new idea,

[Oblivion Fenrir]

I have this pretty decent idea for an RP, if anyone is willing to help me with it? I can't seem to form a cohesive plot of it all, it's a modern day RP revolving around Demons, Angels, and obviously humans... I have a starting point, but nothing else, if anyone is willing to collab with me on this help me fill in the gaps, I'd be really grateful. Here are some of the elements I have,

An amnesic protagonist,

A guiding voice,

Demons and Angels collaborating to make sure this protagonist doesn't reach his goal.

[Keyblader!]

Do you know what the purpose of an an amnesic protagonist is Shinra?

[Oblivion Fenrir]

yes but I'm waiting to tell

[magicedd]

So I think the first thing you want to work on is the plot,

What exactly is that one person's specific goal?

If not,
Where dose everything take place? Like our Earth? If so, what time period? Past present Future?

Then you want to figure out, how you want to bring Angles and Demons into the rp, why are they trying to stop this one person from achiving his goal, and since they both have a common interest would they be working togther?

[Oblivion Fenrir]

first off I have holes in the plat I can't seem to fill with just my imagination at this moment,

yes it takes place on our earth, in the present,

The specific goal at this point is for the protagonist to get his memory back, then he'll obtain knowledge of his next goal and move toward it, but the holes are how he's supposed to get his memory back and his goal after is clear to save the world, but there's also the method of how he's supposed to do it...

[magicedd]

How about by visiting old sites? Or things that happend to him before he lost his memory like people recognizing him.

is he in some sort of agency? That way you now have a slot opened up for people to choose from

Angles, Demons, Reg By Standers, and The Agency

Whats exactly happening to the world?

Is it like whats going on in rl? The Natural disasters?

[Oblivion Fenrir]

he's not in an agency, this is a mythological type RP,

[magicedd]

Okay, so what was he doing before he lost his memory?

Is he like hunting them???

Like in supernatural?

[Oblivion Fenrir]

he's simply fufilling his destiny, he's the only one of his kind, and it doesn't involve hunting demons or angels

[magicedd]

Well then wouldnt this be more of a written story then a role play?

[Oblivion Fenrir]

I want it to be an RP okay? I need RPer's for the demons, etc...

[magicedd]

um okay i guess, good luck

[Professor Ven]

Looks like something I've already seen lol

[OmniChaos]

Demons and Angels collaborating to make sure this protagonist doesn't reach his goal.

This is just sort of bugging me.
What could Angels and Demons possibly agree upon that both would consider the protagonist a threat? I mean, they're polar opposites of each other: Angels protect and save, Demons attack and ruin. I cannot possibly see how they would join forces to stop one boy.

The specific goal at this point is for the protagonist to get his memory back,

This, if you ask me, should be the center-point of the roleplay, as it keeps the protagonist's true identity, purpose, etc. hidden until the very end and makes for a much more rounded story. Meanwhile,

then he'll obtain knowledge of his next goal and move toward it,

and

and his goal after is clear to save the world,

are a bit overdone and unnecessary (and strange, given that angels are apparently trying to stop him). I say make the recovery of the protagonist's memories his main goal (with any other goal a branch from it) and build the roleplay out around that, using it as the cornerstone of your story.

but the holes are how he's supposed to get his memory back
but there's also the method of how he's supposed to do it...

Well, it depends on which way you intent to take the character.
People with amnesia tend to best recover memories around loved ones and familiar, cherished places. However, if you're looking for the more theological approach, you can have him visit important places such as Meggido and whatnot.

[Oblivion Fenrir]

This is just sort of bugging me.
What could Angels and Demons possibly agree upon that both would consider the protagonist a threat? I mean, they're polar opposites of each other: Angels protect and save, Demons attack and ruin. I cannot possibly see how they would join forces to stop one boy.



This, if you ask me, should be the center-point of the roleplay, as it keeps the protagonist's true identity, purpose, etc. hidden until the very end and makes for a much more rounded story. Meanwhile,



and



are a bit overdone and unnecessary (and strange, given that angels are apparently trying to stop him). I say make the recovery of the protagonist's memories his main goal (with any other goal a branch from it) and build the roleplay out around that, using it as the cornerstone of your story.



Well, it depends on which way you intent to take the character.
People with amnesia tend to best recover memories around loved ones and familiar, cherished places. However, if you're looking for the more theological approach, you can have him visit important places such as Meggido and whatnot.

2.as these are interconnected, yeah that's even better, fufill his task along the way. you pretty much solved my problem bro...

3. yes, although for the sake of spoiling what I have, I'll just say I figured it out thanks to you...