Good epilogue???

[cananthegreat]

I've started this kh story havnt thort of a title yet but i was wonderin if this is a gd intro???



The pain is too much , it ends now

It shouldve ended a long time ago , i sat here...dwindling the time away.

Must not live in the past , the past cannot be changed...not now

but the years i have spent lifetimes fleeting like seconds swallowed in the darkness of my heart.


Why did the keyblade choose me?


no , i dont care

I have seen the darkness in my heart

i'm ready

It ends now

[kazukifafner]

Well, this isn't an epilogue, but a prologue. They are similar in nature, but the prologue goes at the beginning, and the epilogue goes at the end.

Now, it's a little short for my taste (well written though), but this is a prologue, and the nice thing about those is that they don't really have a standard set for them. They can be a poem, a paragraph, something the length of a chapter, etc. It can be anything really. So, yeah, this is fine for a prologue (not much of an introduction though, since it doesn't really introduce anything).

[cananthegreat]

i kept on remindin myself not to give away the story

soz about epilogue prolugue