in jubilant air does sound escape to ardor
it insists upon its own energy
in resonance with all of its captive souls
drawn in by excitement
and withheld
peace is the saturation of the state of rest
all that lay here are one with this notion
as alive as its very tenants are friendly
others moved and participant in kindness
hostility is neither shed nor is it known
consumed by complete tranquility
able to finally know peace
eyes that water for what was sought impossible
to finally acknowledge man as a brother
and woman it's sister
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Thread: attack of paradise
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July 14, 2012, 03:29 PM #1MasterOfSinOblivion
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attack of paradise
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❝OH SO YOU THINK YOUR COOL BECAUSE YOUR SIG MOVES?❞
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July 15, 2012, 09:21 PM #2Nobody
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Re: attack of paradise
Very interesting. Is it about the final realization of peace in humanity? If that makes any sense xD
The day will come when, after harnessing the ether, the winds, the tides, gravitation, we shall harness for God the energies of love. And, on that day, for the second time in the history of the world, man will have discovered fire.
-Pierre Teilhard de Chardin
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July 18, 2012, 07:12 AM #3MasterOfSinOblivion
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Re: attack of paradise
xD you hit the nail on the head bro.
thank you for the read.
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August 3, 2012, 04:08 AM #4Princess of Heart
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Re: attack of paradise
very good! A+ use of metaphor, even if it did get a little repetitive. i loved looking at this as a personification of sound, interesting <3 however that personification seemed to get lost in the description of peace. is it sound that leads us to peace, or is the sound itself finding peace? little confusing
[17:01:46] steve: yeah life flies by when you're in college wanting to die
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