Freestyle Rap Session?

[Healing Vision]

^This is just insulting.

The old school grind, with this phantom of the time line
Now I don't mean to interrupt, but damn kid please look at me with your head up.
This lyrical shit no one can interpret, don't bother to spit if you can't even aim it.
I'm not a man to tell lies, because what I'm reading is murdering my eyes.
Drop the disguise, here I pray that you realize,
You punks drop words that don't have a real cause, is it too much for you to follow my main clause?
Open your ears and intake the sound, listen as your being verbally pummeled into the ground.
Take it, let me know what your thinking.
I'll rip and run circles around you kids without even blinking.
We're the remnants of an age old legacy, disgracing it with an unruly tendency.
I radiate these rhymes on a different frequency, hoping to restore some of our long lost humility.
Working hard even still I surpass the limit, looking down at you now when are you just gonna submit?
Collapse goes the wall, getting pretty tired of this "so-called" free-for-all.
If you want a demonstration, then take note of my reputation.
I came out of the blue, I'm gunning for you, you that its true, and the hell if I knew.
If your feeling insane, then take note of the name.
Eyes on fire by my revolutionary division, the fuck if this thread didn't need some healing vision.

[TerraFTW!]

This might be the only one i guess ill ever make, soo ill try and make it as good as i can.

Uhh
From growin up on in Apartments
to livin in a van
I only dreamed of getting Fans, in the bands,
and With the right verse
Ill send all you hater faggots to the motherfuckin nurse
but first,
let me get things straight
I don't do coke, and i dont smoke weed
Wow i sound like a real muthafucking G
Yeah i know my rhymes aren't on par,
ill never be at the same point Nas and Em are
I feel bad for spending my money on shit like this
when i could be taking it out to the more needy kids
Now on to rest and the next point
when i say the war, you'll fuckin exit the joint
I fuckin hate how many of our troops are still in Iraq
When they know all there familys want is to bring them back
I got 3 relitaves who have died in this war?
I guess puting out thousands to die is what the president adores
And is it me or is Barack just a black Bush
putting more and fucking more men out there is what he is wanting to push
So imma end this shit, its getting fucking old
so please Rate, Hate, Debate this shit i've told.

[Kiro`Seijuro]

Oops, backtrack the stack to find out the facts
When all I can read are some rhymes that are whacked
I'd look back at you and bow with a tipped hat, but your life is so low that I won't even spit that
A click of a gat and you'd scat like the frat at an officer's bat taking time out here to step on your mat
Everybody out here has a voice, got a choice, making noise, finding joys
Like it's a toy for every single girl and boy and not a way to express what's best, wipe the dirt off your chest
As I pull your face from the mud, to turn around, pound you down, smear your frown across the ground
I'll take a crown while you fall down and parade your body around your town
Think I won't? Then don't. I'll make your head spin like you'll need an antidote
Or at least a note to tote around in your coat saying you sank like a boat
Down in a flow because you'll always know that when it comes to this show
I'm so hot that I glow

[sorafinalform]

The champ is here but not Muhammad Ali
I been gone for a while now it's time to bring da heat
Take a seat
Turn yo phones off and put me on repeat
I can help you get some girls and get off ya own meat
You can see ya boys fresh from his head to his feet
Now look at these other scrubs who thank i caint defeat
Leave yo chest open
Best believe a nigga gonna hit cha wit a two piece
Or face is open
Get a one get a two nigga den you gon see
My flight is so much higher my hits deadlier than bees
I shit yo hardest lines and i walk on top yo highest trees
The roads you drive on are cracks underneath my feet
I'm sayin that i am yo god if i wanted you'd be deceased HO!

Yea... The king is back homey!!!

Ready for a round two you hatas is slackin
Gimme sombody to crush i like da reactions
Beat cha wit ma fist now im bout to start blastin
Click click pow pow I see you da fastest
The bell done rang look like you late for ya classes
Don't worry homey i can school ya just take out glasses
I sho ya how to be real here's some hall passes
Step one show ya swagga now you wit da brasses
To be a silver you gon have to take over da masses
And dat would be the playas tryna hop on all da asses
Once you do dat take a break while trippin on acid
Real G's stay clean throw dem in da trashes
One step till you get to da gold
Gotta get yo paper start stuntin get a bank roll
Den flash it in da club make it rain on dem hos
Watch dem bitches pick it up and start yankin on all yo clothes
Them hatas gettin mad cause cause yo wrist ice cold
It's colder den outer space dats how da story's been told
They crowdin all around you time to get a little bold
Take ya fist put em up den trash dey ass like mold
Now you a gold
But i am a diamond
How you get so high?
Doesn't matter my swag is timeless
I'd love to give you details but then you'd be in the minus
Cause da ones that make it way up here are the toughest and the finest

The king has returned!!!

[Healing Vision]

Crack open book, now please take a look.
The viewers are shook, attention stolen by this crook.
You feel it getting heavy, well lets up the ante.
I'm breaking your egos like a rogue vigilante.
Respect for the world filled with stress, strife, and poverty
Steadily and gradually we're attempting to reform our economy.
Never have you been so blind, do you want me to kick it into rewind?
Come on lets reminisce, these lives we live haven't had a shred of bliss.
I cant even watch t.v. without the death of a celebrity.
Hope you listen to this melody, crushing whatever jealously you may of had suddenly.
I can so easily find comedy in the tragedy that is your piece of shit chemistry.
You can't even touch a hot issue, so many just died, think of the wasted Kleenex and tissue.
Its just sad.
Worst part is you don't even feel bad, are you mad?
Listen to what i've said, give it some time to digest.
If you can't even do that you won't make any real progress.
Its not about you, its about the majority.
Ironic how its all been voiced by this individual minority.

Come back with politics, economics, and social statistics.

[Endless Warrior Sora]

Im back in a flash like tha superhero
I dont makes sense like division by zero
I'm tha one they fear tho
Kick it into gear yo
Got everybody lookin at me like a bureau
Get at ya mafia style like Robert De Niro
Mass attack
But ya lack tha fact you cant attack back
Cuz I'm above you like Shaq
Yea I'm untouchable
Eat tha ignorance like a Lunchable
I said I'm unpunchable
Im in the stars like astronomy
Past the economy that oughta be better than it gotta be
But cause ima dreamer, people always take a shot at me
Not a piece but a lotta me
And theres nada to see

[Traskix]

its been a while...

so when u flashing that shine
what goes threw your mind
that pretty rock that stocks
or the head that it bops

hear that sound
it goes boom and pow
you fall to the ground
losing the breath that you held

but i'll help you up, spare a life
give you a hand, cuz thats how i am
now get that O2 in your system
that fresh air that cools within them

we can all use that rhyme, to save our lives
but nothing lasts forever
so i'll see you later

[13courtgarud75]

Originally Posted by zexion_org_xii

86,yep the best is born, now ima bless em like god on this forum. first off who said you can go first. i mean ur flow was...well lets not say, ok? so grab your purse, and just go away. hel stand there and say no way, but no one going to miss you like m.j. damn not another stab at him, i mean you, both lovers found with two fractured ribs, and torn limbs!

haha my friend would kick your ass if she heard this.

[Endless Warrior Sora]

Excuse me excuse me
cant none of yall difuse me
all you do is confuse me
im snoozing you're losing
girls cant refuse me
Cuz I be that new breed
And I am that whole tree while you are the whole seed
Ima serve you up now its time to feed
all you can eat but take heed
Othas bleed greed
Indeed
Dont follow them
Walk with ya own two feet
And yes it's a feat I made
Keep tha air fresher than Glade
Have the people sayin ooooooh thats a fade
But Im cut down my foes like a blade

[sorafinalform]

I use the rhyme you end wit and cut'em down like a blade
I hold both the jokers then i got the ace of spades
Im bout to squash yall in the game
like some roaches im the raid
Then i collect up all money
yea i be gettin paid
Im fresh just too fresh for you hatin pussy niggas
Run them hands i knock you out wit my finger on da trigga
Or a shovel for ya girl yea i really really digga
Then i'd smash her fuckin cheeks and blow my load right out the winda
Give me da gold
Give me da fame
Give me da price and i will simply go obtain
what i want from the game
I won't even give a name
I'll just take it out da frame
And leave the cashier wit my change
But those is fifty dolla bills
yea i only keep da hundreds
You think yo game is stupid but my shit is da dumbest
I come and hit the spot just to show you im the funnest
Den i leave and take da party just to show you who run it

[Endless Warrior Sora]

Hittin yall with pin point prescision
I have a dream, I have a vision
but let's not forget our mission
Still cuttin makin inscisions
Hatas cant help but listen
Yea it's like moths to the flame
They hate my name
and yet love my game
Driven em all insane
Still stayin on my grind
Throw my fears to the rain
It's time for the prince to reign
Cuz tha King's too old
And I'm to blame

[khallsta25]

I am forever they best they ever had

I'ma speak the real shit
all the way from the East side
spit out freestyle.Waz up .
I hustle so hard to be on top
no lie you can ask the niggas
who try so hard to knock me
out my feet.you know why.cuz i am
on the top.when you in the top.
you da main target like Barack obama.
Just keep on rockin like love bout to
knock you down.you might think i killing it in
this song like drake.See me at the club with
the bad chicks,with more money like
Bill gates.get like more than 50 daps in the club.
everybody know me.I am the fucking best forever
no lie i have already done it.Beat the world record.
I am a Rising icon.raise in the ghetto.came in the business
with attitude.no looking at me spitting it out like
nobody.I want all the shit ever.cuz this the life everybody ask for.




If you think this song needs something to add to it.or needs to be something that is missing i should edit or think.it sucks.or think it is alright,cool,and Awsome you can post it on this thread,or msg me,or post a visitor message on my profile.one day i think of being a rapper one day.

[Endless Warrior Sora]

its alright. Raps dont have to rhyme. But it seems more like a praising of yourself than anything else. It's good to do that to sometimes but metaphors are pretty cool. I'm not that great but you can ask like Healing Vision or sorafinalform or Trasix for thier take too....

[Traskix]

One big shot, its all you got
to that final blow, that'll show them whos
in control of this race
to see who'll get first place

I'm running faster as the heat increases
with the world spinning
and the challenge increasing
more and more people say "im the best!"
while i sit back and see what will happen next

Then something happens that makes everyone crashing
falling to the ground
but im steady and I don't budge
I get up fast and and head for that finish line

but really who will win this amazing race
when the crown is just a foot away
a whisper in the wind could claim it all
for that gold that shimmers
It'll say whose the winner

[khallsta25]

Originally Posted by Endless Warrior Sora

its alright. Raps dont have to rhyme. But it seems more like a praising of yourself than anything else. It's good to do that to sometimes but metaphors are pretty cool. I'm not that great but you can ask like Healing Vision or sorafinalform or Trasix for thier take too....

o ok thank........................