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Old 07/22/08, 04:10 PM   #1
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Kingdom Hearts: The Second War

The Keyblade was a weapon created by Kingdom Hearts to protect the balance of Light and Darkness. It was the duty of the bearer to stop evils of the world from destroying that harmony. Ten years before Sora's first adventure, a great war broke out, eliminating the Keyblade Masters entirely. All the Keyblades were destroyed, only remaining as chains, which represent their former powers. Now the war is going to continue, a new hero will join Sora, Riku, and Kairi in the last battle. Not all endings are happy

Basics of the Story

Basically, this is my idea for Kingdom Hearts 3. The story takes place a year after Kingdom Hearts 2, and will feature the events of Birth by Sleep and 358/2 Days, though it will be my idea of the games. This work is entirely unofficial, and is my ideas of the upcoming games.



Sora: The hero of the story, who must lead the remaining Keyblade Masters through the final battles
Riku: A hero and friend of Sora who learns something important about himself.
Kairi: A hero and friend of Sora. She a Princess of Hearts. She plays a very important role.
Kaon: Another Key Bearer who joins Sora in the fight
Xehanort: A man who forgot his past, and turned to the darkness. He used the name of his former master, Ansem, and became a Heartless and Nobody.
Rem: The Dark Soldier of Birth by Sleep
Terra: A hero from the past
Ven: A hero from the past
Aqua: A hero from the past
#XIV:???
The Old Man: A mysterious old man who knows a lot about the Keyblade Wars.

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*PLEASE NOTE: If there are two chapter titles on the page, ignore them, because the real chapter title is listed here. I try to get rid of chapter titles that I don't want, but it sometimes doesn't work. So just ignore it.

7-23-08
Chapter 2 is up

Chapter 3 will be very long, and will introduce a new Keyblade master
It will also tell how I think Keyblade Masters are chosen.

7-22-08
I really don't have a lot of ideas for Coded, and I really can't expand on it, so you might see small parts that relate to coded, especially since its an in-between game that can be avoided in the series and still be understandable.

I will include Donald, Goofy, and the King, but they aren't going to be as important. The top list is the most important characters.

Instead of having 3 fan-fictions, I am going to have 1 that includes pieces of my ideas for BBS and 358/2 Days

Chapter 1 is up.

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Old 07/22/08, 04:56 PM   #2
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Sounds cool. I can't wait to see how this turns out. I like how you're kind of fusing BBS with KH 3.
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Old 07/22/08, 05:00 PM   #3
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Sounds cool. I can't wait to see how this turns out. I like how you're kind of fusing BBS with KH 3.
well, if i was to reffer to birth by sleep and 358, i would need fan-fics for those two, and i really dont want to, so i just want to combine it with this fan fic using flashbacks. The prologue is just excerpts from what will be in the fan-fic.
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Please get started on it
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Old 07/22/08, 07:15 PM   #5
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The Next Chapter is up. This is an example of how im going to tell my ideas of the events of bbs or 358
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Cool. I like it so far.
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Old 07/22/08, 07:28 PM   #7
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Not too bad, i'm interested to see how this works, but from the prologue and the brief synopsis, i'm going to keep tabs on this.
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Old 07/22/08, 07:49 PM   #8
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Awesome, its pretty interesting I think I will keep my eye on this. Great job d(^_^)b
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Old 07/22/08, 10:35 PM   #9
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This is my first attempt at a fan-fiction. I'm not sure when I'm going to post the next chapter, probably tomorrow. But please note, if your thinking its going to be like the games, you shouldn't read this fan-fiction, because Disney and Final Fantasy only play a minor part. Some worlds we never saw, but not a lot.

Here's a list of worlds I might include

Agrabah-Aladdin
Halloweentown-Nightmare Before Christmas
Hawaii-Lilo and Stich
Andy's Room-Toy Story
Olympus Colliseum-Herculese
Enchanted Forest-Sleeping Beauty
The Castle-Cinderella
Traverse Town
Twilight Town
The World That Never Was
Radiant Gardens-But its going to be much different than before.

Also note that the flashback sequences may not be in order, so you will just have to pay attention.

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Old 07/23/08, 01:55 AM   #10
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If it's a Keyblade War, then why are they going around to different worlds?
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Old 07/23/08, 02:20 AM   #11
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If it's a Keyblade War, then why are they going around to different worlds?
well, think of it this way. the great big battle in sunset horizon is the biggest battle in the war besides two other battles i am planning for. but there are battles to be held in different worlds. think of it this way, Sora fought many battles against Disney villains in KH 1 and 2 because he was at war with Xehanorts heartless and nobody. Remember the series of hollow bastian battles?

The war is between Xehanort and the Keyblade Masters, and Sora has to win small battles throughout the worlds. and also, the fact that Sora has to stop darkness. He also needs to contact the King (remember the letter).

Basically, the KW is taking place throughout all of Kingdom Hearts.
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Old 07/23/08, 02:42 AM   #12
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'kay. Is Roxas going to be in it? You can't have a Keyblade War without Duel Wielding Hooded Blondie Goodness.
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yeah. this is going to be combined with bbs 358, my versions that is. but 358 events will be all together, unlike the bbs flashback stories, which will be explained as the story progresses. but not all of my ideas are entirly original, some are things i believe in, others are things that i use because i don't have a theory on it.
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Make sure Roxas looks like he did in Another Side, Another Story.
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Old 07/23/08, 07:18 AM   #15
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Hmm, it's not bad, but the chapters could stand to be a bit longer. I didn't notice any errors, and it seems well written. One thing though, is that you need to work on detail. The story never sucked me in, because I never felt immersed in that world. Don't worry, detail is mainly about practicing and improving.

I look forward to reading more
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