Kingdom Hearts: The Fight For Exsistence

[1-up salesman]

Kingdom Hearts: The Fight For Exsistence

Prologue
For every universe, there is a brother world, filled with different happenings, but both inhabited by the same people. If there was ever a living soul who learned of his home-world counter parts, it would possibly lead to the destruction of all exsistence.

The worlds would die in flames, floods, and storms, and in the end, be swallowed into the darkness.

Everything would be gone, and nothing could bring the world back.

[The Dark Destiny]

hmmmm, this sounds like an interesting storie, I will look forward to hearing it!!!

[1-up salesman]

Thanks! I'll get working on the First Chapter.

[1-up salesman]

Chapter 1: Prowl of the Chasers


Blue, Grey, Red, and Black yellow-eyed creatures of every shape and size ran across the streets of the world known as The World That Never Was.

Any one that they ran into were destroyed and transformed into a creature known as a “Heartless.

If the Heartless attacked one of the creatures, it would be instantly killed.

The hordes of creatures growled and roared when the “Heartless” and other creatures known as the “Nobodies” would attempt to stop them from completing their mission.


A hooded man in a white cloak stared at the massive amount of creatures infesting.
“Ah, more and more are arriving.”

A man with long white hair in a blue jacket, and jeans appeared next to the hooded man.
“They’re still here, Enix?” said the man.

“Yes, Arkax. And more and more are arriving as we speak….Ah, what I wouldn’t do to regain my Keyblade….,” replied the hooded man.

“Yeah, there’d be a lot less of ‘em here.”


”..So..have you seen him?” asked the hooded man known as Enix.

“..No…” said the man known as Arkax.

“Arkax, time is short. We must find him soon.”


The creatures destroyed everything in their path as they continued their search.
For they are the Chasers, and they will stop at nothing to complete their mission.

[kazukifafner]

Hmm, it has potential, but I'll hold my comments on the story until it actually gets going. You might want to consider increasing the length a bit.

A few things I noticed:

1) Grey = Gray. LOL! I actually see this a lot. I have a feeling that this was caused by the show "Grey's Anatomy", but oh well.

2) Maybe there is a secret to this, but you shouldn't use tags like "said the man known as . . ." because it seems unnatural. Even, if this is a secret, you probably shouldn't hint at it this way.

Looking forward to more!

[1-up salesman]

Thanks! Well, I'm just saying that the man's name is Enix, or Arkax. The chapter would of been longer, but there's not much to it, ya' know.
Chasers are going around on a mission.
Two guys talk.

[1-up salesman]

Chapter 2: Xigbar


Arkax walked along the streets of Twilight Town. Suprisingly, it had not yet been overrun by the Chasers. Though, in the forest and mansion, the amount of Nobodies and Heartless were growing fast. “He’s not here… Where is he?!..” Arkax thought,
frustrated. “

“Of course!!!” he thought. “The mansion!”

Arkax ran down through the town, almost running into a man.

“Hey, watch it!!!” yelled the man as Arkax hurried through.

“There!” Arkax came to the path that lead through the forest and to the mansion.

He ran through, killing every creature that appeared to him with one slice of his sword, The Deathbringer.

He came to a stop when he stood before the gate to the mansion. To his surprise, it was bent, and wide open. “What happened here?” thought Arkax.

He proceed through the open gateway and through the door way.

“Now, where would he be in here?” In front of him were two stair cases. He ran up the left and proceeded went in the room to his left. He found drawings of the hero known as Sora on the walls and pictures of members of Organization XII. But there was noone else in the room. Arkax left the room and went through the doorway to his right. Inside was a room filled with books and in the middle, a table with strange markings on it in the center, with crayons lying next to it.

Arkax bent over to finish the markings but stood up again when he heard a noise that sounded like a portal.
“Arkax.”
Arkax turned around to see Xigbar facing him, his guns held up ready to fire.
“Xigbar,” Arkax said.

“Why are you here?” Xigbar said.
“Same reason as you. Searching for him.”

“Well then, I guess it’s my lucky day. I complete my mission in finding him, and I get to trash your scummy hide,” said Xigbar, pulling the triggers on his guns.

Spikes flew from the guns and into Arkax’s body.

Arkax gritted his teeth in pain, but then looked up and smirked. “You think that’s gonna bring me down, Xigbar? I’ve gotten a lot stronger than that.”

The Deathbringer appeared in Arkax’s hand, and he leapt forward slashing across Xigbar’s chest.

Xigbar grabbed Arkax’s neck while he was still mid-air and slammed him against the wall, knocking the books off there shelf and crashing down on the two. Still choking Arkax and holding him against the wall, Xigbar grabbed his gun with his other hand and shot at Arkax’s chest.

Arkax kicked Xigbar in the gut, knocking him away. Arkax fell to the floor, hurting. He stood up, the Deathbringer materializing in his hands again. But, a second sword also appeared in his other hand, Black Snake.

With both swords, he swung downward onto Xigbar’s back, with no mercy.

Xigbar rolled, dodging one of the blows. “You’ve got some nerve, doin’ that,” Xigbar said, wiping away the blood on on his lips.

Instantly, Arkax stabbed Deathbringer into Xigbar’s chest. Xigbar’s eyes widened, and he looked down at his chest, silent. He then, fell to the ground, bloody, and dead.

Flashing a cold smile, Arkax reached down and pulled the bloody sword out of the body and finished the markings on the table.

A large opening appeared in the floor, and Arkax came closer to see that there was a set of stairs, that led to a doorway.

“Looks like it’s my lucky day.”

[ShadowXIII]

Its really good. I'm definitly looking forward to the next chapter

[1-up salesman]

Seriously? Thanks. I was worried that noone was reading it.

[1-up salesman]

Chapter 3

Arkax proceeded down the stairs and through the doorway. “Finally, I’ll find him at last…”

He found himself in a hallway, where several Nobodies appeared. With one stroke of Black Snake, they disappeared. He hurried down the hallway and walked through another door way. He found himself in a room with a computer and some strange devices.

“This computer……”

Arkax sat down in the chair and looked up at the computer screen.
On the screen was a document labeled, Ansem Report. Arkax read the report, curious.

Ansem Report

My newest experiment has left me amazed. I, Ansem the Wise, have discovered anover dimension. It’s much like our own, but with different worlds and happenings. But…As soon as I learned of these alternate dimensions, I..I noticed strange things happening everywhere. And suddenly, I realized what I have done.

Someone learning of..other dimensions will cause the worlds to collide, and all time to change. And it will lead to…. The end of everything that ever existed.

Please..If you are reading this..please, find a Keyblade Wielder, and do everything you can to prevent this. I have left to try to stop this, but I fear that I can do nothing. If you value your life, find a wielder.

Arkax’s eyes widened. He thought that it could be fake, but..he had heard of Ansem the Wise, and he knew of his great experiments and achievements.

“I must find..a wielder…I must find…Him.”

Arkax left the room and continued through the hallways, until he heard another noise, just like the one that he heard before Xigbar attacked him.

He was now in a room that was a complete dead end. It was….strange. Everything was white, and in the middle of the round room was a round pod.

Arkax turned around to see- “Xehanort!!!” Arkax yelled.

[Lanydx]

Wow not bad keep going....or I'll have the dusks on you ...NOT.

[1-up salesman]

Lol, thanks!
25 characters

[1-up salesman]

Okay, I decided to make a sort of summary of the characters. here goes:

Enix- Who is he, actually? All we know so far, is that he is working with Arkax.

Arkax- A little bit more is known about him. He is working with Enix. His two swords, Deathbringer and BlackSnake, are all he needs to defend himself. He is determined to find him, but who exactly is that? And why are he and Enix trying to find that person?

Xigbar- A member of the Organization, who seems to have a grudge against Arkax. He died in battle against Arkax.

Ansem the Wise- A brilliant man, who has discovered another universe...and possibly caused Apocalypse...........

Him- Who the heck is he? All we know is that Enix and Arkax are searching for him. Is he a Keybearer?

[Lanydx]

Is it Sora or ,Roxas?

[1-up salesman]

Actually, I don't know myself. Could be, but I was kind of aiming for a fan-fic with some original characters. We'll see.