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Old 07/05/08, 08:18 PM   #1621
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My story's back on track! Yay. Consider reading Cross roads of Existence. 23 chapters up. 23 was just added today. So, enjoy. Give the first page a read and if you like it, just keep on reading.
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Old 07/05/08, 08:28 PM   #1622
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Ok, so I've gotten this comment about a few things that I write, "Your characters seem a little flat", or something close to that.

What exactly does that mean, and how can I help it?
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Old 07/05/08, 08:32 PM   #1623
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I think it means that the character seems a little emotionless. You can fix that by using more description of their reactions, emotions, and thoughts.
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Old 07/05/08, 08:40 PM   #1624
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I was fairly certain I already did that. . .here. . .http://forums.khinsider.com/original...untitiled.html, read that, tell me where you think I went wrong.
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Old 07/05/08, 08:47 PM   #1625
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You put yourself in the fic? lol. Well anyways, the best characters always seemed like they'd come alive. If you can see their actions, reactions, and interactions in your mind as the story progresses, you should try to put that to paper as best you can.
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Old 07/05/08, 09:13 PM   #1626
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It's a bad habit of mine.

And I'll try to do that, just thinking of the age old "every action has a reaction" but thinking of interactions instead of well. . .anything.
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Old 07/07/08, 11:13 PM   #1627
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What's a good way to do dialogues formatting and such. I've been wondering how to put dialogue and all....so yeah, does anybody know? It'd be nice, cuz I need help/advice with that! XD
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Old 07/08/08, 09:43 PM   #1628
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Hello all, i'm somewhat new to the forum but I've psted the first couple chapters of my fic: Destined, in the lit section. If anybody minds, can you cruise on over and give me your thoughts?

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Old 07/08/08, 10:38 PM   #1629
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You know, I think I'll write up a guide on character building. It seems to be a problem a lot of people have here.
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Old 07/09/08, 02:11 AM   #1630
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Lol, character depth is one of my worst fields as well as commas.
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Old 07/09/08, 06:11 AM   #1631
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You know, I think I'll write up a guide on character building. It seems to be a problem a lot of people have here.
You're a genius at making guides. Stuff just comes to me, and it's dificult to put into words how.
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Old 07/09/08, 06:26 AM   #1632
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Personally, my stories start out as basic concepts that pop into my head randomly. Then, I usually flush out the idea by listening to music. So, I don't really have any inspiration that I'm aware of.
O.o Thats just how I am, I use to write a few stories here I wrote about 4 or 3 I think back then I just had gotten started writting and was a amatuer but I keep posting for a good time but no one ever posted, like I got a post or two then that was it my last one I kept getting posts everyone now and then but when I began wondering if I was just wasting my time I asked on the thread...no on asnwered so I stopped, this isnt written to make anyone sorry for me Im not that kind of person I just wanted to say how things were when I started posted my work here
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Old 07/14/08, 05:00 AM   #1633
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So where do you get you all get your inspiration from? Lol, sometimes I get some ideas for stories while I'm washing dishes or cleaning my room. Figures.
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Old 07/14/08, 05:12 AM   #1634
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So where do you get you all get your inspiration from? Lol, sometimes I get some ideas for stories while I'm washing dishes or cleaning my room. Figures.
mine comes from the many books ive read/games ive played/movies ive seen. as for when it comes... random intervuls.

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Old 07/14/08, 05:42 AM   #1635
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You're a genius at making guides. Stuff just comes to me, and it's dificult to put into words how.
I second that notion. Guiocob's guides have been lifesavers.
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