Twilight 93 Creations - Page 2

Rhapsody Flows · 05/09/08, 02:47 AM

Hmm, a good start, though, since it's just Shiki's face, I really don't know how it'll turn out until it's finished. ^^"

Cicero · 05/09/08, 03:13 AM

Neku looks awesome now, but the hair still disturbes me. Its harder now you already drew something else behind him, but I would've suggested to erase the top part of the hair and totally redraw in a more natural way.

Blue · 05/09/08, 10:03 AM

It's very good.You drew the pic in Kingdom Hearts style,am I right?
That's why I won't say anything about his feet,body and arms. ;D

3/5.

**Nelo Angelo** · 05/09/08, 01:16 PM

Now that does look a little better. Impressive stuff.

Twilight93 · 05/09/08, 09:36 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Blue Sky

It's very good.You drew the pic in Kingdom Hearts style,am I right?
That's why I won't say anything about his feet,body and arms. ;D

3/5.

No, well yes in a sense. It's from the game "The World Ends With You" and the art designer is the same for both TWEWY and Kingdom Hearts.

**Nelo Angelo** · 05/10/08, 12:34 AM

That competiton has ended though i thought..

**Victor** · 05/10/08, 05:39 PM

WTF is on his left foot?
Other then that 4/5.

Fatal_Blade · 05/10/08, 09:24 PM

The body looks great, nice job. 4/5.

Agent007 · 05/10/08, 09:31 PM

Wow man thats really awesome. Good job.

**monkeybutt** · 05/10/08, 09:59 PM

The only thing that needs improvement is the face. =) Good job on the clothes! Your to the point in skill where you can start developing your own style.

bubbles · 05/10/08, 11:48 PM

very nice i give it 5 out of 5

InfiniteTwilight · 05/10/08, 11:59 PM

Looks pretty good! Some stuff could use some work like the face, but still apretty pretty good.

Twilight93 · 05/30/08, 02:58 AM

*Edited main post and title. New pictures added too. Will add Iron Man as soon as I finish.

whtballerking13 · 05/30/08, 10:20 PM

I have to say, I don't really like any part of it except for the hand that is coming out from the picture, if you are going to compy directly off of the guy from "the world ends with you", then you could have done a way beter job. It just looks to sloppy. that girl that is being added behind him looks weird. The marvel pictures look like junk that any body could through together while half asleep with a broken pencil in the middle of class.

I know, I am a really hard critic, that is just the way i have always been sry

Cicero · 05/30/08, 10:45 PM

^That is not giving critisism, that is just plain saying you don't like it in a really asshole kind off way. Critisim is pointing out the flaws of something, and giving tips to improve that, not just saying you don't like it. I'm surprised you call yourself a 'critic'...lol. Seriously.

I must agree though, the Marvel drawings aren't all that good...the Iron Man seems promising though, I'd like to see the end result.

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5 out of 5	5	16.13%
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2 out of 5	3	9.68%
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05/09/08, 02:47 AM	#16
Rhapsody Flows Twilight Knight Join Date: Dec 2007 Age: 13 Posts: 856 Rep Power: 1	Re: The World Ends With You - Neku Hmm, a good start, though, since it's just Shiki's face, I really don't know how it'll turn out until it's finished. ^^" Last edited by Rhapsody Flows; 05/09/08 at 03:16 AM.

05/09/08, 03:13 AM	#17
Cicero Consul Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: provoking people into discussions. Age: 18 Posts: 1,525 Rep Power: 4	Re: The World Ends With You - Neku Neku looks awesome now, but the hair still disturbes me. Its harder now you already drew something else behind him, but I would've suggested to erase the top part of the hair and totally redraw in a more natural way.

05/09/08, 10:03 AM	#18
Blue sichtlich amüsiert & erheitert Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: In einem wunderschönen Traum ♪ Age: 19 Posts: 2,915 Rep Power: 9	Re: The World Ends With You - Neku It's very good.You drew the pic in Kingdom Hearts style,am I right? That's why I won't say anything about his feet,body and arms. ;D 3/5.

05/09/08, 01:16 PM	#19
Nelo Angelo Fear the Wrath of the Extreme Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: The Forgotten City Posts: 3,315 Rep Power: 9	Re: The World Ends With You - Neku Now that does look a little better. Impressive stuff.

05/10/08, 12:34 AM	#21
Nelo Angelo Fear the Wrath of the Extreme Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: The Forgotten City Posts: 3,315 Rep Power: 9	Re: The World Ends With You - Neku That competiton has ended though i thought..

05/10/08, 05:39 PM	#22
Victor (Sack) LittleBigPlanet (Boy) Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: ZERGZERGZERGZERGZERGZERGZERGZERGZERGZERGZERGZERGZERGZERGZERGZERGZERGZERGZERGZERGZERGZERGZERGZERGZERG Age: 14 Posts: 4,579 Rep Power: 8	Re: The World Ends With You - Neku WTF is on his left foot? Other then that 4/5.

05/10/08, 09:24 PM	#23
Fatal_Blade アリエン Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: That place Age: 16 Posts: 2,050 Rep Power: 7	Re: The World Ends With You - Neku The body looks great, nice job. 4/5.

05/10/08, 09:31 PM	#24
Agent007 Their Will Be Only Chaos!! Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: Boston Age: 27 Posts: 2,152 Rep Power: 6	Re: The World Ends With You - Neku Wow man thats really awesome. Good job.

05/10/08, 09:59 PM	#25
monkeybutt Keyblade Master Join Date: Dec 2004 Location: Monkeybutt INC Posts: 3,608 Rep Power: 0	Re: The World Ends With You - Neku The only thing that needs improvement is the face. =) Good job on the clothes! Your to the point in skill where you can start developing your own style.

05/10/08, 11:48 PM	#26
bubbles Ruler of Light Join Date: Jan 2008 Location: somewhere over the rainbow Posts: 558 Rep Power: 1	Re: The World Ends With You - Neku very nice i give it 5 out of 5

05/10/08, 11:59 PM	#27
InfiniteTwilight Classical Bebop Drake <3 Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: In a cereal box Posts: 1,714 Rep Power: 3	Re: The World Ends With You - Neku Looks pretty good! Some stuff could use some work like the face, but still apretty pretty good.

05/30/08, 02:58 AM	#28
Twilight93 Rdy To Pwn Portuguese Style Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: Hotel In Traverse Town, Trying To Sneak Out Without The Manager Seeing Me.shhhh................ Age: 15 Posts: 1,399 Rep Power: 3	Re: Twilight 93 Creations *Edited main post and title. New pictures added too. Will add Iron Man as soon as I finish.

05/30/08, 10:20 PM	#29
whtballerking13 Court Mage Join Date: Nov 2007 Location: Michigan Age: 15 Posts: 46 Rep Power: 0	Re: Twilight 93 Creations I have to say, I don't really like any part of it except for the hand that is coming out from the picture, if you are going to compy directly off of the guy from "the world ends with you", then you could have done a way beter job. It just looks to sloppy. that girl that is being added behind him looks weird. The marvel pictures look like junk that any body could through together while half asleep with a broken pencil in the middle of class. I know, I am a really hard critic, that is just the way i have always been sry

05/30/08, 10:45 PM	#30
Cicero Consul Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: provoking people into discussions. Age: 18 Posts: 1,525 Rep Power: 4	Re: Twilight 93 Creations ^That is not giving critisism, that is just plain saying you don't like it in a really asshole kind off way. Critisim is pointing out the flaws of something, and giving tips to improve that, not just saying you don't like it. I'm surprised you call yourself a 'critic'...lol. Seriously. I must agree though, the Marvel drawings aren't all that good...the Iron Man seems promising though, I'd like to see the end result.

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