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[Xth]

Character Name:
Kurogane

Real Name:
Kaoru Otokashi

Gender:
Male

Age/Appearance:
Kurogane bears the appearance of a fifteen year-old male with a blank facial expression. His dark gray hair drapes down to his shoulders giving others the impression of him being a female character. Kurogane stands at 5'6 and wears simple garments. On his torso is a black sleevless jacket zipped up to cover his neck. On his forearms are two bracelets per arm. He wears loose midnight blue pants upon his legs. His last pieces to the outfits are chains coiled on his right arm and left pants leg.

Persona:
Kurogane isn't the talkative type or one could say that he has no words for anyone. If he feels to need to convey thoughts, his sentences are short but can be confusing or clear depending on the person. He has small patience for extroverts, people who question him to much, or an overall happy person. This trait makes him reject the world and actively participate in PvP. The cruel killer that is Kurogane has some compassion for something. But speaking of it is not of his own nature. Overall, anything cute or happy, he'll bring ruin to it.

Classes:
Xtreme Buster/Double Blader

Weapons:
Angelus - Kurogane's primary weapon in battle and used mostly for other Characters he hunts. The blade is at least a foot larger than Kurogane himself. Its blade is violet with X grooves upon both sides. The handle is crimson red and from the end hangs a broken half of heart. The top of the blade curves in an arc and on the edges are spikes connected to a chain. When in collision with another character's weapon, the spikes and chain move reminiscent to a chainsaw.

Sibling Sovereign - Kurogane's secondary weapon used for monsters mainly and weak Characters. The blades are gray just as Kuro's hair and are curved hooks that latch onto prey. The handles are a dirty gold color. Upon the sharp sides of the blades are several grooves. The Sibling Sovereign, as opposed to the Angelus, allow Kurogane for great manueravability but less power as opposed to Angelus. Switching between both is key to Kurogane's victories.

History:
Kaoru Otonashi is a loyal player of The World. He's a regular game addict and his isolation when playing games is what has made him distant from the real world. Being the loyal gamer that he is, Kaoru purchased the latest version of The World, NeV. From that day he acquired his copy of the game, he has only put it down for necessary tasks of the day but otherwise can't stop playing at his persona, Kurogane.

In the game, Kurogane, an introvert, ventures through the game alone and seems to be on a journey to seize power to others who have witnessed his brutality against the cheerful ones. That isn't the case whatsoever. Kurogane mentions this to few but he is searching for something that he prefers to call "she" and "her". Not necessarily it being a girl but just something he seeks by killing the innocent and those whom he generally doesn't like. Kurogane isn't very excited about making friends but he wouldn't have disdain for some company in his mission.

[Shattered Redemption]

This template is excellent, you are certainly accepted Xth.

[Souretsu Gear]

Character Name
Rito

Real Name
Yuuki Sakuretsu

Gender
Male

Age/Appearance

-17-
Rito (Note. I am using the picture for use of the hair and clothing the boy has in it.)
Having unkempt, "long" black hair and red eyes, Rito measures up to 5'8" and his attire wholly consists of a black and white toned coat, black, loose pants, black and white shoes, and is fairly skinny looking despite having such heavy looking attire on. To go along with his 'gunslinger' outfit, he has black and white monotone gloves on to match the whole set.

Persona
Rito does not even try to mask his own personality with another. Despite being partially pessimistic about the latter half of situations and the aloof-like appearance as if he doesn't know a thing that is going around, he is rather a very vigorous character with a perceptive mind and well understanding. He has a calm disposition but at times jump to conclusions.

No matter how strange the personality another player shows, Rito can easily get along with them without the trouble. Adept in combat of any sort, he can easily counter his opponents with his two favorable choices of; 1) "Think a well thought strategy" or 2) "Just shoot the freaking crap out of them". Normally, he chooses option 2 as he thinks he's too lazy to come up with a plan in the middle of the battle.

Class/s
[Xth Shooter]

Weapons

Dual Gun-Eternal Revolver
Its design is a nod to the original DG-X of R:2. The only difference is that the pistol barrel is an inch longer than the original and the fact it's part of series that mirrors the DG series; the Eternal Series. The Eternal series, which consist of different Dual guns of different levels, are one of a kind weapons that can only be obtained through a series of events called the "Endless Abyss" which is Xth Shooters only.

Dual Gun Blade-Undying Orchestra
Similar to how the Eternal Revolver is obtained. This is set along with the Eternal Revolver. A DG Blade recognizable for its single blade edge like design, thin from the tip and grows wider in width with three ''teeth" on the blunt side of blade. It glows an azure blue when the user is not in battle and turns red-orange when in battle. The effect of the blade includes a "burning" ability. A combo of using the blades and guns one after the other activates the "burning" ability.

History
Rito has played the previous installments of The World before NeV has ever been brought up. In The World NeV, he is a well versed player, famed for being a PKK'er at times and a random partier who joins just about any party. Known by some groups and also hunted by many, Rito doesn't care what is or might going to happen to him, as long as he still like the game, he's fine. So far, he has been looking around to game for permanant friends such of the like.

[Seigfreid]

Character Name
<Zambion the Dragon/ Abomination the Fire Wraith>

Real Name
<Ryuuga Kai>

Gender
<Male>

Age/Appearance
<Zambion except no wings. Abomination looks exactly them same except for the armor is black and red with the elbows and knees being missing replaced by fire bonds and fire coming out of the holes of the armor.>

Persona
<Some people think he is the classic knight in shinning armor due to the style of his weapons and if you are a female character in need of rescuing he will be there to save you he has this to say "Get your head outa the fairy tail books you dunder head." then precede to slap you up side the head. He also has a tendency to keep all rare equipment he finds to himself that got him the nickname the Dragon. He also has no respect towards authority.

Abomination is more or less a insane corrupt clone of Zambion and has a tendency to go into fits of insane laughter but he has a habit of not talking at all. No one knows why he doesn't talk cause more less no one is stupid or brave enough to ask.>

Class/s
<Feral Battler/Specter Reaper>

Weapons
Asgard / Ragnarök
Asgard is a pair of guantlets that go up to the shoulders and have a special sixth "finger" that is between the middle and ring finger that is empowered with electricity it's for the most part silver and blue with small spikes at the the end of the knuckles. Ragnarök is a corrupt version of the Asgard and is red and black to the Asgard's silver and blue. It also has the sixth "finger" except more jagged and is in empowered with fire as opposed to electricity for the Asgard.

Cosmic Wave / Armageddon
Cosmic Wave is a scythe that looks like it was made more a angel than anything else. The blade has a Chinese dragon etched straight on to it with part of the blade being held in place by a wing. The staff part is gold in color with the bottom ending in a blue orb. Armageddon is the corrupt form of the Cosmic Wave with the blade looking like it is covered in rust with dark tendrils holding it into place and the blade the staff part looking like a blood stained night sky. With it ending with a small hook at the bottom.

History
<In the real world he is in therapy over his elder brothers death 1 and a half years before starting the game. The therapist used the World as a new type of therapy. It worked as in he is a lot more happy than he was before. But his elder brother left a surprise for Ryuuga in the form of a virus like program he had installed before his death into Ryuuga's computer. Ryuuga never knew of the program and still has no idea of it's existence to this day. The program activates every time Zambion logs off. It then brings Abomination to the World. Abomination got the name Fire Wraith due to his preference of fire type spells equipment and fields and also due to the fact when a rumor was spreed that he had a super rare item the PK's who wanted ended in a firey demise with him leaving while walking in the flames. Zambion got the name The Dragon due to his hoarding tendencies

No one knows why Zambion and Abomination look alike not even them selves as they have never (And will never)meet. It should also be noted Abomination is a AI run character but if either Zambion and Abomination are deleted the other is fated to the same.

[Shattered Redemption]

You are accepted, begin posting in the above thread when ready.

[Shattered Redemption]

kingdom, Dude post at least two paragraphs, or like one large one as Xth does. Your posts are seriously pitiful. You just posted a sentence..........

[kingdomfighter5]

Dont worry i had to leave for a bit and the stuff i was going to type would have had taken a while to write. I needed to save a spot before i leave so i could edit that ok with you ill notify what im doing next time ok. I just needed to save a spot to keep the confusion of the story to a min.

was that bug comment towards my character

[Shattered Redemption]

lol I am just looking at posts and I see why a lot of rps just die, or get nowhere. With so little to work on, it makes other rps and rp makers have to work more. All of you are literally posting like single paragraph posts, and relatively short ones at that.......

[kingdomfighter5]

Posting more than two paragraphs often infringes on the use of other peoples characters. Thats why the posts are short. Some post just die because of boredom. Ive made several rps and sometimes it works others it doesnt. it depends on, interest, ability to post of the users, and boredom facters, action has to be constent later in the story or it will die or loose people. KHInsider High School is one of the longer lasting and the open endedness and that fact that you can join when ever is the reason. If you want to make a story like Kingdom Knights, it is a lot harder. i made it through with the first instalment but the second instalment Kingdom Knights Return of the Knights failed because of one users inability to post more and he stoped the motion because he had to die. (but not really) Pokemon never works for some reason. But i havent seen a . hack in a while so you may be able to work it out. post size doesnt matter for the most part.

[Shattered Redemption]

Dude I have no idea where you are getting that post size does not matter, because point and set it seriously does. Posting a larger post does not infringe on the use of other rpers characters, because if you did it would be powerplaying which as an rper you would know it is not allowed.

I figure you don't really know of me, it would make sense because of the things you are saying. Go to nearly any rp I have been in, and see that the posts are not anywhere close to just a mere sentence or two.

[Xth]

Originally Posted by kingdomfighter5

was that bug comment towards my character

That was directed to Seru, I apologize for not making it specific.

[kingdomfighter5]

speaking of powereplaying lookey over at Xth post. He just eliminated several characters. Hes definately power hungry. And not following the posts that have been place very well.

What i was saying is that people tend to infringe more when they are forced longer posts. I know that good posters will write well with longer posts. But people new to the rps dont do as well and always arent aware of all the rules. I see your point as well. And it works well with people who are talented with rps but some of your members in this thread.

[Shattered Redemption]

S.G, Boa did not say those things, Seru did. Yet you posted that Boa scoffed at everyone and said it......

As for you kingdomfighter5 I hope you were not talking about your character attacking Boa in his post, because that aint happenin. The post was pp if he was.

[kingdomfighter5]

I didnt think it was Boa. Sorry ill change it if it was. This whole story is confusing me at the moment. Is Boa the thing that is the Van? Who is it there are two many pronouns and people going through the posts. And how is attacking a person but only having them flying back but hardly any 1 damage powerplaying. Thats like just using that just showing that this character is stronger.