Destiny's Fate -

[Angelsinflight]

good job Princess; it was really interesting. i wonder where Sora and Kairi are...

[Princess of KH]

[quote=Princess of KH;2322360] “Let us out of here you creep! I mean it!” “Yuffie, be quiet! You’ve been yelling that for the past thirty minutes!” “I don’t care! I’ll yell it for the rest of my life if that old wacAnna and Riku could here Yuffie yelling and Cid telling her to be quiet.QUOTE]

I'm sorry! I just realized that i totally messed up in that paragraph! I must of 'backspace'ed alittle too much! THis is what it's supposed to say : “Let us out of here you creep! I mean it!” “Yuffie, be quiet! You’ve been yelling that for the past thirty minutes!” “I don’t care! I’ll yell it for the rest of my life if that old wack-job doesn't let me outta here!" Anna and Riku could here Yuffie yelling and Cid telling her to be quiet.

So Sorry! Anyways, i got chap 6! Hope you guys like it! But if you don't; tell me what's wrong. Sorry it's kinda short, i'm short on time.

Chapter 6 : Through the Castle

"LET ME OUTTA...your'e not Maleficent. Hey, you're that Riku guy! And i have no clue who your friend is." Yuffie said. "Can you get us out of here?" Leon asked Riku. "I think so." Riku stood back some and his keyblade appeared in his hand. He pointed it at the lock on the cell door, a beam of light went from the keyblade to the lock, and the door swung open.

"Thank you, Riku." Aerith said as everyone walked out of the large cell. "Wait, where's Cloud?" Anna asked, seeing that he was missing. "He's not back yet. He left to finish some business of his." Tifa answered. "I know about that; I just thought he would be back by now." Anna looked at everybody. It was so unreal to her. She expected to wake up at any given moment, but she wanted this to be real so badly. Luckily for her, it was real. "This is Anna. She's from a different world called Earth. I'd like to explain, but we really need to find Sora and Kairi. Do you know where they are?" Riku asked.

"No. We haven't seen them at all. Are they here in the castle?" Merlin asked. "Pretty sure." Anna replied. "Okay. Me, Aerith, and Cid will go looking through the North part of the caslt. Tifa, Yuffie, and Merlin will go through the East part. Riku, you stay with Anna and go through the South part. We can meet up in the West part of the castle. Is that okay?" Leon looked at Riku after he finished talking. Riku nodded his head in approval. "Everyone except Riku, Merlin, and Anna have cell phones. As long as one person on each group has a phone, we can call eachother if something important happens. Merlin doesn't need a phone, and you can borrow mine." Aerith said as she walked over and handed Anna her phone. "Thanks." Anna clipped it onto one of her belts. "Only call if it's important, got it?" Cid mentioned; looking directly at Yuffie. "What? What are you looking at me for? I know the rules!" She said, a little mad that he thought he had to tell he something she already knew. "Let's go." Riku said as he ran off, followed by everybody else. When they reached the end of the hallway, they split up.

An hour or so had passed when everybody met up in the West part of the castle. However, Anna and Riku didn't show up. The others waited for around twenty minutes before Tifa's phone rang. She answered it quickly. "What? Okay, we'll get there as fast as we can." She closed the phone. "They found Sora and Kairi, but they're in big trouble."

[Princess of KH]

If anyone still reads this ff, sorry i haven't posted the next chap yet. I haven't had much extra time lately. & sorry if it's not that interesting. I'm not the best at writing stories. Like i said, does anybody even look in this thread anymore, let alone read the latest chap? If you do, let me know please.

[Angelsinflight]

i read it!! it was good.

the only thing is you should make your chapters longer. they're too short...

it was still good! i like it and i cant wait to see what happens to Sora and Kairi ^^

[Haku]

I've missed out once again on a great chapter.

[Lectori Salutem]

I was away for two weeks, but here I am again!

Try to make it longer (really!).
You can also try to make new pararaphs whenever someone else starts to talk. Or at least start with a new sentence. It makes it easier to read.

[Princess of KH]

Thnx! I'm happy that some pple still read this ff. It's a good thing you want the chappies to be longer, because I've typed up the next three chappies(that includes this one) at my house, & they are longer. This one's reeeally long. Anyways, here's chappie 6. Hope you like it!

Chapter 6 :

Tifa and the others ran as fast as they could to where Riku and Anna were. They turned the last corner to find Riku fighting a few heartless. Anna was standing farther away with a black staff in her hands. She stood still, hoping the heartless wouldn’t notice her. It seemed pointless, but was apparently working. Riku finished off the few heartless and started walking over to Anna. “What happened?” Leon asked as he walked towards Anna and Riku. Riku turned around and looked at him. Leon was going to ask if they were all right, but he shut his mouth quickly; Riku looked very upset.

“She took them.” Riku simply said, looking at the ground. Yuffie wanted to ask Riku what he meant very badly, but she was scared to. Luckily, Riku answered her question before she got the courage to ask. “Maleficent came and took Sora and Kairi!” He yelled, angrily. He walked over to the wall and punched it so hard that it left a dent. When he finally calmed down, Anna walked over to him. Tears were welling up in her eyes. A tear rolled down her cheek. She looked at Aerith and the others. “She came to take only Kairi, but Sora said that her had to go with her. So Maleficent took them both. She said it would be good to have both the keyblade bearer and the Princess of Light. I was going to tell her Kairi wasn’t the Princess of Light, but Kairi told Maleficent that she was. We tried to stop her, but she left too quickly.”

“You know how to get out of the castle, and we can find our way out. Meet us back in the city, okay?” Aerith said, knowing that Riku and Anna needed to be alone for awhile. Yuffie started to protest, wanting to explore the rest of the castle, but a glare from Leon told her that it was time to go. They walked off silently, feeling bad for Anna and Riku; also hoping that Sora and Kairi were okay. Once they were gone, Riku sat down and leaned his back against the wall.

“The one thing Kairi said she feared the most is being separated from the people she cared about forever. She’s probably terrified right now. This is my fault. If I would have kept an eye on Sora and her, they would probably be here right now.” He said. “It’s not your fault. Some things just happen. I’m sad that this happened, too. But they wouldn’t want us to take the blame for something that isn’t our fault.” She sat down beside him. “Don’t worry. In the end, everything will be okay.” She managed to smile, knowing that everything would be okay, even if it wasn’t at the moment. “You’re right.” He said smiling at her. He got up and held out his hand to help her up. She took it and stood up. She picked up the staff she had found and took it with her as they started walking out of the castle.

When they were about halfway through the maw; Anna suddenly stopped walking. “You okay?” Riku asked. “Yea, I’m fine. Riku…” She didn’t finish the sentence. She dropped her staff and suddenly hugged him. He was a little confused and shocked at why she was hugging him, but before he could say anything, Anna said, “Thanks for bringing me here. This is the best thing that’s ever happened to me. I, I might actually fit in here.” Riku felt a tear fall from Anna’s eyes to his shoulder. He realized that she must have had a hard time on Earth. He felt bad for her. Another tear dropped on his shoulder. Anna was about to let go when he put his arms around her. It was at that moment that he realized that he kind of liked her. “It’s okay, you’ll fit in fine. We should go back and meet up with everybody, if they’ve even reached the city yet. Let’s go.” So they stopped hugging and ran back to the city.

When they finally reached the city, they found everybody in Merlin’s house, including Cloud. “When did you get here?” Anna asked. She then realized he didn’t know who she was, unless the others told him about her. “We found him walking back to the city. He just got back.” Tifa said, answering Anna’s question. She seemed very happy.“We already told him about ya’ll, so there’s no need for introductions.” Cid mentioned as he typed on his computer. “You could at least look at them while you are talking to them!’ Merlin said, scolding him. “They know who I’m talking to and about! And why are you tellin’ me what to do again?” Cid said back, still looking at his computer. Anna giggled some. “We can talk outside.” Leon said. Yuffie stayed inside to try and get Cid and Merlin to stop arguing. Everybody else walked outside and shut the door.

“So, why are you here, anyway?” Tifa asked. “We need to get all of the heartless out of the worlds. If we lock the doors to each world once we get all the heartless out, then that should keep any more from coming in.” Riku answered. “Do you want us to help?” Cloud asked, knowing the sooner they got done at each world the better. “If you want to.” Riku said. “I’ll go with you two through downtown.” Cloud said, looking at Anna and Riku. “Leon, you take Tifa and Yuffie and go through the rest of the city. Aerith, stay and keep an eye on Merlin and Cid. We’ll meet up back here.” Cloud looked at Leon, who nodded his head in approval of the plan. Cloud wasn’t really looking for approval, but he got it anyway. Cloud ran off downtown, followed by Anna and Riku. Aerith went inside and got Cid and Merlin to stop arguing. Yuffie came out, and the three went off to fight heartless.

Within a few minutes of running, Riku spotted some heartless farther down the street. “Just stay behind us.” He said. He didn’t look at Anna, but she knew he was talking to her. She got behind Riku and held her staff with both hands. The heartless then spotted them, and ran towards them. Cloud and Riku charged at them, giving them no time to attack. “Get off of me!” Anna yelled. Riku turned around and stood still, totally shocked at what he saw. There were a few heartless around Anna, but she flung most of them into a building wall. She slashed about four heartless in half, and hit the remaining heartless so hard that they immediately died. What shocked Riku the most though, was that her staff was on the ground. In her hands, she held a keyblade. She looked at Riku with big eyes full of amazement. She stood absolutely still; stunned so much that Riku thought she might faint.

“Oh my gosh!” She screamed. Cloud had just killed the last heartless. As soon as Anna screamed, he turned around and almost started to charge towards her, thinking she was in trouble. When he saw that she was just standing there, he got a confused look on his face. “I have a keyblade!” Anna whispered, so excited that she could hardly breathe. “Did you just now get that?” Cloud asked, thinking that she had already had one. “Apparently, she did.” Riku said, still shocked. “You just killed about fifteen heartless. Did you know that you could fight like that?” He asked her.

“No.” She answered, in a barley audible voice. Cloud laughed a little. “From just looking at you, I thought you would have always been a great fighter.” He said. “Why?” Anna asked. She wasn’t asking him that to hear something good about her; she was really clueless as to why he would think that. She didn’t exactly have muscles made of steel, yet she knew that she wasn’t weak. “You have tons of confidence and determination; you can see it in your eyes. You won’t give in or give up, either. You have what it takes to be great at fighting. Now can we finish the rest of downtown?”

It meant a lot to Anna that Cloud would say something like that to her. He didn’t really talk a lot, so she was really surprised that he said that. “Really? I’ve never really fought anyone, or anything before. Well, I used to have fake sword fights with my brothers, and we used to have dart gun wars, but that was about it.” Riku laughed. It sounded like Sora and him when they were little. They used to do that stuff all the time. “Let's go. We can talk later.” Cloud said as he turned around and started running down the street.

“I noticed it in your eyes, too. The first time I saw you. Well, the first time I saw you, you were asleep. When you were first awake, is what I meant.” Riku mentioned to Anna as they ran after Cloud, looking in the alleys to see if there were any heartless. Anna blushed on the inside, but just smiled at him on the outside. She ran off towards Cloud. Riku smiled, too. When she smiled, you couldn't help but smile yourself. He then realized they were already quite a bit ahead of him. He quickly ran after them and caught up.

[Kairi3.0]

It really good you should become a writer

[Princess of KH]

Thnx! I have the second chappie typed on my computer already. It should be up asap after today. Unfortunately, i don't know when that is. But wait for it, cause it'll be good!

[Lectori Salutem]

much better than the last!

[Princess of KH]

I'm sorry i haven't put the next chappie up yet. I said it would be asap, and it's been, like, ummm, a long time since then. Im very sorry about this. i have two minutes on here before i have to leave, so i can only write this. The good news is that i have almost all of the rest of the chappies written. i had my best friend proof read them(She is a very good critic!) & she says they are extremely good. Don't know what you guys will think of them, but they have alot of twists and cliff hangers. I gotta go, but check this thread every once in a while for the next chappies.

[Lectori Salutem]

Don't worry, we'll wait!!!

[Haku]

I'm late again o_O, but awesome chapter otherwise.

[Princess of KH]

Uhh, somethin messed up. I thought i posted this chappie yesterday, & i appaerently didn't. This computer is so slow! I probably logged out before it could finish posting it. Anyways, you guys have every right to hate me. I am so bad at updating my ff! Ugghhh, it's not like i take forever to finish a chappie; i'm already done w/ the entire ff! It's just that i can't ever seem to get on a computer that has internet. If i had internet at home, i wouldn't have this problem, but, well, you get the point. So, here's the chappie that has needed to be posted for a long time. Hope you like it!

Chapter 8 : On the Gummi Ship

Once Riku had set the gummi ship to land on the next nearest world, he went in the back and sat down by Anna. “So, where are we going?” She asked. “Twilight Town. It’s closest.” He answered, looking at her with a dazed look in his eyes. There was something about her that made her glow. Kind of like Kairi, but a little different. Anna brushed a strand of hair out of the way of her eyes. She then went into deep thought about something, but Riku didn’t bother asking her what she was thinking about. She was so deep in thought that she didn’t realize that she was staring almost directly at him.

He looked straight into her eyes to grab her attention, but her eyes grabbed his attention. They were a light blue that had a gray hint, yet they were so bright. They were so full of confidence, happiness, and calmness that blended to make what Riku thought were the most beautiful eyes he had ever seen. Then, her eyes were suddenly filled with sadness. She broke out of her stare and looked at Riku. It was the first time he had seen her sad. Her eyes turned a deep blue as they welled up with tears.

“Will I ever see my family again? And, what about my friends? They didn’t somehow forget me, did they?” She managed to ask as she looked at he floor. She knew that he couldn’t answer those questions, but she still asked him anyway. “I don’t know.” He looked at the floor also. “My two best friends, Bethany and Emily are on Earth, and for all I know, they think I’ve been kidnapped. That’s if they remember me.” She said. Riku looked at her and tried to think of something to say. He wasn’t the best at helping girls when they weren’t emotionally feeling good.

“Do you want to go home?” He asked, even though he was scared she would say yes. “No, not really. I’m pretty sure I like it here better than on Earth. Besides, It’s not like you get to meet people in a video game everyday. I wonder if I’ll be in Kingdom Hearts three. That’d be so cool.” She finally looked up at Riku and the sad look drained out of her eyes, which took back on their normal color.

“It’ll be about fifteen minutes until we get to Twilight Town. Do me a favor and explain everything about us in a video game.” He said. So Anna started explaining about the video game. He listened intently; surprised that everything she said was in the video game had actually happened in the past year or so. When Anna had finished explaining, they had already landed. As the gummi ship door opened, Anna remembered something. “Riku, when you said I said your name, what did you mean?”

Riku remembered his dream, and how he had realized that it was Anna that had said his name. “Earlier on the day that I brought you here, I had a dream, and a girl said my name. When you said my name earlier today, I figured out that it was you.” He said, not really wanting to get in a conversation about it. “Oh, okay.” She waked out of the gummi ship. Riku walked out to find it looked exactly the same as it did the last time he was there. “Let’s go meet Olette and the other two.” She said, basically asking Riku if they could. He nodded his head. Anna ran alongside Riku to make sure she didn’t get lost, even though she pretty much knew her way around.

[Lectori Salutem]

I´m sure I´ve already read this chapter. Maybe it´s the rollback thingy....