LN: Oxdicon Rising 1

Brol · September 2nd, 2008, 12:33 AM

Brol walked along the quiet streets of Elmwood Park with his friends at his side. Cado, Khaios, Amy and Lisa all was what Brol needed. One day, Brol arrived at the High school, on the last day of school and found Large Army tanks destroyed the front of the building and was pushing his fellow students inside the tank.

Brol quickly took out his keyblade and slashed away at the tanks, trying to free his friends. Sadly, a squad of heartless and a Captain ambushed him and took him away in one of the tanks. Once he woke up, he saw that his prison was large than it appeared. It was no prison, it was a Factory. Three years have passed, as Brol's cheerful personality faded away and left him bitter and hated.

"Cell 19,827.......Prisoner 2, Gabriel a.k.a Brol Ruiz. Powers detained: Earth, Metal, Speed, Mind." Brol sighed to himself as he hung there on the wall, chained until he dies. Something about him is weird, there's a secert about him.

[ok im only doing this ONCE! no OOC here, and everyone starts off explaining where they are from and how they got capture and in Bubble's case, Where they're from and how they got to their high position.
any question.... PM me.]

haseo47 · September 2nd, 2008, 12:57 AM

Alex and his brother were walking to the station in Twilight Town to go to the beach. When they got to the beach there was fire everywhere and people were lyeing dead. The next thing he knew he was surrounded by heartless. His brother tried to protect him but his brother got killed. Alex tried to save his brother but he was taken away.

Alex sat in the corner of his cell. It was his 7th year in this Factory. Ever since he first arrived he has been made to fight to stay alive. He still cries every night since his brother died that day. He has been so close to just giving up, but for some reason he keeps going.

bubbles · September 2nd, 2008, 01:00 AM

Amaya was from a small town,it was trashed,dead,and deserted except for about 50 people that lived there.One day there was a tournament she saw it on a sign "looking for a tough person" it said.She did like to fight so she entered it.Then next day it was going on she fought tons of people,getting beat up,but she was still winning.The last opponet was up she fought her best and almost lost but she eventually won.The crowd cheered and hollered and a man came up to her "follow me," he said and she did.They got into a car he started to explain everything."You have been chosen to be the new warden at our prison," he told her.They drove off for a long time and finally they were there.

Hiroshi lived in a big city he loved it until one day.He was siting in his room working on some homework he had to do when he heard screaming from down stairs.He ran down and found 5 men in all black suits with guns."Come with us,kid," they said to him.He refused and ran to his mom and sister.The five of them walked over with their guns "if you come we won't shoot," another one said.He didn't want his family to get hurt so he had no choice but to go with them.He got in a small car and they drove to the prison.

Infinite Complex · September 2nd, 2008, 10:27 PM

lance miku stood at his post-near the prisoner brol. this one was to be treated as if he were deadly, even though his powers were gone. "time fer yer lunch maggett"he said. he set a tray near the prisoner and continued standing gaurd.

haseo47 · September 3rd, 2008, 01:55 AM

Alex looked up as he saw one of the other prisoners getting fed "HEY YOU! I STILL WANNA KNOW WHY I'M IN HERE..TELL ME!!!!!!" he stood up and ran to the door and held the bars. "TELL ME!!!" he was so upset he almost started crying as he was yelling.

Ralor Penwat · September 4th, 2008, 01:58 AM

After the disastrous Dariosal washed up onto the "lawn" of sorts. When he saw a figure dressed in black. He burst with scorching anger... literally. He approached the being only to be doused with the water he arrived in. He was held captive in a water cage that held only wood and oxygen. He engulfed the wood into his inner flaming body. He still had human organs, but he could live as a fire in harsh conditions. Oxdicon, being low on food given to prisoners, forced him to do so.
They also had a light brighter than the sun and a living door to eliminate my chance of escape. The walls were solid water for 8 feet, his "fire" would die by then. "Darn it!" he yelled, "Why the hell am I here?"

Infinite Complex · September 5th, 2008, 12:33 AM

lance walked in to see a person was supposed to be a living fire starter. he looked pathetic, or was that just because lance towered over him like a building? he looked down at the prisoner. "yer here 'cause yur a threat ta society" he said. he walked over to a row of bars where a man looked as though he were about to cry. "wimp" he said simply, and wlaked out.

Ralor Penwat · September 5th, 2008, 02:03 AM

"How am I one? You're the ones flooding houses, keeping inocent people captive, shall i go on?" His rage was so intense the water started to boil and even seperate. He had to calm down otherwise the atmosphere would spontaneous combust.

Infinite Complex · September 5th, 2008, 02:16 AM

"what did you say to me punk" he said, grabbing him by the collar. "its to the arena for you"

bubbles · September 5th, 2008, 10:44 PM

Amaya walked in just as he heard Lance trying to take a prisoner to the arena she walked over to them."No you will not take anyone to the arena," she said with an angry face."Get back to work!"

Infinite Complex · September 5th, 2008, 11:36 PM

"grrr.....fine. ill leave the punk alone fer a while." he said, slamming the man into the wall.

haseo47 · September 6th, 2008, 06:03 PM

Alex looked across from his cell and saw a guy chained up on the wall "umm...hello, ya still alive?" he looked at the prisoner and saw him move alittle "So, you don't wanna talk...ok" he walked back and sat in the corner.

Brol · September 6th, 2008, 06:23 PM

[Ahem.... Haseo and GFC... remember the 4 sentence post rule... lol and don't forget 2 posts per day..]

Brol looked up, he saw someone looking at him from the cell infront of him. Brol slowly took another breath, he was tired of pullin himself off from the wall. The chains that stuck him on the wall was place tight, until he was sent to the arena again. It has been said around with the guards, that there's a champion of the Arena, somewhere. Brol chuckled as he the guards were talking about it again infront of his cell. "Yea kinda new here but still, the Chump has to be this guy." said the Guard as he kicked Brol's cell. "There has to be a reason why this kid was alive for this long," The guard peeked into the cell. "Or cause he's freakin chained on the wall...but seriously why are.." said the first guard until the New guard knocked him out and took the keys. The New guard opened Brol's door, and slowly closed it behind him with the knocked out guard. He put the guard at the corner, and walked up to Brol. He took off his helmet and picked up Brol's cut up head," Tsh...pathetic, You've been here for HOW LONG? I escape the same day i was taken into some other factory."

The guard walked to the side walls and started pulling the chains, suddenly the chains returned to their positions in the wall. The man looked at Brol," Wha... You can use your power..." Brol took in another deep breath," I'm not leaving..." A alarm was set off, the knocked out guard turned on the alarm in the cell. The guard quickly started fighting the other guard until a strong fissure tripped them both. A large hole appeared in the wall, The man looked at Brol as he jumped out of the hole. "YOU ARE FREAKIN GOING INTO THE ARENA...BROL!" said the Guard as he began punching Brol. Just before more guards came in, Brol closed the wall and killed off the guard. The squad of guards looked at the guard, laying there bleeding tremendously. Brol looked down as he saw more and more guards enter his cell, he knew who was gonna come, and she isn't the best person to meet. He closed his eyes, and took another slow breath before coughing up more blood.

Infinite Complex · September 6th, 2008, 06:47 PM

lance walked in. "causin trouble are we?" he asked. he threw a flame at the man.

Brol · September 6th, 2008, 07:14 PM

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Originally Posted by guyfromcrowd

lance walked in. "causin trouble are we?" he asked. he threw a flame at the man.

dude im not kidding... make your posts longer or leave... cause im tired of keep telling you to do that... To be a good roleplayer... you need to follow the rules]

Brol looked at the guard, he looked familiar yet he didn't care. He turned his head to try and withstand the fire attack he was hit with. Brol didn't want to blow his cover, this factory is slipping. He screamed as the burns dug through his stomach and chest. It felt like the burns were slowly wrapping around his whole body, it was too painful for him. Brol began to tear as the pain didn't stop, he assumed that the Guard was still firethrowing.

[lol well i hit 2 posts...oh well i cant post until tomorrow... but that doesn't mean i won't check if everyone is following the rules...]