Gypsy Hex

[Lonbilly]

So I felt like sharing this little piece I did in my Creative Writing class to see what you guys think. I think it's actually some of my good writing, since my Creative Writing teacher wants me to read it at the Gathering or Poets and Writers that Creative Writing has about every month. Anyway, critiques and such are welcome.

Oh, and my inspiration for this song was Hellfire from Notre Dame. =3

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Absurd witch, I hope you burn
the way your aroma scalds my skin
the way your eagle eyes used to pierce my heart
conjured me into the hell-fire
scorching; tearing me apart

You’re perched there, Maria
cress-crossed like a distorted tyke
preying off this poor man’s soul
those ruby eyes and raisin hair
making my pith beat savagely
you pulled me in and we danced
through the smoulder, laughing happily
until you buried me in your deviltry

Even nearly half a century
I can still see you sitting there
with the trees, flowers and rivers around
and how you’d hexed my world
drowning me in your fire!
never letting this old flame die
your magic won’t leave me even after all this time,
even after I had singed you
why won’t it be reversed and restore me
so I could leave your blaze reborn a man

Your demon magic won’t release its hold
why can’t it die and rest?
I feel it still on me as you dance around
grinning horrible as you cast your spell
but now it’s time for me to take revenge
as I grab you raisin hair and
force you into your own spell to burn!
And you will burn in this hellfire -
in your cursed camp for putting this minister to shame

Still, you dame witch
your spell won’t leave me alone
even after your spirit has passed on
The burning desire turned me to sin