Waah, I'm even later Sorry T_T. I tend not to realize that I have messages up here until...like eons later.
Uhm, the other problem to me finishing is that the my little ideas are only just that; little. I don't know how to work a meta idea into a big multichaptered fic yet, its already pretty effing hard to write the little ones.
And as for my English teacher, sadly, we're doing poetry right now(Eng 204: Intro to Creative Writing), and wont' be doing fiction till after spring break at the end of March.
Originally Posted by FadedSunrise
^Please, do tell!
I'm not well read enough to really know what's good.
If you have any suggestions of writing exercises/other practice for improvement, that would also be great.
My apologies, I'm late, am I?
There's a few grammatical errors (though that's not much of a problem, I recommend having someone else edit it just to be on the safe side) and there's a couple paragraphs that has a bit of the funny flow to it, perhaps it's the wording? example
He wasn't supposed to exist, yet here he was, placidly sitting on a couch and looking into a pair of adamant blue eyes. At least, those eyes should be clouded with pain, turned away in mistrust. He'd killed their teacher, worse, he'd as good as killed the both of them.
It's still very good, overall, like I mentioned before. Just a little more practice, and you'll be like, a god :D. What I like to do is read other books and if the writing's good enough, I shape it into my own kind of style. So basically, taking other people's style, and "playing" with it so you're comfortable while writing. We also have very good writers here, such as Smile, so you can ask them for advice. Your English teacher can even help, too. I'm not that good myself, if you ask me xD;
are you gonna finish, btw, because i wanna see the rest :c