic..At school my friend asked my to Draw a simplified version of Darth Vader(coz he is obsessed with star wars) So what do you think of this : http://i294.photobucket.com/albums/m...DarthVader.jpg the position might seem a bit awkward thats because of the reference picture he gave me. but i'll need the comments and critiques a bit quickly coz i have to give this to him on Thursday(which is tommorow)

06/11/08, 07:01 PM	#2
Nelo Angelo Fear the Wrath of the Extreme Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: The Forgotten City Posts: 3,315 Rep Power: 9	Re: More artwork Hm not bad Rox, but his head seems huge compared to his body. The legs and arms need to be a longer too. You can improve upon the hands a bit too. Its not your best work but its not too bad.

06/11/08, 07:07 PM	#3
Artistry of Schedius Bwuahahaha! FEAR TEH HOMEWORK! Join Date: May 2008 Location: Getting chased around by Elmer Fudd in the Louvre Posts: 1,499 Rep Power: 3	Re: More artwork i know but my friend asked this to be a chibi version of Vader lol,he looked through my sketch book ,saw the chibi version or org XIII then he said: can you draw vader like this?. but yeah the arms might need to be a bit longer and i made the head a bit big..(saying that to myself)i knew you were here!coz theres an invisible member when i viewed the traditonal thingy...

06/11/08, 07:20 PM	#4
Nelo Angelo Fear the Wrath of the Extreme Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: The Forgotten City Posts: 3,315 Rep Power: 9	Re: More artwork Oh a chibi version is it, ok then i guess i can see why the head is a bit big. just work on the arms and legs a little and it should be fine. Doh you always know im here even though im invisible.

06/11/08, 08:07 PM	#5
XxRemnantxX Organization Member Join Date: Jun 2008 Location: The Darkness of Your Heart Age: 15 Posts: 494 Rep Power: 1	Re: More artwork Aww~Chibi Vader! >w< It looks good! Practice on the hands tho! :D

06/11/08, 08:12 PM	#6
Artistry of Schedius Bwuahahaha! FEAR TEH HOMEWORK! Join Date: May 2008 Location: Getting chased around by Elmer Fudd in the Louvre Posts: 1,499 Rep Power: 3	Re: More artwork ahaaaa(to Nelo)i know how the invisibles work.i've been invisible for nearly a month now.i know that drawing is cute...but Vader is evil"Luke,i am your father!" O.o see?(ok wrong quote)kk then thanks for the help. i'll put the edit tomorrow morning. i have history homewrok....boriing!i think my friend's gonna like it.(he also likes me in a way.. ^^)

06/11/08, 11:50 PM	#7
Nelo Angelo Fear the Wrath of the Extreme Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: The Forgotten City Posts: 3,315 Rep Power: 9	Re: More artwork Im sure he will like it. Ooh he likes you too does he. Nice ^.~

06/12/08, 05:21 AM	#8
XxRemnantxX Organization Member Join Date: Jun 2008 Location: The Darkness of Your Heart Age: 15 Posts: 494 Rep Power: 1	Re: More artwork YEAAAH YOU WORK THAT THANG. Do eeeet girl doo eeeeet! Sorry. XD I like to mess with my friends when either they like someone, or they like them. laughs

06/12/08, 05:22 AM	#9
XxRemnantxX Organization Member Join Date: Jun 2008 Location: The Darkness of Your Heart Age: 15 Posts: 494 Rep Power: 1	Re: More artwork YEAAAH YOU WORK THAT THANG. Do eeeet girl doo eeeeet! Sorry. XD I like to mess with my friends when either they like someone, or they like them. laughs

06/12/08, 05:59 AM	#10
XxRemnantxX Organization Member Join Date: Jun 2008 Location: The Darkness of Your Heart Age: 15 Posts: 494 Rep Power: 1	Re: More artwork I'm sorry you guys. I am really really sorry. I just got in huge trouble with my dad. He found out I failed my freshman year. I am putting my foot down, I am going to pass this summer school, and I am GOING to pass 9th grade. I am very sorry. Going to miss you all. I won't be able to get on for a LONG time. Bye~<3 ~T~F

06/12/08, 06:23 AM	#11
Artistry of Schedius Bwuahahaha! FEAR TEH HOMEWORK! Join Date: May 2008 Location: Getting chased around by Elmer Fudd in the Louvre Posts: 1,499 Rep Power: 3	Re: More artwork Oh good luck T~F we'll miss youhugs.umm you kinda triple posted..i couldnt upload it right now coz i'll just have to edit it after school.i had homework last night and im still tired yawn

06/12/08, 03:55 PM	#12
Nelo Angelo Fear the Wrath of the Extreme Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: The Forgotten City Posts: 3,315 Rep Power: 9	Re: More artwork D: Sorry to hear that Kasumi. Take care see you soon. No problem Rox, just work out the kinks like we mentioned, im sure its gonna be good.

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