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Old 06/05/08, 05:22 PM   #1
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Hello everybody!This is my first thread so please bare with me. The title says what this is about. So what do you guys think of this?
Link to picture: http://i294.photobucket.com/albums/m.../TTstation.jpg
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Old 06/05/08, 07:16 PM   #2
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*claps* Oh my gosh! Yay! This is so great! I love it so much! I love his pose while sitting there on the clock tower! Good job!!!
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Old 06/05/08, 08:49 PM   #3
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Wow, i must say that is very very good. Im impressed, great job Rox ^^
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Old 06/05/08, 09:07 PM   #4
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The arm bothers me, but its still nice. Do you do any original drawings? =]
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^ Arm does look a little odd, but it's still cool.
Nice capturing of the details.
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Old 06/06/08, 03:44 AM   #6
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Hello everybody!This is my first thread so please bare with me. The title says what this is about. So what do you guys think of this?
Link to picture: http://i294.photobucket.com/albums/m.../TTstation.jpg
very good. its the best ive seen of roxas. Hes not easy to draw. nice job.
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Old 06/06/08, 03:46 AM   #7
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Not bad. The leg and feet bother me though, the seem small. o-O
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Old 06/06/08, 06:39 AM   #8
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Thanks everyone :D !! I know that the anatomy is a bit off Thats probably because my eyes are playing tricks at me that night(yes i did it at night)!!!but i cant edit it now coz....i drawn over it with a PEN! and no i dont do original characters yet...i'll probably do that when i leave school...(i have to wait for 5 YEARS!!!)
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K.
Now draw something that isn't based off a shitty PS2 game or a generic anime that only dumbasses watch.
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k????? dont really know...i need to know a character description to be able to draw one that is an original!(shitty PS2 game!? how dare you!!) but do i i need to improve on anything the next time i draw somehting?
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Old 06/06/08, 12:33 PM   #11
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K.
Now draw something that isn't based off a shitty PS2 game or a generic anime that only dumbasses watch.
:D Lol your one to talk mate, you just recently did a pic of sora did you not.

Keep at it Rox ^.~
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Old 06/06/08, 01:34 PM   #12
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Good.

His face looks a bit weird and his shoes don't seem proportional,also,the arms seem very skinny.

Good overall.
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Old 06/06/08, 01:42 PM   #13
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yep, the jaws seem not to fit, the arms too skinny and even the legs, but yep, still good, if you could draw something original, and something better, im sure it'd be good
my rating for this one is 8.9/10
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Old 06/06/08, 01:45 PM   #14
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Now draw something that isn't based off a shitty PS2 game or a generic anime that only dumbasses watch.
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Old 06/06/08, 02:17 PM   #15
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Yeah... I can't really add anymore to what everyone else has said... Just a recommendation though, try putting some shadows under his body, otherwise sometimes it looks like he isn't on the actual thing... In this case tough, it looks fine
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