Malachi's Promise

[Kingdom Keyblade]

“…and just what do you plan to do, Kail? If you succeed and become king…” The tired warrior lowers his sword and looks his enemy in the eye. “What will I do? Hmm… that is a good question, Malachi. A good question indeed.” He stares up at the dark night sky and ponders the question. “Well…” He looks at Malachi once again and continues. “Once I become king, I’ll replace the current king’s tired old royal guard with a powerful army of warriors loyal to me. Then I’ll lead an attack on the other nations and conquer them.” A grin comes across Kail’s face as he fantasizes about being the ruler of the world. Malachi noticed Kail was distracted by his thoughts, and he took this opportunity to strike. He raises his long sword into the air and starts to run at Kail; just the thought of Kail becoming king angers him to the point where he wishes nothing more than for Kail to die a slow and painful death. “You will never be king!!” Malachi yells as he closes in on Kail and attacks with a vertical slash. However… Kail anticipated Malachi’s attempt to kill him. “Fool!” Kail yells as he uses his powers to knock Malachi 10 feet backwards. “Did you really think I would let my guard down when you’re around?”

“Ugh..” Malachi lands just inches from the edge of the cliff. “Y-You freak… Go ahead, kill me. If I cannot fulfill my promise… then I deserve to die..” He tries to stand up but falls down, he is now too weak. “Hmm… death would be the easy way out. I could let you live knowing you failed your king…” Kail stares up at the sky one more time before coming to his decision. “Nah, I’ll kill you now.” Kail holds out his hands and makes a pushing motion, using his powers to send Malachi flying backwards and off the cliff.

Name: Malachi
Age: 22
Hair Color: Blonde
Eye Color: Blue
Height: 6ft
Appearance: He has long shoulder length hair, a beard. And he wears light body armor that bears the crest of the royal family.
Weapon of choice: A long sword with a golden hilt.
Job: Malachi leads the king’s royal army into battle. Not only does he command that army, but he also trains volunteers for combat when he has the spare time.

Ooc- This is an rp about a man that wants nothing more than to keep his promise to his father. But before he can do that, he needs to gather people to help fight in the war against Kail and his army. Then he has to take the new recruits back to his home land to join the rest of the king’s army. At first I only want 3 or 4 people to join. But later on more people can join. Don’t make your character god-like in any way, Kail is the only person that has powers in this rp. Your character can use swords, bows and arrows, daggers, and axes as weapons. No guns.

As I fall I can only think of how I failed… I promised I would stop Kail… But I couldn’t. I can only hope the king’s army will succeed in the battles that will come. I close my eyes and wait for my death.

To my astonishment, I open my eyes again. “Ugh… where am I?” I slowly sit up and look around. I appeared to be in the bedroom of a house. “Oh, so you’re finally awake?” I hear someone say. I turn my head and look at them. “Who are you?” I ask.

[Rage]

Name: Rage Kuraine
Age: 19
Hair Color: See Pic
Eye Color: Blue
Height: 6ft
Appearance:


Biography: Rage was once to be a Royal Knight, his father, who lead many men into battle was a loyal man, to his country, and to his family. As Rage entered his training under his fathers command he soon noticed that there was much more that he had to learn to become a Knight than what he had expected, but in spite of it Rage quickly rose to the top of his regiment and was well on his way to following his fathers footprints.

Rage's father was then killed, suprised and shocked, just like the nation, Rage quickly fell apart without his father's presence and the Army his father faught so hard to substain quickly fell, and left flames and rubble in its quake. After coming out of his phase of shock and denile, Rage noticed that he had failed to guide his fellow men into battle, and become victorious like his father would of done. Rage took this to heart, and realized that he would need much more training than what a simple Royal Guard could offer. Throwing himself into the land, Rage became a loaner, and travelled from town to town with no certain destination in mind, simply looking for the answer that didnt exist.

Rage kept one thing from his family, leaving everything else behind, and thats the family crest, a shining emblem of a wolf striking down a bear, a show of speed over power and acuracy and precision. Rage also carries with him a Bow, and a sword from another land, a Katana

if you need anyhting else, or anything changed, just give me a shout.

[Chip]

ooc- It starts out the same as your story with Deruku and Shidobu... almost. o.0;;

Name: Kimike Kanaka
Age: 19
Appearance: http://www.rpgamer.com/games/wog/wog...f_beramode.jpg
Weapon:Two Thin Swords, one shorter than the other.
Job: No job, devoted to sword fighting.
Bio: Since as long as she could walk, Kimike had always wanted to learn swordsmanship. She trained hard and is unrivialed in her village and other neigboring villages. Her parents died when she was 4 and she was adopted by a former ninja. She was trained in stealth as well as how to bruttally and silently kill her enemies. At times she seems to have no emotion. She has helped in many raids and contributed to a team of outlaws but slipped away before she did something too illegal.
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Kimike heared the bed sheets russle but keep her attention directed on cleaning te mans blade.
"Oh, so you're finally awake?" I asked sarcastically, knowing that he had to be from already speaking. "You are in the Lekona Village, 35 miles south of the cliff you seemingly fell from. Luckily you didn't hurt yourself too badly, I wouldn't have been able to help you up if you had hit your head any harder. Talk about a hard head."
She turned in her seat, her silver hair tumbling down her shoulders. "Anyways, Why should the leader of an army be plumiting of a cliff. I saw no others, not a glimpse, unless they were so sure of your death they felt no need to bother wasting their time checking on a weak swordsman."
She turned back, removing the last trickle of blood that managed to escape her mighty rag. After tossing the rag into a corner filled with dirty clothes, Kimike sheathed his sword and tossed it to him.
"Be carefull who you show that gold to, there are many theives here hiding in the shadows. They will not fear to take it from the Commander of the King's army. This village for the most part is against the king so you should lie low."
She stood and walked out of the room for a moment then returned. "Here I am known as Leona, my real name is Kimike. I used to oppose the king but turned away wen it mattered most."
She shook her head, "I have offered my services to your king as a spy, but he refused not even considering me because of thoughts that I might betray him." She paused, remembering the harsh words of the ruler, then again began speaking. "If you see him, tell him how much that information I had could have turned the tables in this pittiful war," she sneered.

[Kingdom Keyblade]

ooc-well,that part didnt make it into the latest edition of that story.So I used it to start this rp since I couldnt think of anything else.

I start to get out of the bed but I stop.I felt like I had been trampled by 100 horses,but still I acted as if I was perfectly fine. "Weak swordsman? I'm no-" I stop and think for a moment,and say "wait,what kind of information did you have?"

[Ric]

(( YOU STOLE MY RP NAME RAGE!!!!!!!!!!. Any ways can you pm when i can join?))

[Chip]

Kimike grinned slightly. "It's of no use now," she said grimly, "But I knew the stratigies of all the early battles in this war. Inside and out. Your side always feel into their cleverly hidden traps and is what cause your side to be losing. But your foolish king's implusive decision is what keep all that information from your army."
She sighed. "Why is it royalty is so hard headed? You'd think they could take risks by now and have precausions for everything. But the world has changed very little these past few decades."
She brushed her hair aside and muttered, "Now because of certain deliemas I haven't been able to check in on the next plans."

[Rage]

( ive actually had this name on here a LOT longer than you, i had it before these forums moved and just came back.....sry man, never expected anyone to choose as weird name as i did lol...hope there no hard ends between us, i've read some of your stuff and your a great RPer)

As Rage entered the village, he quickly noitced the small packs of people at the edge of the city and near the buildings, They seemed to be some type of clan

Rage -"thieves...everywhere now"

Rage avoided eye contact with the people and continued on into the village where the sight of people wrking and going about there daily lives could be seen, Rage then felt a smooth breeze sweep by, coming through his hair and across his face. Rage was taken by it and sloowly raised his head till it ws angled high enough to see the peak of the mountains in the distance. Rage then heard a voice from behind him

??? - "alone huh?.....what are you doing here"

Rage turned around to see a group of 3 men heading towards him.

??? -"by the crest on your arm, i'd say your of high honor"

Rage peared down the side of his arm and gazed at the worn out patch on his coat, the crest of his family, Kuraine.

Rage -" and im sure you thives have a crest of your own"

Rage showed no emotion on his face, and deep hollow eyes reflected nothing. Rage then turned back around and walked away from the men furhter into the village. As he walked off the 3 men whispered and spoke among eachother. Rage had other things on his mind, other than fighting.

[Kingdom Keyblade]

"The King isnt hard headed... If he refused to take you up on your offer,then he must've had a very good reason,I'm sure. But... that information would have helped a lot.."

[Chip]

"Fine, say he had a reason. It still wouldn't have hurt him to accept my help. I have offered it many times but he refuses for a reason I don't know." She shook her head. "I'm going out, if you feel no reason to stay, I ask you to please leave. I don't know why but if you want to stay, I suggest either you stay here or find a way to hide your face."
Kimike walked outside, into the bright morning sun. She checked to make sure she had her swords at her sides then started off towards the store. She had been outof water for a day and she was very thirsty.

[Kingdom Keyblade]

"..." I slowly get out of the bed and stand up. "ugh..." I was still sore. "I swear I'll kill Kail if I ever see him again.." I get my items together and I look toward the door. Hide my face?I'm not a coward... but I'm in no condition to get into any fights... I pull out a chainmail hood from the back of my armor and I put it over my head,slightly covering my face.

[Rage]

As Rage made it deeper into the village he noticed a woman wlking across the street and into another building.

Rage -"hrmm...maybe a pub"

Rage started to walk across the half dirt, half trampled grass ground towards the building, Rage then quikcly peered over his shoulder out of the conrer of his eye and noitced that the men were gone. As Rage entered the building his eyes quickly adjusted to the little light it had, as his vision unblurred he noticed he was in a store. Food, weapons and other items were drapped across the walls on shelves.

[Chip]

Kimike leaned on the counter, "Jack, can you get me two galloons of water?"

Jack looked over towards her from where he stood, adding a new type of arrow to the shelves. "Yes, mam'," he walked into the back.

She heard the door open and curiously looked behind her shoulder. There was a man, he was foreign to this village.

"Hello, what business do you have here?" She inquired. "The only ones who have any interest here are thieves looking for a safe zone or soldiers fleeing from the army."

[Rage]

Rage looked over from the shelves at the women, her hair and fair complection seemed to light the room around her.

Rage -"nothing really...im from the north, just passing by."

Rage reached out his right arm to shake her hand, showing his patch wich even seemed more faded in the inside. His long leather coat was drapped in dust from the roads from his travels across the mountains

[Chip]

Kimike shook his extended hand, "So, are you from a wealthy family? Or is that crest just for show?"

Jack came into the room putting two jugs of water on the counter, "Here, Ms. Kanaka."

She smiled and put a gold coin on the counter. "Thanks Jack." She took the jugs, letting them dangle with her arms by her sides. "Well I hope you enjoy your stay, and watch your back."

[Rage]

Rage grinned as a small splash of water escaped the jug dripping on the floor

Rage -"no problem, hope to see you again Ms. Kanaka"

The women made her way out the door and Rage turned his attention to Jack

Rage -"you wouldnt happen to have any arrows would you"

Before jack could answer, Rage heard someone enter the shop, the sound of a sword could be heard clanking against there side. Rage tried to peer around his shoulder without drawing attention to himself.