You punch and kick and scream
Breaking glass, shattering windows
Kick in the door, while walls collapse
But no-one can hear you, so you smile,
and ask how their day was.
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Thread: Mask.
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June 5, 2012, 05:40 AM #1Enigmatic Soldier
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Mask.
Hate all you want, but I will love and tolerate the Shit out of you.
Ardenticer, noun; One who entices others to be passionate and enthusiastic in various endeavors. Yeah, I made a word, that's what's up.
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June 5, 2012, 05:52 AM #2Nobody
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Re: Mask.
Interesting. I believe this belongs in the Poetry section, I'm not sure I understand the message of this.
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June 7, 2012, 05:06 PM #3Keyblade Wielder
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Re: Mask.
It does seem like poetry, and I find it interesting. I'm guessing this comes from personal experience? I think I can see where this came from. Short and sweet ;D
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July 26, 2012, 05:32 AM #4jacquelinez
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Re: Mask.
I didn't know that you wrote this. o3o This does seem like a poem more than a general story for sure, but I like how much you were able to get across in just about 31 words. :3
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July 26, 2012, 12:50 PM #5A spidery 8itch.
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Re: Mask.
This def belongs in Poetry, but it was definitely interesting! Good choice of wording and emotion.
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July 26, 2012, 03:50 PM #6Spectrum
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Re: Mask.
It reminded me of John Blake and his little monologue to Bruce in TDKR
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