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| Organization Member | The Republic Dawn The Great Sith War has ended for the most part, and the Jedi Order is attempting to clean up the last pockets of fighting. The Great Hunt is in full swing, and the Jedi are on their way to eliminating the last of the Sith forces. Meanwhile, the Republic has once again begun expanding. Colonists are traveling the galaxy searching for new worlds to add to the Republic. The chance of a new life outside the Core Worlds attracts many people, and the ships are always full up with eager travelers. Too many this is a new chapter in their lives, leaving behind family and friends for a life of adventure and risk all in the name of the Republic. This is the story of one such ship, the Republic Dawn is approaching their target system and will shortly come out of hyperspace to the light of a new sun. Are you ready? The Rules 1. No Godmodding or power-playing. 2. Literacy: Please try to present something resembling a coherent post. I understand that not one of us is perfect, but effort goes a long way. 3. Romance is allowed, not recommended, but allowed. 4. Violence is most likely going to occur, people are exploring a new planet with possibly deadly natives or landscape. 5. Please try to be active. A post a week is not active. A post every day or so is much better and very appreciated. We all have lives outside this site. But try to remember this. 6. Keep the fighting reasonable. No one likes someone who can’t be hit. 7. Jedi spots are nonexistent. Don’t even ask. However, if you wish, you may be Force sensitive. 8. I can deny your entry for any reason. Not that I will be mean about it, but I want some effort. 9. Be civil to each other outside of character. And don’t take things personally. 10. Add “The Republic’s destiny is in expansion” at the end of your template if you have read and agree to these rules. 11. Have fun. Template Name: (You know, what your character is called, BE ORIGINAL) Occupation: (Anything your character specializes in) Species: (Pick one from Star Wars, if its obscure then link to a picture or something) Gender: (Duh) Age: (Reasonable age, please) Personality: (An idea of what your character is like) Appearance: (A picture is fine, but add some text as well) Weapon: (No lightsabers) Abilities/Skills/Equipment: (Any skills, equipments, or abilities) Bio: (Two paragraphs minimum, include a reason to be on the Republic Dawn) Extras: (Anything that doesn't fit already) Accepted Characters BD-42 ~ Ashes Remnant Jason Valbrend ~ cloudwolf124 Logan Vash ~ Reckless Brawler Tomin Nathim ~ Tomin Ben Cadeous ~ Jopari Torl ~ ninjalycan Last edited by Jopari; August 11th, 2009 at 01:53 PM. |
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| Sidekick Join Date: Oct 2007 Location: who cares Age: 16 Posts: 314
Rep Power: 3 ![]() Level: EXP: | cool i shall post temp later alright its late and i am tired |
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| Heartless | Oh this is gonna be sweet, sorry though, can't post my temp up today, i'll get on it tomorrow. |
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| Nobody Join Date: Aug 2009 Posts: 18
Rep Power: 0 ![]() Level: EXP: | So this is wat u were talking about.I'll post my tempt later today.by the way cani just be a human? Last edited by tishima; August 9th, 2009 at 05:38 PM. |
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| Organization Member | Yeah, that's fine, tishima |
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| Nobody Join Date: Aug 2009 Posts: 18
Rep Power: 0 ![]() Level: EXP: | by the way,i know its random but can we have keyblades? |
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| She's Music to my Eyes Join Date: Sep 2005 Location: Ohio Age: 17 Posts: 3,015
Rep Power: 9 ![]() ![]() Currently playing: Call of Duty: Modern Warfare 2 Level: 18 EXP: | Yep, I'll join. Warning, weird template ahead Name: BD-42 Occupation: Servant Species: Droid Gender: Male body-type. Age: 98 since activation Personality: Non-existant Appearance: He's built in the likeness of the infamous HK-47, his colors however are blue. He also bears a strange symbol on his back, almost looking like a bird. Weapon: N/A Abilities/Skills/Equipment: Can interface with any computer, has perfect targeting, super-brilliant mind, translating, and other functions a droid would have. Bio: He's a droid. Servant all his life. Though, his last master wiped him clean. He doesn't know his past. Extras: None The Republic’s destiny is in expansion... Last edited by Ashes Remnant; August 9th, 2009 at 08:57 PM. |
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| Organization Member | @ tishima: No @ Ashes: I was looking for more in the way of bio and personality. Oh, and you're missing something. Read the rules again. I might let you pass if you add what you're missing and give me a reason for the short bio. |
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| She's Music to my Eyes Join Date: Sep 2005 Location: Ohio Age: 17 Posts: 3,015
Rep Power: 9 ![]() ![]() Currently playing: Call of Duty: Modern Warfare 2 Level: 18 EXP: | I read the rules. Just forgot. Sorry. And I'll PM you. |
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| Nobody Join Date: Aug 2009 Posts: 18
Rep Power: 0 ![]() Level: EXP: | Name:Eolea Shemberg Occupation:Mercenary Species:Human Gender:Male Age:29 Personality:Always relaxed.A person who is calm for almost all situations that happens toward him. hes very smart and and analyzes enemies carefuly. Apperenance:I look like cloud from the first FFVII.Instead of up blond hair, I have short down black hair.Also instead of purple cloths i have dark blue pants and black lether jaket. Weapon:SoulReaver,a Double edge sord with a skull for a hilt. Soulreaver image by Alexxx_Kickass_21 on Photobucket Skills:Goodstragigest, Bio: Extras: Hold on my its late and i'll resume tommoro. Last edited by tishima; August 10th, 2009 at 04:22 AM. |
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| Organization Member | tishima, I'm not saying no, but I have a few things you need to fix before I will consider your character. I'd suggest running your template through a spell checker first. The second part is theme. Does your character really fit into the Star Wars universe? Right now it seems to be a photocopy of a few characters from other works. I don't think a rogue swordsman would be too welcome in a new colony. Maybe a mercenary would be better. And your bio needs to be longer. Oh, and you're missing something. |
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| Nobody Join Date: Aug 2009 Posts: 18
Rep Power: 0 ![]() Level: EXP: | ok i'll get right on it sir! |
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| Sidekick Join Date: Oct 2007 Location: who cares Age: 16 Posts: 314
Rep Power: 3 ![]() Level: EXP: | Name: Jason Valbrend Occupation: Scouting, Reconnaissance Species: human Gender: Male Age: 25 . Personality: He is the silent type. He can act obnoxious at times but mainly keeps to himself. He hates conflict unless truly necessary. He has lost some sanity due to the constant threat during his time away. He reacts to threats in a deadly way. Appearance: http://images2.wikia.nocookie.net/st...es_DracoHS.jpg Jason has a medium build and mainly always wears red scouting armor he wears black boots sometimes wears goggles or glasses to hide his eyes which are blue Weapon: standard blaster rifle-> http://www.theforceperu.net/img/data...ter_dc_15a.png, and normal vibroblade -> http://ecx.images-amazon.com/images/...500_AA280_.jpg Abilities/Skills/Equipment: can survive in harsh landscapes, and has perfect scouting ability Bio: Jason grew up in a orphanage for the first eighteen years of life. When he turned eighteen he began traveling the galaxy helping people. He lived making money doing rescue mission sometimes leading him to hostile planets for hostage situations. On one particular mission his ship crashed landed on an unknown planet knowing rescue was impossible he began living off the environment. During his Years on the planet Jason learned his scouting ability and wilderness survival. For 2 years he was hunted by natives and creatures alike. After years of harsh living and constant threat he found a radio transmitter from an abandoned native village using it he called a rescue group out to the planet and was taking back to his home planet. When he made it back to his home planet he heard of the Republic Dawn thinking his services could be of use he began his travel to a new planet with a hope of colonization. Extras: has been known to survive in hostile situations for weeks by himself. His time alone has made him rough. He has forgotten human companionship. partially insane The Republic’s destiny is in expansion Last edited by cloudwolf124; August 10th, 2009 at 06:47 AM. |
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| Organization Member | Name: Ben Cadeous Occupation: Engineer Species: Human Gender: Male Age: 28 Personality: Ben likes to play things fast and loose. He isn't one to wait around and plan things out. He'd rather jump right to the action. However, he does get the job done with a combination of skill and luck. Ben isn't one to take charge, but he under proper leadership he is a good addition to a team. Ben's moral stance is very loose, he does what it takes to get his job done. While he isn't prone to violence, and would actually avoid the fight if he could, he will still disable anyone who stands between him and his goal. Appearance: Ben is a tall, slender human with light skin. His features are sharp and almost birdlike with piercing blue eyes and long brown hair pulled back into a ponytail. He seems to have an almost perpetual stubble due to his inconsistent grooming habits, but he is at least clean. His skin is pale from working inside most of his life, and the fact that the hardest labor he's ever done is assemble some droids is shown in his sparse muscle mass. He wears a simple outfit for his work. A pair of pants with a few large pockets to hold his tools that are held up with a work belt. A holster dangles off the right side of the belt, holding his blaster pistol. A simple shirt with a leather jacket over it protects his upper body. He also wears simple work boots. One his left hand pinky finger is a simple steel ring. Weapon: A simple blaster pistol is Ben's only weapon. Abilities/Skills/Equipment: Engineer: Ben is a skilled engineer, capable of fixing and operating a variety of machines, from large vehicles and starships to droids and tools. However, he needs his tools to do anything more than examine a problem. Engineer Kit: Ben's tool belt contains everything he needs to repair minor issues. He has a mini fusion cutter, a length of high tension wire, a spanner, power packs, and even a small container of bacta salve. Force-Sensitive: Ben doesn't know it, but he's a sensitive to the Force. It doesn't have much of an impact, but he often has a streak of luck that saves his life, as well as being able to see flaws and malfunctions in machines before they occur. Bio: Ben was born on one of the Core Worlds and lived there for almost his entire life. Ben's parents both worked as mechanics on cleaning droids. Surrounded with half assembled machinery for most of his life Ben grew an affinity towards the machines. His skills grew as he helped his parents in their business. By the age of 12 Ben was doing very well for himself. The family business was booming and showed no signs of slowing. One of their clients brought a defective droid to them, saying that it was acting oddly. His parents went about trying to repair the droid. However, during their attempts at repairing it another person approached them and asked for them to hand the droid over. Upon their refusal he gunned them down and took the droid, leaving Ben unharmed by chance. Ben was shattered by the loss of his parents. He decided to follow through in their career and become an engineer. He also took their refusal to hand over the droid to heart, and decided to never let anything stand in the way of his goals. At the age of 21 he finally achieved his goal and was hired onto a company designing battle droids. He worked on the design team for a while and created quite a few feasible designs before the company was shut down for political reasons. Out of a job and low on credits Ben picked up a spot on the Republic Dawn as the colony's deputy engineer. Eager to do his job to the best of his ability he quickly boarded the ship and set about learning everything he could about the colony ship's supplies. He quickly became devoted to designing the best colony he could for the world they found. Extras: N/A Last edited by Jopari; August 11th, 2009 at 05:57 AM. |
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| Heartless Join Date: Jun 2008 Location: Somewhere I Guess Age: 19 Posts: 98
Rep Power: 2 ![]() Level: EXP: | I'll join it could be fun. Name: Logan Vash Aka The Hunter Occupation: Bounty Hunter Species: Mandalorian Gender: Male Age: 34 Personality: If you had to categorize The Hunters personality into one word it would be ruthless. This bounty hunter pulls out all the stops and always gets his mark. He is willing to torture, kill and destroy to make sure he is the number one bounty hunter in the known galaxy. Apperance:http://images3.wikia.nocookie.net/st...timate_uvg.jpg Only The Hunter knows what his actual face looks like any and all others seem him, behind the cold steel visor. The Hunter stands, roughly at 6'4 and even thought with all his armor on still weighes under 250 pounds allowing him to still run at near lightning speeds. Weapons: Twin Blasters, Blaster Rifle, Plasma Grenades, Flamethrower on the left arm, and also an auto detection system in the helmet. Abilities: Like all Mandalorians he is very capable at fighting. He is a precise shot, he has great endurance, and he has knowledge of all races and can speak almost all languages. And all others things you would expect from a Mandalorian. Bio: The Hunter was born on Mandalore but following the Great Sith War he has since been a drift among the stars. He has learned through his encounters that the Mandalorians have lost their way. He feels no regret in killing his fellow kind or any other kind for that matter. When Logan became a bounty hunter, he learned quickly that it was a cutthroat profession and he would have to leave his mercy at the door. if he were to survive. After only three years of service, Logan soon became known as The Hunter. And as The Hunter he has shown that he is the greatest threat for any man with a price on his head. When it comes to the Republic Logan could care less. Whether it be Sith or Republic there is always bounties for him to hunt. But since the sith have known all but disappered it seems Logan had no choice but to side with the republic. So know he finds himself on the Republic dawn, however it is not on the best of terms he finds himself on this ship. It seems that three criminals have sneaked on board the Republic Dawn. The killed members of the orignal crew and now are taking their place on the ship. The Hunter finds himself on a hunt on one of the largest ships in the Republics Fleet, and yet he still knows he will get his bounty. The Republic's Destiny is in Expansion. Last edited by Reckless Brawler; August 10th, 2009 at 07:10 PM. |
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