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August 10th, 2009, 11:38 PM
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#16 | | The Puppy †Jester†
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Registered: Feb 2005 Age: 21 Posts: 1,131 | Re: The Official Wiki Fanon Thread. Well here's mine <.<;; Axel Ryman - KHInsider RPG Inferno Wiki
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August 11th, 2009, 12:29 AM
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#17 | | Sidekick
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Currently playing: The RPG Inferno | Re: The Official Wiki Fanon Thread. Quote:
Originally Posted by Magus Fitzgerald | Although I question the genetic stability of a human puppy, I can't turn this down. It has grammar, punctuation, complete sentences, fully formed ideas, no god moddy powers... Congratulations for giving Rime a run for his munny. <3
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Originally Posted by drmasterzero | *sigh* I thought you were on the right track. I really did. So here's some problems. I commend you for making a massive history. I really do. You're just taking the fanon idea a tiny bit too far. As far as I know Sham is the only one who can have a transformation spell. Axie has that whole hybrid thing going on, but it doesn't really change his fighting style or make him stronger. Plus he would be weird as just a human. So unless Neo or D says so, no transformation spells. Please, as Iggy mentioned, cut that giant wall of text into paragraphs. Third person is nice, too. Periods are also your friend, and I think your confusing them for commas. So if you could just replace most of those commas with periods, that would be great. Also work on your spelling. Newist is not a word, sorry. Anyway, I do thank you for bothering to work on your page. Seriously. :3
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August 11th, 2009, 03:15 AM
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#18 | | The Puppy †Jester†
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Registered: Feb 2005 Age: 21 Posts: 1,131 | Re: The Official Wiki Fanon Thread. Quote:
Originally Posted by k77k Although I question the genetic stability of a human puppy, I can't turn this down. It has grammar, punctuation, complete sentences, fully formed ideas, no god moddy powers... Congratulations for giving Rime a run for his munny. <3 | Thanks, even though I felt like it was a bit crap. I mainly used the Human-Puppy Hybrid type since I'm still referred to as Puppy at times, and because of my current avatar that Iggy made. The Human half just explains the human-like qualities this Puppy has. :P Quote: |
Axie has that whole hybrid thing going on, but it doesn't really change his fighting style or make him stronger
| Err it kinda does really. <.<;; I kinda mentioned it on the page.
Although he could easily fight in his human form, Axel prefers to fight while in puppy form, seeing it as a more difficult training regiment. When fighting, he wields his weapons in his mouth, or even while standing on his hind legs, and holding the weapon in his front paws. Although lacking in strength, he makes up for it with his speed.
Then there's also his talents section.
While a puppy, he has greater speed than a human, allowing him to outrun most enemies easily, or being able to keep up with them if they're just as fast.
Thought I'd bring that to your attention since you said that. >.> Though in some ways the talents part is plausible as Dogs/Puppies > Humans in terms of speed. Quote: |
Plus he would be weird as just a human.
| I'm already weird though ._.; | |
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August 11th, 2009, 08:47 PM
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#19 | | Sidekick
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Originally Posted by Magus Fitzgerald Err it kinda does really. <.<;; I kinda mentioned it on the page.
Although he could easily fight in his human form, Axel prefers to fight while in puppy form, seeing it as a more difficult training regiment. When fighting, he wields his weapons in his mouth, or even while standing on his hind legs, and holding the weapon in his front paws. Although lacking in strength, he makes up for it with his speed.
Then there's also his talents section.
While a puppy, he has greater speed than a human, allowing him to outrun most enemies easily, or being able to keep up with them if they're just as fast.
Thought I'd bring that to your attention since you said that. >.> Though in some ways the talents part is plausible as Dogs/Puppies > Humans in terms of speed.
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Meh, I'll try again. Let's compare the two. Axie, you turn into an adorable puppy, with a minor strength debuff and a minor speed buff. 'Kay, I can live with that, and I hope no one else has a problem with it. Zero, on the other hand, turns into some kind of...beast...human...thing.*reads it again.* Oh, it makes him a lion. A human~lion thing. That's all I know about it. I can only assume he has some kind of massive blood-lust thing going on. It's hard to tell. While I keep hoping someone comes and clears this whole transformation thing up,let's just do this. Axie, you can keep your's. Zero, you can have your's if you can make it not ridiculous. You also have to rewrite your history and change it to third person, while making nice, clean paragraphs. Easy, right? Problem solved~ I hope. | |
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August 11th, 2009, 09:01 PM
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#20 | | Inferno Crafter Extraordinaire
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Registered: Apr 2007 Location: Vel Age: 24 Posts: 3,255
Currently playing: Final Fantasy VII | Re: The Official Wiki Fanon Thread. Humans are humans. Humans do not transform. Shamdeo is not Human. Therefore Shamdeo can transform. Also, no, you cannot make a character the same race as Shamdeo. That is all. | |
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August 11th, 2009, 11:47 PM
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#21 | | Keyblade Wielder
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Registered: May 2007 Location: Gibraltar Age: 20 Posts: 515 | Re: The Official Wiki Fanon Thread. Quote:
Originally Posted by k77k Meh, I'll try again. Let's compare the two. Axie, you turn into an adorable puppy, with a minor strength debuff and a minor speed buff. 'Kay, I can live with that, and I hope no one else has a problem with it. Zero, on the other hand, turns into some kind of...beast...human...thing.*reads it again.* Oh, it makes him a lion. A human~lion thing. That's all I know about it. I can only assume he has some kind of massive blood-lust thing going on. It's hard to tell. While I keep hoping someone comes and clears this whole transformation thing up,let's just do this. Axie, you can keep your's. Zero, you can have your's if you can make it not ridiculous. You also have to rewrite your history and change it to third person, while making nice, clean paragraphs. Easy, right? Problem solved~ I hope. | i did my history twice already, as for punctuation, periods are ' right?, paragraphs can do, also i thought about the beast human thing, more or less what you said to axie minor strength and speed boost, and no bloodlust i just got anger management issues and its not riduculous.
if you can help me out it would be great, cuz im doing the best i can
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August 12th, 2009, 02:25 AM
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#22 | | Sidekick
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Registered: Jun 2007 Location: Nowhere, NC Age: 21 Posts: 357 | Re: The Official Wiki Fanon Thread. @Axie: Quote:
Originally Posted by Magus Fitzgerald I'm already weird though ._.; | Understatement of the century. >.>
@Zero:
Periods are the punctuation that looks like >> . << that. Goes at the end of every sentence, and is found next to the comma on the keyboard.
@Cheshy:
I'm looking forward to the event this weekend; I'd love to have an excuse to go on a page creation binge. As a side quest that reveals some of the backstory, I'm assuming it should be filed under the canon/history category? Also, glad to see the list of character edits needed got shorter.
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August 12th, 2009, 02:29 AM
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#23 | | Inferno Crafter Extraordinaire
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Registered: Apr 2007 Location: Vel Age: 24 Posts: 3,255
Currently playing: Final Fantasy VII | Re: The Official Wiki Fanon Thread. Quote:
Originally Posted by luna_diviner @Cheshy:
I'm looking forward to the event this weekend; I'd love to have an excuse to go on a page creation binge. As a side quest that reveals some of the backstory, I'm assuming it should be filed under the canon/history category? Also, glad to see the list of character edits needed got shorter. | I'll be doing a page on the Greater Heartless. If you or Res wanna make the general "Heartless" page, you're more than free to, then I'll be go in and correct things here or there. Heartless are more or less the same as Kingdom Hearts Heartless, so... yeah >_>;; | |
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August 12th, 2009, 03:39 AM
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#24 | | Sidekick
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Registered: Oct 2007 Location: Class Cresent Moon Posts: 310
Currently playing: The RPG Inferno | Re: The Official Wiki Fanon Thread. Quote:
Originally Posted by drmasterzero i did my history twice already, as for punctuation, periods are ' right?, paragraphs can do, also i thought about the beast human thing, more or less what you said to axie minor strength and speed boost, and no bloodlust i just got anger management issues and its not riduculous.
if you can help me out it would be great, cuz im doing the best i can | Unfortunately, Neo has ruled no transformations. You probably just missed that or something. Moving on, your history needs work. I know you've done it twice, but you've almost got it working. Probably. After the previous period comment I must ask, is English your first language? Periods are pretty basic stuff. Anyway, your history also needs to be in third person. This means instead of having things like, "I ate a muffin." you need things like, "He ate a muffin." So yea, do that and fix your punctuation and you're done. | |
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August 13th, 2009, 07:27 AM
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#25 | | Keyblade Wielder
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Registered: May 2007 Location: Gibraltar Age: 20 Posts: 515 | Re: The Official Wiki Fanon Thread. yes english is my 1st language, we call periods ' what your talking about is a fullstop. but yea my history needs work then again i should have made it shorter, but when you have insipiration you dont stop typing.
hopefully i can put it in the 3rd person easier said than done, punctuation and spelling not so much.
As my comments about the whole thing, come on no transformations i think that was unfair just because sham can be a werewolf, no keyblades, no transformations geez man, at least i have the magic aura thing going
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August 13th, 2009, 08:43 AM
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#26 | | Member
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Registered: Aug 2008 Location: San Antionio Tx Age: 18 Posts: 158 | Re: The Official Wiki Fanon Thread. i have one question dose this have to be a made up character or can it be someone thats already been made like ventus my rpg name?
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August 13th, 2009, 08:57 AM
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#27 | | Sidekick
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Registered: Jun 2007 Location: Nowhere, NC Age: 21 Posts: 357 | Re: The Official Wiki Fanon Thread. It's supposed to be somewhat loosely based on your RPG character, with a butt-load of fictional backstory thrown in. The purpose of the wiki is to have all the information about the Inferno, but if you want to create a completely brand new character then go ahead. As long as it follows all of Cheshy's guidelines and we don't go too grammar Nazi on you, then it should fly. Basically just pretend you're creating a character for an extended D&D campaign, and you should do fine.
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August 13th, 2009, 09:01 AM
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#28 | | Member
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Registered: Aug 2008 Location: San Antionio Tx Age: 18 Posts: 158 | Re: The Official Wiki Fanon Thread. lol cool but see what i mean is can we use a character already created or dose it have to be made up like lets say i want to use roxas, sora, or ventus can i usse one of them and throw in my own details or dose it have to be a character we totally make up?
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August 13th, 2009, 09:05 AM
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#29 | | Sidekick
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Registered: Jun 2007 Location: Nowhere, NC Age: 21 Posts: 357 | Re: The Official Wiki Fanon Thread. I apologize for misreading. Yes, it has to be completely made up. Since it's actually a parallel-type universe, I'm gonna go out on a limb and say that the characters you speak of do not exist in this iteration. If they do, it will be in the Inferno as actual characters, in which case the mods would create the character bio. So unless it's an original, brand-new character, then it won't be acceptable.
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August 13th, 2009, 09:08 AM
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Registered: Aug 2008 Location: San Antionio Tx Age: 18 Posts: 158 | Re: The Official Wiki Fanon Thread. ok so i cannot make a character named ventus but i can make a character basied on my fourms name magicEdd thx for clearing it up....now i have to draw a picture...but i got a better idea my sis is much better so im just going to have her draw a picture for me muhahahahaa
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