CUTIE. PATOOTIE.
Idea: People choose a FF Tactics portrait sprite avatar + battle sprite signature, according to their birthday/Zodiac sign. (This is after the TDKR hype runs its course.) Silly, or not? Your title reminded me of this idea I had -- so I thought, "Why not ask Elle?"
elle gives out lots of EXP for young poets hoping to level up, i understand
Still, you're capable of giving more than fluffy praise. That isn't to say that I'm not grateful for the fluffy praise--but that I'd like to fine-tune my Seussian skills.
pft I'm not capable of much, it doesn't take a genius to critique stuff on khi. but this will provide a challenge! i'll get started on a reply right away :3
Give me some nitpicky poetry critique, as you're one of the few who can. I'm trying to be super-simplistic, mind you. Nothing deep or esoteric.
(it's okay, i enjoyed it. good night, ordeith!)
They'll retaliate with more poetry: Every day is filled with strife, And I don't know what I'm possibly going to do with my life. This girl keeps talking my art down-- Making my face turn up in a big, sad frown. (That was a little cruel, so I'm going to stop now.)
i'll try to, if i can manage to wade through the temperamental artiste's defense mechanisms... <3
I don't want to sound uppity, but that's the reason why I don't visit Creative Writing. Keep on critiquing, lassie.
