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    MasterOfSinOblivion KHProdigy1's Avatar
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    a child's smile uplifts
    raising spirits and opens
    doors to compassion

    and opens valor
    that helps us reign in power
    to protect our home

    blinded by false hope
    deceived by the wicked ones
    angered and opened

    haiku practice.



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    I've always been a huge fan of Haiku's. If they are done right, they can really be wonderful. I think here, you did it quite well. Loved how these three haiku's were connected in a way.





 

 

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