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Old June 6th, 2009, 10:05 AM   #1
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The Distance Between Us

I want to feel you in my arms
I want to hold you
I want to feel that eternal bond we share
The love that we have for each other

Oh the times I imagine you by my side
I think of the pleasant moments we can share
The glorious things we could do
The secrets we can share to each other

When I think of you, I look up in the night sky
Hoping that somewhere along that sky, you are there looking up at the same star as I am.
I hope that even if we are far apart, no matter the distance
We can always find each other through our love and the happiness we share

Babe, even if our love will go out sometimes, I will always stay true to you
I will never let you down, nor will I be untruthful
I will be honest with you as long as you promise me one thing
Never stop loving me, do that
And my love for you will stay lit
It will light, like a ever-burning candle with eternal flames.

The distance between us is just a number
Our love is endless, and it cannot be measured by numbers
This is truly how I feel about you
There is no end for my love for you.
Even if we are torn apart
Or even if you move far away from me, I will always love you until the end of time.
That is the true distance between us.
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Old June 24th, 2009, 11:06 PM   #2
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this so beautiful your a natural
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Old June 29th, 2009, 12:49 PM   #3
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Its more like a song than a poem but I love it :D
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Old June 29th, 2009, 02:20 PM   #4
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O.o a song wow, i never thought i had talent for songs..just poems xD
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Old June 30th, 2009, 09:48 AM   #5
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This is really beautiful and I agree with Chi-Chan.

In a way, it almost reminds me of the Basshunter song "All I ever Wanted".

Still really good!
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Old June 30th, 2009, 09:53 AM   #6
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This is really beautiful and I agree with Chi-Chan.

In a way, it almost reminds me of the Basshunter song "All I ever Wanted".

Still really good!
Thank you, but wow i never knew it could be a song too
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Old June 30th, 2009, 10:26 AM   #7
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>< man, wow, touching *grabs tissues* really good, and it seriously sounds like a really good song xDD you can you know feel, whats going on in it...hey, just carry on and your gonna do seriously great :D
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Old July 4th, 2009, 11:22 PM   #8
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lovely poem m8 gud job it reminds me of me and my GF Robyn.
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