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| Ruler of Light Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: Somewhere on this planet...
Posts: 556
Rep Power: 2 ![]() | My story's back on track! Yay. Consider reading Cross roads of Existence. 23 chapters up. 23 was just added today. So, enjoy. Give the first page a read and if you like it, just keep on reading. |
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| | #1622 |
| Just Enough to Love You | Ok, so I've gotten this comment about a few things that I write, "Your characters seem a little flat", or something close to that. What exactly does that mean, and how can I help it? |
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| | #1623 |
| I Feel So Epic. | I think it means that the character seems a little emotionless. You can fix that by using more description of their reactions, emotions, and thoughts. |
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| | #1624 |
| Just Enough to Love You | I was fairly certain I already did that. . .here. . .http://forums.khinsider.com/original...untitiled.html, read that, tell me where you think I went wrong. |
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| | #1625 |
| I Feel So Epic. | You put yourself in the fic? lol. Well anyways, the best characters always seemed like they'd come alive. If you can see their actions, reactions, and interactions in your mind as the story progresses, you should try to put that to paper as best you can. |
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| | #1626 |
| Just Enough to Love You | It's a bad habit of mine. And I'll try to do that, just thinking of the age old "every action has a reaction" but thinking of interactions instead of well. . .anything. |
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| | #1627 |
| GAH! Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: Walking into a place called reality, leaving behind the memories of it all.
Posts: 2,365
Rep Power: 8 ![]() ![]() ![]() | What's a good way to do dialogues formatting and such. I've been wondering how to put dialogue and all....so yeah, does anybody know? It'd be nice, cuz I need help/advice with that! XD |
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| | #1628 |
| Disney Soldier Join Date: Jul 2008 Location: aboard the Black Pearl
Posts: 23
Rep Power: 1 ![]() | Hello all, i'm somewhat new to the forum but I've psted the first couple chapters of my fic: Destined, in the lit section. If anybody minds, can you cruise on over and give me your thoughts? Thanks. |
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| | #1629 |
| Organization Member | You know, I think I'll write up a guide on character building. It seems to be a problem a lot of people have here. |
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| | #1630 |
| Aveh made by me =D Join Date: Oct 2007 Location: That dark void between the World of Dreams and the Realm of Reality, uncertain of which is which. Age: 15
Posts: 1,121
Rep Power: 2 ![]() | Lol, character depth is one of my worst fields as well as commas. |
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| I Feel So Epic. | |
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| Virus | Quote:
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| | #1633 |
| Ruler of Light Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: Chaos Empire.
Posts: 612
Rep Power: 2 ![]() | So where do you get you all get your inspiration from? Lol, sometimes I get some ideas for stories while I'm washing dishes or cleaning my room. Figures. |
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| Ruler of Light Join Date: May 2007 Location: In the zone where normal things don't happen very often Age: 17
Posts: 619
Rep Power: 2 ![]() | Quote:
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| | #1635 |
| Nastia Liukin's Husband | |
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