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    Default Light and Dark

    I look Up,
    See a Light,
    I Reach for It,
    And It slips away.

    I follow It,
    Drawn to the Light,
    Grasping Desperately,
    For I am Afraid,
    Fearful of the Dark.

    When, Finally,
    I take Hold of the Light,
    I look Down,
    See My Shadow has Grown,
    For Darkness Feeds on Light,
    And Light on Darkness.

    How, then,
    Can I have only Light?
    I try to Run,
    But of course,
    The Shadow follows.

    If I were to Give In,
    To Accept them Both,
    What would Happen?

    I ask Myself this,
    But find no Answer.
    And how can I,
    When asking Myself?

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    Default Re: Light and Dark

    :3 i like it, gives me that riku vibe (not sure if its kh inspired tho) its easy to read for me like that other one to .

    i like light and dark parallels x] not sure why and this one was done very well.
    Last edited by Incognito; May 26, 2012 at 07:12 AM.

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    Default Re: Light and Dark

    Had to read this twice, to understand it better. I mean, I know the obvious that its "Light and Dark" But, paying extra attention to the words, helped me see, what I was missing from before. I gotta agree with Gram, on this one. Definitely gives it, a Riku related feeling, to it. How I missed that, the first time, I tried reading it, I don't know, though.
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    Default Re: Light and Dark

    Ah, it does have a Riku feel. Wanting the light and running from the dark, but finding you can't be without both.

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    Now that I look at it, it is very Riku-related. Didn't mean to do that, but hey, it just makes it more interesting (in my eyes, anyway).

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